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07-20-2004, 03:03 AM
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Lover of all things orange and cheesy
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: On a smokestack eating my the chekt.
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I Wrote a Fanfic! ^^
Yes, it has finally happened! Anywho, I want to know what you guys think. Bring on the (hopefully constructive) criticism! ^^
Here's the link, since I don't want to have a post that stretches on into eternity... ^^ My Fanfic!
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El Poco Diablo is watching you...  It was like the Manifest Destiny all over again, except, instead of taking and consuming everything in their paths for God, they did so with the same fervor and sense of entitlement for their new god... themselves. If you want to know more about Jesus, have a prayer need, or want to talk about anything, PM me. Last edited by Gulio, Strength of Many : 07-27-2004 at 12:52 AM. |
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07-27-2004, 12:54 AM
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Lover of all things orange and cheesy
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: On a smokestack eating my the chekt.
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-sigh- No one cares about poor Gulio and her ickle fanfic. Thanks for crushing my hopes and dreams, guys!
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El Poco Diablo is watching you... It was like the Manifest Destiny all over again, except, instead of taking and consuming everything in their paths for God, they did so with the same fervor and sense of entitlement for their new god... themselves. If you want to know more about Jesus, have a prayer need, or want to talk about anything, PM me. |
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07-27-2004, 12:23 PM
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Elven Warrior
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: wherever my dreams take me
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That link didn't work for me before. It however does work now.
Anyway, I read your story, but I'm not very good at criticising... so I'll just say that I liked it and would like to read more of that theme.   Maybe someone else can help you out with constructive criticism...
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"We've got a wizard and we're not afraid to use him!" HOBBITS NEEDED! Some dwarves as well !!! |
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08-05-2004, 04:29 PM
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The Lovely Hobbit-Lass
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Bounded in a nut-shell
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Interesting. Very funny, at any rate. I can't wait until you get to "A diversion." Captain Obvious indeed.
btw, you are hilarious in text- "I ish da Queen..." Funny.
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