the Anti-Livingas - Page 2

Khadrane · 05-20-2002, 07:14 PM

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Oops! Sorry 'bout that!

That's okay. People have made that mistake before.

This is really good! I'm not going add anything because I'd just ruin it, but keep it up!

Elf Girl · 05-21-2002, 02:41 PM

Ack! You have to add! You're our GENERAL for Eru's sake!

***Khamûl*** · 05-26-2002, 11:04 PM

The survivors made their way onto the shore and continued the heated onslaught against the savage orcs. The Anti-Livingas was outnumbered many, many times over. At that moment, when everything seemed dark, a strange, shadowy figure appeared from the East. In the midst of the fierce battle, General Khadrane was heard to shout, "Who is it that comes unbidden out of the East? Is it our deliverance or our doom?" An answering voice shouted, "I am Khamûl, who comes in your hour of need to the aid of the Anti-Livingas. I and my army will fight with you until the end." And lo! behind him was an army of a thousand men. "Ride! Ride to death and doom!" And the army of Khamûl was upon the orcs like the ocean breaking upon the shore. And the orcs were greatly afraid, and threw themselves down and were slain by the combined forces of the army of Khamûl and the Anti-Livingas. When the battle was over, herald Menelvagor trumpeted forth the news of the victory. "On to Hollywood, to the completion of our mission," said Khamûl. "Why have you helped us?" asked Khadrane. "All will be answered in time," replied Khamûl. And the great war company made their way out of the San Francisco Bay and toward their final destination, Hollywood.

I hope that's good enough. I haven't tried to write anything like this before.

Khadrane · 06-02-2002, 10:12 PM

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Originally posted by Elf Girl
Ack! You have to add! You're our GENERAL for Eru's sake!

I'm sorry.

I'm just really no good at this kind of thing. I'll try to think of something, but don't hold your breath. You'd probably end up fainting like I did once in sixth grade.

05-21-2002, 02:41 PM	#22
Elf Girl Lurker Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Lothlórien Posts: 3,419	Ack! You have to add! You're our GENERAL for Eru's sake! __________________ There's antimony, arsenic, aluminum, selenium...

05-26-2002, 11:04 PM	#23
*Khamûl* Slacker Warrior Admin Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Alabama Posts: 2,759	The survivors made their way onto the shore and continued the heated onslaught against the savage orcs. The Anti-Livingas was outnumbered many, many times over. At that moment, when everything seemed dark, a strange, shadowy figure appeared from the East. In the midst of the fierce battle, General Khadrane was heard to shout, "Who is it that comes unbidden out of the East? Is it our deliverance or our doom?" An answering voice shouted, "I am Khamûl, who comes in your hour of need to the aid of the Anti-Livingas. I and my army will fight with you until the end." And lo! behind him was an army of a thousand men. "Ride! Ride to death and doom!" And the army of Khamûl was upon the orcs like the ocean breaking upon the shore. And the orcs were greatly afraid, and threw themselves down and were slain by the combined forces of the army of Khamûl and the Anti-Livingas. When the battle was over, herald Menelvagor trumpeted forth the news of the victory. "On to Hollywood, to the completion of our mission," said Khamûl. "Why have you helped us?" asked Khadrane. "All will be answered in time," replied Khamûl. And the great war company made their way out of the San Francisco Bay and toward their final destination, Hollywood. I hope that's good enough. I haven't tried to write anything like this before. __________________ "If the giving of information is to be the cure of your inquisitiveness, I shall spend all the rest of my days in answering you." Gandalf to Pippin Psalm 107:31