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Old 05-14-2003, 02:43 AM   #1
Lief Erikson
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Originally posted by Nurvingiel
I liked your story, but why end it so soon? The characterization was good - hard in a short story - you could do more with it, explore the debate further. Though (and this is a comment on the story, not a religious debate) you could have put in a word for the more moderate Christians, of which there are many.
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I'm glad you liked the story . The religious debate wasn't the point of the story, which is why I didn't go into it deeply. Introducing a more moderate or a more informed Christian wouldn't help the story, for the point of the story isn't what's out there, or to inform people. The point of the story is more that Christians who don't know what they believe thoroughly need to get informed, because simply by not knowing, they can obliviously hurt themselves and others.
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