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Old 03-31-2009, 01:55 PM   #1
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Songs of the Noble Elf Lord

Here's the haiku meter lyric piece.

A Beast's Dream

Cherry blossoms with
Their lulling scent so
Sweet, calling me

The Summoning will
Begin when the Moon is
Full - Dark Hour

There is prey
To be caught while we
Wait in the black

A sable delight,
Crimsonness dripping here
Tongue-to-tongue

And yet this Beast
Longs for the warmth of love
Hopes and despairs

The girl, she who left
Was the beauty and the right
With her went life

From bitter ashes
Rose high up the Phoenix
Of Forgiveness


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Old 04-01-2009, 03:51 AM   #2
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*sigh* It sounds nice, but I am one of the people who just don't get it when it isn't spelled out for them.
What are you saying?
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Old 04-02-2009, 12:22 PM   #3
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Old 04-14-2009, 10:56 AM   #4
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How The Snake Lusts

Littering the world with ending rhapsody
This airborne maelstrom, lyrics' parody
Riding on the hoarse tongue of my heard-not voice

Cores of Inferno and Eden, through me once
And twice, thrice, fornever ceases the spongal sucking
Of Heaven n Hell to and fro, final dance

Storm masked in Sun's feathers
Bearing only so many morrows
Once upons begin with So longs
Blank dark whiteness my womb'n'tomb

"We are lucky to have but few like me,
Don't you agree?"

(chorus) How the Snake lusts for a first dance
To sacrifice it's virgin skin for the living
How it dreams for other existance
Than this wendigo, a blizzardic being

"With no more to say,
There's no need to pray -
I'm going straight to your damnation
I chose the wrong reality, eh?"

Waltzing with snow flakes guarding my crypt-in-life-
The world, A Swamp of Sins - the midwife
For the Beast's last breath
Every birth - a cotdeath

Marching in rank and file with dreams
Only will happen ere mortality
A war of feelings must of necessity
Stream as chaotic waves

Laying on ice from my own heart
Worthless blood, mocked words
From me again part
Grant me my deathwish and rid this world of me!

(c)

"Upon melting, a frozen heart is like the sea:
Deep, unreliable, and unpredictable. Crying cleans it,
But the ocean dies - a worthy choice for me."

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