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03-04-2008, 04:06 AM
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Elf Lady
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: In the lands where mountains are but a fairytale
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I think you should IF it doesn't hurt the story to shorten it. But sofar I really enjoyed the story. It is accessible and fun. So whatever you do I certainly don't think you'll make a fool out of yourself by submitting it!
 
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