A bit of my stories.

Lief Erikson · 05-02-2003, 02:51 AM

I don't remember whether Calenlassë’s good or bad; the story chapters are taking a while in coming and I'm reading the Wheel of Time very actively right now, which occupies my mind a lot in terms of storyline. However, she did strike me as a bit of a bully and a tad stupid.

I mean, those guards were just doing their duty. It was their job to watch for people, and when the traveler keeps talking back, it's their job to take action and impose their authority. If she's in charge of them, she should commend them for their service. The guards probably should have forced her to identify more quickly, rather than putting up with her impudence.

The descriptive quality was as good as ever. Still a bit longwinded for me, but still good

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05-02-2003, 02:51 AM	#25
Lief Erikson Elf Lord Join Date: Dec 2000 Location: Fountain Valley, CA Posts: 6,343	I don't remember whether Calenlassë’s good or bad; the story chapters are taking a while in coming and I'm reading the Wheel of Time very actively right now, which occupies my mind a lot in terms of storyline. However, she did strike me as a bit of a bully and a tad stupid. I mean, those guards were just doing their duty. It was their job to watch for people, and when the traveler keeps talking back, it's their job to take action and impose their authority. If she's in charge of them, she should commend them for their service. The guards probably should have forced her to identify more quickly, rather than putting up with her impudence. The descriptive quality was as good as ever. Still a bit longwinded for me, but still good .