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Old 02-17-2006, 09:19 PM   #61
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I've got ideas for two books. Yes, still ideas. I've got the plot and everything. Just need to write it. That's the hardest part.
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Old 02-17-2006, 09:37 PM   #62
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I've got ideas for two books. Yes, still ideas. I've got the plot and everything. Just need to write it. That's the hardest part.
What genre?
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Old 02-17-2006, 09:51 PM   #63
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Fantasy and realistic fiction.
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Old 02-17-2006, 10:01 PM   #64
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Fantasy and realistic fiction.
REALISTIC FICTION! Pfff...A for effort. If this was my Star Wars RPG board I'd give you 10,000 credits, right, Rohirrim?
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I'm starting to think of some creatures for my book. But i have'nt got many ideas.
I believe there's a thread around here called "Bestiary", and it's got some inspiration if you want it. Don't copy, of course!
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Old 02-18-2006, 05:18 AM   #66
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I believe there's a thread around here called "Bestiary", and it's got some inspiration if you want it. Don't copy, of course!
Thanks, I'll try to find it. Don't worry i won't copy
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Old 02-18-2006, 07:38 PM   #67
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Definitely true. At least for me. I use best grammar possible, my problem is...well...consistency. Can't seem to remember certain aspects of my writing, and then if I change a part, I forget to change another, and then I forget which is more accurate, and it gets real hard.
Exactly. Get the idea down first, so you won't forget what you're about to write while you're trying to make the grammar and spelling perfect. I've done that before. I'll be trying to see which way the sentence sounds best, the when I'm done, I'm trying to remember what I was going to put next. Am I starting to ramble?
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Old 02-18-2006, 08:04 PM   #68
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I've got ideas for two books. Yes, still ideas. I've got the plot and everything. Just need to write it. That's the hardest part.
To get started, look at the beginning of your plot. Decide how you're going to introduce your main characters. The best stories begin right in the middle of some kind of action: look at the Star Wars movies. I think just about all of them begin with some sort of action scene. Particularly the beginning scene of ROTS.
Why do this? It gets the reader interested, and also helps you along as you write the scene.
Introduce your characters early, and introduce the problem soon after. For example, in LOTR you began with the party, introducing the new characters and bringing back the old characters, and then moved into The Shadow of the Past.
Start the heros on their quest, and move it from there. After that, make sure your plot builds to a natural climax, and then finish with the denoument: wrapping it all up and letting it come to a conclusion.
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To get started, look at the beginning of your plot. Decide how you're going to introduce your main characters. The best stories begin right in the middle of some kind of action: look at the Star Wars movies. I think just about all of them begin with some sort of action scene. Particularly the beginning scene of ROTS.
Why do this? It gets the reader interested, and also helps you along as you write the scene.
Introduce your characters early, and introduce the problem soon after. For example, in LOTR you began with the party, introducing the new characters and bringing back the old characters, and then moved into The Shadow of the Past.
Start the heros on their quest, and move it from there. After that, make sure your plot builds to a natural climax, and then finish with the denoument: wrapping it all up and letting it come to a conclusion.
That is very helpful for me as well. What kind of action I put in ZAQ-1 though is a different story.

No, that's not rambling. My writing, that is rambling.
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To get started, look at the beginning of your plot. Decide how you're going to introduce your main characters. The best stories begin right in the middle of some kind of action: look at the Star Wars movies. I think just about all of them begin with some sort of action scene. Particularly the beginning scene of ROTS.
Why do this? It gets the reader interested, and also helps you along as you write the scene.
Introduce your characters early, and introduce the problem soon after. For example, in LOTR you began with the party, introducing the new characters and bringing back the old characters, and then moved into The Shadow of the Past.
Start the heros on their quest, and move it from there. After that, make sure your plot builds to a natural climax, and then finish with the denoument: wrapping it all up and letting it come to a conclusion.
Thank you very much for that extremely helpful information! I never even thought about it that way.
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Old 02-18-2006, 09:07 PM   #71
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It's just some stuff that got pounded into my head from reading about how to write fiction.
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Well, hey, *becomes extremely mysterious and cryptic* I guess one doesn't have to go do a search for a website, when the one we need is the one right here that we've already got.
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What the...? You changed your avvie!
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What the...? You changed your avvie!
Yeah. I had to have something different for a while. I'm actually thinking of switching back though.
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It looks like strider8 found the Bestiary thread.
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I've got ideas for two books. Yes, still ideas. I've got the plot and everything. Just need to write it. That's the hardest part.
I'm always fooling myself the smae way. Not that there isnt something in those drives...its just that you have to obey them, even if you dont like the resluts of the movements your hands are making...and edit later.
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Yeah. I had to have something different for a while. I'm actually thinking of switching back though.
my permanent avvie use to be a pic of Berlioz, but then I made this little guy one day...and it just stuck. I never decided it was Beethoven or Berlioz...either way, he's the archetype romantic conductor.
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I have a question. Is realistic fiction a story that has made-up characters, but could actually happen? I can't find it in my dictionary...
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I have a question. Is realistic fiction a story that has made-up characters, but could actually happen? I can't find it in my dictionary...
Yes, and it takes place in a realistic world. Classic mysteries, such as Sherlock Holmes, are examples of realistic fiction.
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Yes, and it takes place in a realistic world. Classic mysteries, such as Sherlock Holmes, are examples of realistic fiction.
Thanks. But wouldn't the genre of Sherlock Holmes be mystery? Or it might be both... it really doesn't matter either way.
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