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Old 04-20-2006, 09:53 PM   #121
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Old 04-27-2006, 01:43 PM   #122
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so hows everyones novels going for them?
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Old 04-28-2006, 11:38 AM   #123
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so hows everyones novels going for them?
I changed my whole story in one of my books.
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Old 04-30-2006, 06:46 PM   #124
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I changed my whole story in one of my books.
Do you regret it or do you like the change?
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Old 04-30-2006, 10:11 PM   #125
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Old 05-01-2006, 02:07 PM   #126
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Do you regret it or do you like the change?
I like the change but it is a bit sad leaving behind some of the characters. They may find there way into another story.
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The axes hewed Forlong as he fought alone and unhorsed; and both Duilin of Morthond and his brother were trampled to death when they assailed the mumakil,leading their bowmen close to shoot at the eyes of the monsters. Neither Hirluin the fair would return to Pinnath Gelin, nor Grimbold to Grimslade, nor Halbarad to the northlands,dour-handed Ranger.

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Old 05-01-2006, 07:05 PM   #127
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so hows everyones novels going for them?
Well I'm suffering from writer's Block on one and I'm rewriting the other.
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Old 05-03-2006, 12:14 PM   #128
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I changed my whole story in one of my books.
i hope its still working out for you
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Old 05-03-2006, 12:16 PM   #129
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Well I'm suffering from writer's Block on one and I'm rewriting the other.
urg writer's block! god i hate that...well i hope you get some ideas soon...thats too bad..i hope the rewriting goes well for you.
so far what is the story you are rewriting about?
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Old 05-03-2006, 01:31 PM   #130
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it was a chapter and a quarter when I started rewriting it. It's about a peasent who leads a revolt against another kingdom that had conquered his home kingdom with the help of a swordswoman known only as the Night Hawk.

The one I'm having writer's Block on is set during the American Revolution.
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Old 05-04-2006, 01:31 PM   #131
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it was a chapter and a quarter when I started rewriting it. It's about a peasent who leads a revolt against another kingdom that had conquered his home kingdom with the help of a swordswoman known only as the Night Hawk.

The one I'm having writer's Block on is set during the American Revolution.
oh cool. they both sound really interesting and i'd love to know when you publish them
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Old 05-04-2006, 11:04 PM   #132
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The one I'm having writer's Block on is set during the American Revolution.
Hey, cool! I was writing one set in the American Revolution, but I set it aside to write my big, huge never-ending fantasy series. (I've finished three books in it, so far. And beginning a fourth)
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Old 05-04-2006, 11:25 PM   #133
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I like the change but it is a bit sad leaving behind some of the characters. They may find there way into another story.
i'm sure they will find their place in the book world. Mine tend to come back for another story anyway.
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Old 05-05-2006, 01:33 PM   #134
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Hey, cool! I was writing one set in the American Revolution, but I set it aside to write my big, huge never-ending fantasy series. (I've finished three books in it, so far. And beginning a fourth)
That is cool.
When are you going to get your finished books published?
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Old 05-08-2006, 12:44 PM   #135
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does anyone have any books actually published?
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Old 05-08-2006, 01:09 PM   #136
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I have some stuff I've been working on a lot recently. I should post some so you all can give me an honest opinion.
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Old 05-08-2006, 08:28 PM   #137
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Hmmm, not a bad idea
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Old 05-10-2006, 12:16 PM   #138
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I have some stuff I've been working on a lot recently. I should post some so you all can give me an honest opinion.
you should..its good to get back some feedback....is it just me or did that line sound confusing?
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Old 05-10-2006, 01:25 PM   #139
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No.
Stupid 4 character rule.
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Old 05-16-2006, 01:06 PM   #140
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hmm this book is getting the better of me..im spending most of my time on it and i dont think that is very wise...im still in grade 10
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