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03-18-2004, 11:43 AM
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The Lovely Hobbit-Lass
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Bounded in a nut-shell
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Very cool. I think it would be great as a part of a bigger story, and certainly it's very intriuging (spl?) as it is. A small encounter- a single moment in someone's life, seperated out from the rest. I love stuff like that. Very cool.
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