First lines - Page 4

Elenka · 09-30-2003, 06:50 AM

Feel free to use any or all of it. I'd love to make it bigger but don't have the time nor the incentive. I've got about eight pieces I'm working with and can't keep them all.

Tanoliel · 09-30-2003, 12:29 PM

Why would I use it? No, no, no--I'm trying to get you to expand it! Or not. It's good on its own. Will you post it at the entmoot anthology? (See my sig)

Elenka · 09-30-2003, 08:27 PM

But I don't want to expand it -- I've done all I can do. Make good use of it, any and all of you, and just give me a little credit. Please?

Katt_knome_hobbit · 10-07-2003, 04:52 PM

Quote:

Silently, she crept in through the window. The sun shining on the back of her head made her look like an angel. She landed with a fwumph on the piles of magazines and half eaten pizzas.
"How can you live like this?" she said to the mass of bed clothes in the middle of the room.
"Bugger off," said the heap. It was unknown if the voice came from the sleeping man inside it, or the actuall creature that was the mass.
"I mean really," said the girl. "You don't even LIKE anchovies!"
"Bloody Conscience comming in at all hours and telling me how to run my life."
Conscience smirked. "Well someone has got to," she said, and crawled back out the window."

Dya like it? It's the beginning of a book I'm writing.

Tanoliel · 10-08-2003, 12:11 AM

Hee hee...good thing I don't have that problem.

Tano

09-30-2003, 06:50 AM	#61
Elenka The Negative Soul of Entmoot Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Middle Distance Posts: 651	Feel free to use any or all of it. I'd love to make it bigger but don't have the time nor the incentive. I've got about eight pieces I'm working with and can't keep them all. __________________ W00T for the M00T!! War doesn't determine who is right - war determines who is left.

09-30-2003, 12:29 PM	#62
Tanoliel Eccentric Chocolate Crow Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Emerald City--Seattle, WA Posts: 1,861	Why would I use it? No, no, no--I'm trying to get you to expand it! Or not. It's good on its own. Will you post it at the entmoot anthology? (See my sig) __________________ Wisdom for Short Attention Spans...Ozy and Millie. It rocks. Food Of The Gods: 3,7-dihydro-3,7-dimethyl-1H-purine-2,6-dione Feed Me.... Another Online Dwelling Place... "All right, I confess. It is my intention to comandeer a ship, pick up a crew in Tortuga, to rape, pillage, plunder and otherwise pilfer my weasely black guts out." -Captain Jack Sparrow "The trouble with unknown enemies is that they are so difficult to identify." -Amelia Peabody Emerson "Most people obey the orders of someone who is pointing a gun at their head." -A.P. Emerson

09-30-2003, 08:27 PM	#63
Elenka The Negative Soul of Entmoot Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Middle Distance Posts: 651	But I don't want to expand it -- I've done all I can do. Make good use of it, any and all of you, and just give me a little credit. Please? __________________ W00T for the M00T!! War doesn't determine who is right - war determines who is left.

10-08-2003, 12:11 AM	#65
Tanoliel Eccentric Chocolate Crow Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Emerald City--Seattle, WA Posts: 1,861	Hee hee...good thing I don't have that problem. Tano __________________ Wisdom for Short Attention Spans...Ozy and Millie. It rocks. Food Of The Gods: 3,7-dihydro-3,7-dimethyl-1H-purine-2,6-dione Feed Me.... Another Online Dwelling Place... "All right, I confess. It is my intention to comandeer a ship, pick up a crew in Tortuga, to rape, pillage, plunder and otherwise pilfer my weasely black guts out." -Captain Jack Sparrow "The trouble with unknown enemies is that they are so difficult to identify." -Amelia Peabody Emerson "Most people obey the orders of someone who is pointing a gun at their head." -A.P. Emerson

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