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10-08-2003, 06:44 PM
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Elven Warrior
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Here. For the time being.
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My story
So far I have an introduction and two chapters. I'll post the link here.
http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1132785
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XIAN- for hating Wiccans. MURDERER- for hating vegetarians. PREP- for hating Goths. These are a few of my favourite things, the hypocritical stylings of the most "liberal" groups. |
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10-08-2003, 10:32 PM
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Cardboard Harp of Gondor 
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: IM IN UR POSTZ, EDITIN' UR WURDZ
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This is a PG13 story guys. Just a warning for those of you who haven't read it yet.
I haven't gotten past the first chapter, but already some one died in a very disgusting way. Good stuff as far as I can tell, but not for the young or squeemish. |
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10-08-2003, 10:46 PM
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Domesticated Swing Babe
Join Date: May 2002
Location: Reality
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PG13! OMG! I'm too old for that!
 I don't think I can handle it. Maybe after a few beers..... 
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10-08-2003, 11:03 PM
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Cardboard Harp of Gondor
Join Date: Sep 2001
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Hummm... Well other than being very, very gross, that was a brilliant bit or writing.
I couldn't see many problems with it except that you seemed to get stuck on some words. The word 'Beryl' was one of them (however you spell it ). A different word thrown in every now and then would be good.I loved it! |
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10-16-2003, 05:50 AM
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Sapling
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Holton le clay,grimsby,Lincolnshire
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i am writing a book at the moment called dreams about... you guessed childrens dreams all from my own head. night mares and fantasies and the odd poem thrown in here is a little bit for u
He stole through white chapel road a knife glinting In his belt. It was midnight in the suburbs. He drew with a flourish his lockpick and the door slowly creaked open. He tiptoed upstairs saw the shape of a women in the frosted window he kicked the door open and drew the knife MURDER |
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12-31-2003, 01:01 PM
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Elven Warrior
Join Date: Mar 2003
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