Discussion Thread for the Tale of Sky Blue - Page 2

Acalewia · 08-14-2007, 10:17 AM

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Originally Posted by Tuinor

I just realized I that I copied the opening phrase from your Dragonmaiden Discussion, Acalewia.

I'm really embarrassed over that. It was unintentional.

No problem, Tuinor. I didn't realize that until you pointed it out.

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I remember that! I posted about Aen there. It's been awhile, though, since anyone posted there.

so long it took me a while to find it.

October of 2006. Man that is a long time!

Lief Erikson · 08-17-2007, 12:29 AM

I just caught up on what you've written so far, Tuinor

. A very interesting story still. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next . . . so

Sa'if was shot?

That was a surprise! A very unexpected twist.

Oh, one thing you may want to alter is the name of the princess. "Snow White" keeps making me think of Disney, with the silly cartoon character singing, "I'm wishing . . . I'm wishing . . . for the one I love . . . to find me . . . to find me . . . today . . ."

Don't make me think of that

. Your Snow White comes across as a much more serious and intelligent character, but her name keeps making me imagine the cartoon

.

Tuinor · 08-28-2007, 03:31 PM

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Originally Posted by Lief Erikson

Oh, one thing you may want to alter is the name of the princess. "Snow White" keeps making me think of Disney, with the silly cartoon character singing, "I'm wishing . . . I'm wishing . . . for the one I love . . . to find me . . . to find me . . . today . . ."

Don't make me think of that . Your Snow White comes across as a much more serious and intelligent character, but her name keeps making me imagine the cartoon .

I can't do that, Lief!

I'm sorry if it's ruining the story for you, but she's basically the reason I started writing this story. I wanted to write an alternate story to an old fairytale, so I picked Snow White and started writing about Sky. It stinks that this is ruining the story for you, though. Maybe I can eventually rename her (Like give her an elvish name or something) so that you're not always thinking of the cartoon. Until then, I'm sorry about ruining it for you.

Nautipus · 08-28-2007, 11:32 PM

I'm really likin' this story so far, iced T.

Im lovin the character developement and dialogue. Keep up the good work!

Lief Erikson · 08-29-2007, 01:59 PM

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Originally Posted by Tuinor

I can't do that, Lief!

I'm sorry if it's ruining the story for you, but she's basically the reason I started writing this story. I wanted to write an alternate story to an old fairytale, so I picked Snow White and started writing about Sky. It stinks that this is ruining the story for you, though. Maybe I can eventually rename her (Like give her an elvish name or something) so that you're not always thinking of the cartoon. Until then, I'm sorry about ruining it for you.

It doesn't ruin the story- don't get me wrong. I didn't know you were trying to write an alternative story to the fairy tale either. If I had, I might not have suggested changing the name. I just felt like the princess is a cool and serious character, and that name makes me think of the Disney, so giving her some other name would be something you might want to consider as a possibility. But this definitely doesn't ruin the story for me.

Lief Erikson · 08-29-2007, 02:04 PM

I just read your most recent post and look forward to hearing more

.

Just one note is that you may not want to have Aevor and Sky talk about what order Aevor will discuss these creatures in. It doesn't really matter at all what order he uses to talk about the creatures, so having him ask Sky what order he'd like to hear about them in doesn't really add anything.

Nautipus · 08-29-2007, 02:57 PM

I just read your last posts, T. I really enjoy this story so far. please keep going, quickly. I want more.

Now.

Acalewia · 08-29-2007, 05:35 PM

Wow. Keep up the good work, Tuinor. I'm literaly on the edge on my seat to hear about these creatures that will appear at some point I'm sure.

Lief Erikson · 08-29-2007, 07:58 PM

I'm also interested to see how they'll figure into events.

Wouldn't it be funny if the monsters never showed up?

Nautipus · 08-29-2007, 11:17 PM

Just read your latest post. It was a neat little history lesson. I'd eventually like to hear more about the mentioned nations, but maybe that will come later. I especially like how organic your characters are/were/will be. Keep it up, iced T

Acalewia · 08-30-2007, 11:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Lief Erikson

I'm also interested to see how they'll figure into events.

Wouldn't it be funny if the monsters never showed up?

That would be funny

Also nice twist about

Aisha being a Feral Elf

Tuinor · 09-14-2007, 09:51 AM

Hey, all! Sorry about not posting on here in a while. I've been real busy with college life, which is why I guess I haven't replied here that much.

Thanks a lot for the input, Lief! I'm glad that the whole story isn't ruined by Disney. *shakes hand angrily* DARN YOU, DISNEY!

Acalewia, I appreciate the support you've been giving as well, and I'm sorry I don't get around to posting about your stories (which have so far all been excellent).

About the twists, well: Good stories are like roller coasters, they're funner if you add more twists.

Nautipus... you're weird.

Just kidding, man! Thanks for the complement!

Nautipus · 09-14-2007, 11:43 AM

*Casts scathing look towards Tuinor*
I am not, and just because you said that, I am going to join forces with Disney, and lead an army of opium-addicted chinamen to desroy you!

Anyway, great section about the Feints. Seemed somewhat familiar

.
I rally am looking forward to seeing what they can do, and how your little troupe reacts.
BTW, thanks for finally posting! I've been waiting for more!

I also wonder, are we going to see these people who have had encounters with Feints? Where do they come from? What's their purpose?

For Tuinor's eyes only:

Where the hell a I!

Acalewia · 09-16-2007, 04:19 PM

Love the post about the Feints. I have a feeling that

Aevor has had an experance with a Feint. And I'm sure it wasn't very pleasent

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Originally Posted by Tuinor

Acalewia, I appreciate the support you've been giving as well, and I'm sorry I don't get around to posting about your stories (which have so far all been excellent).

Hey no problem. I understand about being busy with college. Although I haven't been.

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About the twists, well: Good stories are like roller coasters, they're funner if you add more twists.

I couldn't agree with you more.

Nautipus · 09-25-2007, 11:19 AM

I like this new post!!

FUNNY DWARF MAKE NAUTIPUS GIGGLE!

I thought it was really neat how you described the dwarf. And also about you-know-who. It really made my day to see how angry he was.

Funny, funny post!

Acalewia · 09-26-2007, 07:22 PM

Great post, Tuinor. Loved to see how POed who know who is.

Nautipus, are you giggling like a school girl again

Acalewia · 10-15-2007, 12:37 PM

Yay! You posted!

Just messing with you.

I want to know what the hell that was to make Aevor react like that. Btw, Aevor is becoming my Fav charactor. Just thought you wanted to know

Tuinor · 10-15-2007, 12:45 PM

Aevor's my favorite as well.

It's the mysterious aura he gives off. It makes him interesting to read/write about.

As to taking forever to post, well, pledging has been a pain all last week. This week, though I should have more time.

Nautipus · 10-17-2007, 11:13 AM

Well, hello.

This last couple of posts really has me going. I really cant say that Aevor is my favorite character or not......actually, you know what, he isnt! Ha! Take that!

Acalewia · 10-19-2007, 12:18 PM

Oooo! I like this new post. *sits on the edge of her seat, dangoursly close to falling

* So many questions

08-28-2007, 11:32 PM	#24
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	I'm really likin' this story so far, iced T. Im lovin the character developement and dialogue. Keep up the good work! __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

08-29-2007, 02:04 PM	#26
Lief Erikson Elf Lord Join Date: Dec 2000 Location: Fountain Valley, CA Posts: 6,343	I just read your most recent post and look forward to hearing more . Just one note is that you may not want to have Aevor and Sky talk about what order Aevor will discuss these creatures in. It doesn't really matter at all what order he uses to talk about the creatures, so having him ask Sky what order he'd like to hear about them in doesn't really add anything. __________________ If the world has indeed, as I have said, been built of sorrow, it has been built by the hands of love, because in no other way could the soul of man, for whom the world was made, reach the full stature of its perfection. ~Oscar Wilde, written from prison Oscar Wilde's last words: "Either the wallpaper goes, or I do."

08-29-2007, 02:57 PM	#27
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	I just read your last posts, T. I really enjoy this story so far. please keep going, quickly. I want more. Now. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

08-29-2007, 05:35 PM	#28
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Wow. Keep up the good work, Tuinor. I'm literaly on the edge on my seat to hear about these creatures that will appear at some point I'm sure. __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

08-29-2007, 07:58 PM	#29
Lief Erikson Elf Lord Join Date: Dec 2000 Location: Fountain Valley, CA Posts: 6,343	I'm also interested to see how they'll figure into events. Wouldn't it be funny if the monsters never showed up? __________________ If the world has indeed, as I have said, been built of sorrow, it has been built by the hands of love, because in no other way could the soul of man, for whom the world was made, reach the full stature of its perfection. ~Oscar Wilde, written from prison Oscar Wilde's last words: "Either the wallpaper goes, or I do." Last edited by Lief Erikson : 08-29-2007 at 07:59 PM.

08-29-2007, 11:17 PM	#30
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	Just read your latest post. It was a neat little history lesson. I'd eventually like to hear more about the mentioned nations, but maybe that will come later. I especially like how organic your characters are/were/will be. Keep it up, iced T __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

09-14-2007, 09:51 AM	#32
Tuinor Elven Warrior Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Wandering in circles until they become triangles Posts: 292	Hey, all! Sorry about not posting on here in a while. I've been real busy with college life, which is why I guess I haven't replied here that much. Thanks a lot for the input, Lief! I'm glad that the whole story isn't ruined by Disney. shakes hand angrily DARN YOU, DISNEY! Acalewia, I appreciate the support you've been giving as well, and I'm sorry I don't get around to posting about your stories (which have so far all been excellent). About the twists, well: Good stories are like roller coasters, they're funner if you add more twists. Nautipus... you're weird. Just kidding, man! Thanks for the complement! Last edited by Tuinor : 09-14-2007 at 09:53 AM.

09-25-2007, 11:19 AM	#35
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	I like this new post!! FUNNY DWARF MAKE NAUTIPUS GIGGLE! I thought it was really neat how you described the dwarf. And also about you-know-who. It really made my day to see how angry he was. Funny, funny post! __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

09-26-2007, 07:22 PM	#36
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Great post, Tuinor. Loved to see how POed who know who is. Nautipus, are you giggling like a school girl again __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

10-15-2007, 12:37 PM	#37
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Yay! You posted! Just messing with you. I want to know what the hell that was to make Aevor react like that. Btw, Aevor is becoming my Fav charactor. Just thought you wanted to know __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

10-15-2007, 12:45 PM	#38
Tuinor Elven Warrior Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Wandering in circles until they become triangles Posts: 292	Aevor's my favorite as well. It's the mysterious aura he gives off. It makes him interesting to read/write about. As to taking forever to post, well, pledging has been a pain all last week. This week, though I should have more time.

10-17-2007, 11:13 AM	#39
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	Well, hello. This last couple of posts really has me going. I really cant say that Aevor is my favorite character or not......actually, you know what, he isnt! Ha! Take that! __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

10-19-2007, 12:18 PM	#40
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Oooo! I like this new post. sits on the edge of her seat, dangoursly close to falling So many questions __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

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