Discussion Thread for the Tale of Sky Blue - Page 3

Nautipus · 10-19-2007, 12:58 PM

Hmmmmmm.......

Neat. More to come like this I hope. Now I'm really drawn in.
*Actually falls off edge of seat*
That always happens!

Acalewia · 10-21-2007, 06:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Nautipus

Hmmmmmm.......

Neat. More to come like this I hope. Now I'm really drawn in.
*Actually falls off edge of seat*
That always happens!

*Giggles like a little girl at Nautipus sprawled on the floor*

Nautipus · 11-01-2007, 12:32 AM

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Originally Posted by Acalewia

*Giggles like a little girl at Nautipus sprawled on the floor*

AH! Plageurism!

(is that how it's spelled?)

T, man! Get to postin'! C'MON, DUDE, I'm waiting for another installment and I want it NOW.

Acalewia · 11-02-2007, 12:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Nautipus

AH! Plageurism!

(is that how it's spelled?)

T, man! Get to postin'! C'MON, DUDE, I'm waiting for another installment and I want it NOW.

It's not plageurism since I actually am female.

Nautipus · 11-15-2007, 11:20 PM

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Originally Posted by Acalewia

It's not plageurism since I actually am female.

As far as we know.....

T, Great post. I really liked Sky's little internal dialogue about the dwarf, made me gig-laugh! I said laugh, it made me laugh.

Although, I hate to think what kind of suspicion the group's going to com under now, after Sky's....outburst.

Acalewia · 11-17-2007, 01:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Nautipus

As far as we know.....

HEY!! What is that supossed to mean, buddy?!

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T, Great post. I really liked Sky's little internal dialogue about the dwarf, made me gig-laugh! I said laugh, it made me laugh.

*has a mental of Nautipus dancing a gig and laughing

* I asume that's what a gig-laugh is

Sky dialogue made me think, now that's something I would do

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Although, I hate to think what kind of suspicion the group's going to com under now, after Sky's....outburst.

One can imagine. Well, the little loud mouth had it coming.

Nautipus · 11-18-2007, 08:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Acalewia

HEY!! What is that supossed to mean, buddy?!

Just kiddin', take it easy.......

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*has a mental of Nautipus dancing a gig and laughing

* I asume that's what a gig-laugh is

Sky dialogue made me think, now that's something I would do

Just between you, me and whoever elso happens to read this thread, a gig is actually a small, squirrel-like creature that inhabits the plains of Russia.

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One can imagine. Well, the little loud mouth had it coming.

He really did. kind of a rude little twerp, aint he?

Acalewia · 11-18-2007, 08:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Nautipus

Just kiddin', take it easy.......

You better be

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Just between you, me and whoever elso happens to read this thread, a gig is actually a small, squirrel-like creature that inhabits the plains of Russia.

Ok I misspelled it. I was thinking Jig.

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He really did. kind of a rude little twerp, aint he?

Yep, no kinda to it!

Tuinor · 11-18-2007, 11:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Nautipus

Just between you, me and whoever elso happens to read this thread, a gig is actually a small, squirrel-like creature that inhabits the plains of Russia.

And just so that no mod comes in and says that you two're going off-subject I now plan to put a gig in the story... so keep your eyes peeled!

Acalewia · 11-20-2007, 01:22 PM

Glad to see college ain't killed you yet

How the hell did I get caught by the damn Rule?

Nautipus · 11-20-2007, 03:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Tuinor

And just so that no mod comes in and says that you two're going off-subject I now plan to put a gig in the story... so keep your eyes peeled!

Hey, good to see you here, you bird-brained son of a mothball! Keep postin' I'm gettin restless.

Tuinor · 12-02-2007, 01:28 PM

Okay, I know people are starting to get impatient with me, but I promise I'll have two new posts up soon.

The reason for there being two is that my mind jumped out of chronological order, and I wrote down a sequence that's too far ahead in the story, so I need to write another one to bridge the time-gap.

Anyways, like I said, I'll have two up soon, so I ask you to please be patient, and as always thanks for reading!

Acalewia · 12-03-2007, 02:20 PM

You mean I have to be patient? Rats!

Nautipus · 01-08-2008, 12:20 PM

Nice, T. I liked this last one. I'm really looking forward to more, seriously.

Acalewia · 01-09-2008, 07:25 PM

I loved these posts. Keep it up.

I liked the dwarf's reaction to his brother getting kicked: "He shoulda kicked you harder"

Nautipus · 01-29-2008, 05:53 PM

Wow, T. Very nicely done.
....that's all I've got, man.

Tuinor · 01-29-2008, 07:55 PM

Really? I didn't quite like this last one... The Elvish was fun to make, but otherwise it wasn't well-written, in my opinion. Still, it's really just a kind of stepping-stone to the real action coming up in just a few posts. It's gonna get insane, trust me.

Nautipus · 01-29-2008, 08:13 PM

I actually really liked it. I loved the internal conflict that's developing.

Acalewia · 01-31-2008, 12:52 PM

I really liked this post. The Elvish was cool. I really liked the internal conflict Aisha is having. Although, the fact that Aevor seems to be on edge is freaking me out and making me wonder what he has up his sleeve.

I think it's well written, Tunior. Keep it up.

Tuinor · 03-04-2008, 03:21 AM

Alright. New incentive to wrap this up soon: There's a creative writing exam being held on my campus for short stories (entries being between 20 - 40 pages in length). This one's at ~27. If I can bring it to an awesome climax within thirteen pages, I think I'll submit it. What do you guys think about me doing that?

I'm asking because I value all your critical opinions on it, and I wouldn't want to ruin the story for any of you if it meant slaughtering the plot in order to make it short enough to enter in a contest.

(It's only "if" I can do that... I had intended for this to turn out at least ten pages longer than that, ~50, so...)

10-19-2007, 12:58 PM	#41
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	Hmmmmmm....... Neat. More to come like this I hope. Now I'm really drawn in. Actually falls off edge of seat That always happens! __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

11-20-2007, 01:22 PM	#50
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Glad to see college ain't killed you yet How the hell did I get caught by the damn Rule? __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

12-03-2007, 02:20 PM	#53
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	You mean I have to be patient? Rats! __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

01-08-2008, 12:20 PM	#54
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	Nice, T. I liked this last one. I'm really looking forward to more, seriously. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

01-09-2008, 07:25 PM	#55
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	I loved these posts. Keep it up. I liked the dwarf's reaction to his brother getting kicked: "He shoulda kicked you harder" __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

12-02-2007, 01:28 PM	#52
Tuinor Elven Warrior Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Wandering in circles until they become triangles Posts: 292	Okay, I know people are starting to get impatient with me, but I promise I'll have two new posts up soon. The reason for there being two is that my mind jumped out of chronological order, and I wrote down a sequence that's too far ahead in the story, so I need to write another one to bridge the time-gap. Anyways, like I said, I'll have two up soon, so I ask you to please be patient, and as always thanks for reading!

01-29-2008, 05:53 PM	#56
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	Wow, T. Very nicely done. ....that's all I've got, man. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

01-29-2008, 07:55 PM	#57
Tuinor Elven Warrior Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Wandering in circles until they become triangles Posts: 292	Really? I didn't quite like this last one... The Elvish was fun to make, but otherwise it wasn't well-written, in my opinion. Still, it's really just a kind of stepping-stone to the real action coming up in just a few posts. It's gonna get insane, trust me.

01-29-2008, 08:13 PM	#58
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	I actually really liked it. I loved the internal conflict that's developing. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

01-31-2008, 12:52 PM	#59
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	I really liked this post. The Elvish was cool. I really liked the internal conflict Aisha is having. Although, the fact that Aevor seems to be on edge is freaking me out and making me wonder what he has up his sleeve. I think it's well written, Tunior. Keep it up. __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

03-04-2008, 03:21 AM	#60
Tuinor Elven Warrior Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Wandering in circles until they become triangles Posts: 292	Alright. New incentive to wrap this up soon: There's a creative writing exam being held on my campus for short stories (entries being between 20 - 40 pages in length). This one's at ~27. If I can bring it to an awesome climax within thirteen pages, I think I'll submit it. What do you guys think about me doing that? I'm asking because I value all your critical opinions on it, and I wouldn't want to ruin the story for any of you if it meant slaughtering the plot in order to make it short enough to enter in a contest. (It's only "if" I can do that... I had intended for this to turn out at least ten pages longer than that, ~50, so...)

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