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Old 12-26-2003, 05:35 PM   #1
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What makes a memorable story for you?

I think we've had a thread on what makes successful stories (bad as I am I didn't check *hides from mods*), but I was wondering what makes a story trully memorable for you, like the small things that make it beautiful?

I like it when the writer gets the unusual combination of a good ending, that closes off all the main issues within the story, but still leaves you with at least one thing to think about. I hate it when it ends and you are not satisfied, but I do like it if there is perhaps a subtle, unasked question for you to think on.

As a writer myself, and a language student I love beautiful descriptions, and think good description is an art form many have but don't quite get to it because they over or under work it. I always remember the quote "don't tell them the story, show them." If you show someone something then they see what is there in its simplicity.

And with that, a simple but strong story line is always best.

Anyone have any opinions? Or examples of things they loved?
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Old 01-10-2004, 04:04 PM   #2
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A story is memorable for me when I become so caught up in it that I can't -and won't- put it down before I read it through entirely. And when I've finished it, I put down the book, sigh and say "Wow!".

A memorable story is the sort of story which you can't ban from your mind as soon as you've read the words 'the end'. You keep thinking and thinking about it for several days, analysing and wondering about the plottwists and motives.

It's when you no longer see the words that make up the story but that you read without actually realising, and not even noticing that your turning the pages, and when you're seeing the scenes before your mind's eye.

The fine line between enough description and too much is a fine one, but once you've learned just how much is needed (some writers never learn IMO) it adds a whole new dimension to the tale you want to tell.
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It's when you no longer see the words that make up the story but that you read without actually realising, and not even noticing that your turning the pages, and when you're seeing the scenes before your mind's eye.
I agree. This is absolutely key for me. I usually do this with a good, well written book. The story will not be memorable for me if I can't do this.

Also, if I can identify with the characters, and am moved by events and surprised by the plot.

I find Terry Brooks and memorable and suspenseful writer, for example.

The ultimate test is if I read the book more than once, feeling the desire to 'relive' that world.
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