Rune Lore

***Tessar*** · 05-03-2004, 09:07 PM

Well since Arat was so kind as to read it and give me some criticism on it, I decided to go ahead and make a post devoted to my newest story, Rune Lore.

Rune Lore

I'm just going to be putting it up on the website, and I'm not particularly looking for criticism, but if you want to give me some I certainly wouldn't mind having it

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I'll put a little post here every time I update it (or at least every now and then).

Right now I have four chapters up, and the plot line has just 'started'.

Arat-Falathion · 05-04-2004, 04:24 AM

Was a nice read thus far indeed

Arcala · 05-08-2004, 05:31 PM

I just finished reading your story, and I liked it very much. You've got some...er....grammatical problems (ie. comma use, using "loose" instead of "lose" , etc.) Good story. I hope you will continue writing!

***Earniel*** · 05-11-2004, 09:03 AM

Nice story!

One tiny remark: I've noticed you used 'Jannin forest' in the second chapter and 'Danin forest' in the third, but I got the impression they're supposed to be one and the same wood.

05-03-2004, 09:07 PM	#1
*Tessar* Master and Wielder of the Cardboard Harp of Gondor Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: IM IN UR POSTZ, EDITIN' UR WURDZ Posts: 6,433	Rune Lore Well since Arat was so kind as to read it and give me some criticism on it, I decided to go ahead and make a post devoted to my newest story, Rune Lore. Rune Lore I'm just going to be putting it up on the website, and I'm not particularly looking for criticism, but if you want to give me some I certainly wouldn't mind having it . I'll put a little post here every time I update it (or at least every now and then). Right now I have four chapters up, and the plot line has just 'started'.

05-04-2004, 04:24 AM	#2
Arat-Falathion A'mael Dalharen Eldarele Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Norway Posts: 707	Was a nice read thus far indeed __________________ Atharon, where heroes are born. A constantly evolving forum rpg created by Lief Erikson, Falathion and its players.

05-08-2004, 05:31 PM	#3
Arcala Elven Warrior Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Eating WAY too much peanut butter... Posts: 274	I just finished reading your story, and I liked it very much. You've got some...er....grammatical problems (ie. comma use, using "loose" instead of "lose" , etc.) Good story. I hope you will continue writing! __________________ "When I wake up early in the morning Lift my head, I'm still yawning When I'm in the middle of a dream Stay in bed, float up stream (float up stream) Please, don't wake me, no, don't shake me Leave me where I am - I'm only sleeping Everybody seems to think I'm lazy I don't mind, I think they're crazy Running everywhere at such a speed Till they find there's no need (there's no need) Please, don't spoil my day, I'm miles away And after all I'm only sleeping..." -from the Beatles' I'm Only Sleeping

05-11-2004, 09:03 AM	#4
*Earniel* The Chocoholic Sea Elf Administrator Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: N?n in Eilph (Belgium) Posts: 14,363	Nice story! One tiny remark: I've noticed you used 'Jannin forest' in the second chapter and 'Danin forest' in the third, but I got the impression they're supposed to be one and the same wood. __________________ We are not things.