I made a song!!!!! - Page 5

Arathorn · 03-12-2002, 04:57 PM

I can't believe you liked that one *wipes a tear from his eye*

I'm going to sleep and hopefully dream of talking trees....

StrawberryIcecream · 03-12-2002, 05:10 PM

I have tried. I just can't find inspiration. Maybe Arathorn can have a go, he's better at it than me.

Arathorn · 03-13-2002, 01:13 AM

Not really, but if you insist...
(though not from Moulin Rouge)

Mumak
(originally Woman by John Lennon)

Mumak I can hardly express,
My fascination like what Samwise says
After all you won't fit in any dress
And mumak I will try to express
My love for oliphaunts who remember no less
The fact that I do collect them, can you guess
oooh well, well,
oooh well, well,

Mumak I hope you understand
This little hobbit who thinks just like Sam
Please remember to bathe whenever you can
And mumak hold me close with your trunk
Even when muddy and though you stunk
After all we both walk like we were drunk
oooh well, well,
oooh well, well,

Mumak please let me explain,
I never meant(t) to show my shame or disdain
So let me pat you again and again and again,
I love you (yeah, yeah) now and forever,
Sam loves you (yeah, yeah) now and forever,

I love you (yeah, yeah) now and forever,

Sam loves you (yeah, yeah)....

Eruviel Greenleaf · 03-13-2002, 01:23 AM

LOL. That's great, Arathorn.

Arathorn · 03-13-2002, 01:27 AM

Thanks. Hopefully even Gollum under a mountain knows John Lennon.

Eruviel Greenleaf · 03-13-2002, 02:25 AM

Yes, very hopefully indeed.

Cirdan · 03-13-2002, 03:36 AM

..elven girl, you've been livin' in a elven world...

Eruviel Greenleaf · 03-13-2002, 03:44 AM

LOL, Cirdan. write the rest! er, yeah. anyway. I should go write some, except that a. I don't know very many songs, and b. I have to write a scene for school, and if I don't get it done I'm doomed. . .

Maybe this summer, after I graduate, if I don't end up with two jobs. . .no, I'll think of some more sooner than that.

Arathorn · 03-13-2002, 04:28 AM

Oh goodie! Another Billy Joel song! Please finish it Cirdan. I have another one that's bursting to come out like Ainur off Eru's thoughts.

Eruviel Greenleaf · 03-13-2002, 04:36 AM

Um, Arathorn, are you always online, 24:7? Sorry, it just seems like it. . .

I just decided to do one from Octopus's Garden. . .Galadriel's Lorien, or something like that. It might take me a while. . .especially considering I'm bad with getting the syllables and rhymes and stuff right in my songs.

Arathorn · 03-13-2002, 05:00 AM

Nope. But I have A PC that's usually up in the office. Also, I was just wondering the same about you.

BTW, here's another Beatles song:

Here Comes The One
By Arathorn
(based on "Here Comes The Sun" by George Harrison)

Here comes the One, here comes the One
And I say with Frodo
Little hobbit it's been a long dark daunting journey
Little hobbit it feels like butter on too much bread
Here comes the One, here comes the One
And I say unmake it
Little hobbit I know nazgul have hurt you dear
Little hobbit it seems like years since we left Bree
Here comes the One, here come the One
And I say it's your fight
One, One, One, here it comes
Gone, gone, gone, when he comes
One, One, One, here it comes
Gone, gone, gone, when he comes
One, One, One, here it comes
Little hobbit the blade of ice ain't really meltin'
Little hobbit it seems like fear is still quite near
Here comes the One, destroy the One
And I say yes that's right!
Here comes the One, destroy the One
Yes that's right! Yes that's right!

Eruviel Greenleaf · 03-13-2002, 05:07 AM

*claps* It's great! Yay, Beatles songs...

More music that I actually know.
And about being online constantly, I am, so I shouldn't talk. . .well, not quite constantly, but pretty often! Every chance I get, that is. Especially since last week when there was no school on Friday, so I spent literally all day at entmoot, except for going to the library in hopes that the books I put on hold were in (Unfinished Tales, two hoME books. . .)

StrawberryIcecream · 03-13-2002, 12:24 PM

hee hee hee!

Wow! I'm glad I started this thread!

Need a song to write. Any requests?

Glorious Glorfindel · 03-13-2002, 02:12 PM

urm, i think we should stick 2 beatles personally. Arathorn, u r pure genius u know! i might try a crowded house song, but im still working on the beatles!!

Arathorn · 03-13-2002, 02:49 PM

Thanks Glorfindel; though I wouldn't go that far.

Here are 2 songs by one of my favorite bands:
The Corrs!

The first is so perfect for Eowyn to sing to Aragorn that I did not touch it:

What Can I Do?
(The Corrs - Talk On Corners)

I haven't slept at all in days
It's been so long since we have talked
And I have been here many times
I just don't know what I'm doing wrong

(Chorus)
What can I Do to make you love me
What can I do to make you care
What can I say to make you feel this
What can I do to get you there

There's only so much I can take
And I've just got to let it go
And who knows I might feel better
If I don't try and I don't hope

(Chorus)

No more waiting, no more aching
No more fighting, no more trying...

Maybe there's nothing more to say
And in a funny way I'm calm
Because the power is not mine
I'm just gonna let it fly...

(Chorus)

Love me...

This next one I adapted from "Dreams" which was originally sung by Fleetwood Mac but revived well by the Corrs. It's a song I suppose from Saruman to Sauron. I call it:

Palantir Visions

Now here you go again, you say you want your ring back
Well who am I to keep you down
It's only right that you should send your wraiths to fetch it
But listen carefully to the sound

[Bridge]
Of the halfling steps
That draw closer and drive you mad
In the stillness of Barad-dûr where you stand
And where you lost
And what you had
And what you lost

[Refrain]
Thunder only happens when you're reigning
Ologs only love you when they're praying
Say, Uruks they will come and they will go
When the Ring-wraiths find the One you'll know, you'll know

Now here I go again, I see Palantir visions
I keep my visions to myself
It's only me who wants to wrap around your dreams and
Have you any dreams you'd like to tell

Dreams of halfling steps...
[Bridge]

[Refrain thrice]

You'll know, whoa-o-oa, you'll know

Cirdan · 03-13-2002, 02:51 PM

to the tune of "Blackbird" by the Beatles

Ringwraith riding in the dead of night,
find the magic ring and fly away
In your strife,
you were only waiting for this hobbit to arrive.
ringwraith fly, into the dark of the shroud of doom.

Ringwraith chasing after Arwen fair,
watch her speeding steed fade away
In your strife,
you were only waiting for this hobbit to arrive.
ringwraith fly, into the dark of the shroud of doom.

Ringwaith flaling in the charging wake,
leave your broken steed and learn to walk
failed your task
you will never catch the hobbit Frodo alive
ringwraith leave, into the dark of the shroud of doom.

Nariel Starfire · 03-13-2002, 02:54 PM

I have decided that someone needs to pull out the olde Abba. I'm gonna try to do some Queen, kay?

Glorious Glorfindel · 03-13-2002, 03:51 PM

im am sooooooooooooooo sorry 2 all those who read this post b4 i managed 2 edit it!
my sister managed 2 get on2 entmoot
its okay, i killed her already!

eowyn144 · 03-13-2002, 03:58 PM

errrr nice try gg!
someone definetly do some Queen!

StrawberryIcecream · 03-13-2002, 04:23 PM

i'll do some abba. And i might have a good go at we will rock u

03-12-2002, 04:57 PM	#81
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	I can't believe you liked that one wipes a tear from his eye I'm going to sleep and hopefully dream of talking trees.... __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures...

03-12-2002, 05:10 PM	#82
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	I have tried. I just can't find inspiration. Maybe Arathorn can have a go, he's better at it than me. __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-13-2002, 01:13 AM	#83
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Not really, but if you insist... (though not from Moulin Rouge) Mumak (originally Woman by John Lennon) Mumak I can hardly express, My fascination like what Samwise says After all you won't fit in any dress And mumak I will try to express My love for oliphaunts who remember no less The fact that I do collect them, can you guess oooh well, well, oooh well, well, Mumak I hope you understand This little hobbit who thinks just like Sam Please remember to bathe whenever you can And mumak hold me close with your trunk Even when muddy and though you stunk After all we both walk like we were drunk oooh well, well, oooh well, well, Mumak please let me explain, I never meant(t) to show my shame or disdain So let me pat you again and again and again, I love you (yeah, yeah) now and forever, Sam loves you (yeah, yeah) now and forever, I love you (yeah, yeah) now and forever, Sam loves you (yeah, yeah).... __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 03-13-2002 at 04:16 AM.

03-13-2002, 01:23 AM	#84
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	LOL. That's great, Arathorn. __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

03-13-2002, 01:27 AM	#85
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Thanks. Hopefully even Gollum under a mountain knows John Lennon. __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures...

03-13-2002, 02:25 AM	#86
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	Yes, very hopefully indeed. __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

03-13-2002, 03:36 AM	#87
Cirdan Elf Lord of the Grey Havens Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: somewhere else Posts: 2,381	..elven girl, you've been livin' in a elven world... __________________ There exists a limit to the force even ther most powerful may apply without destroying themselves. Judging this limit is the true artistry of government. Misuse of power is the fatal sin. The law cannot be a tool of vengance, never a hostage, nor a fortification against the martyrs it has created. You cannot threaten any individual and escape the consequences. -Muad'dib on Law The Stilgar Commentary

03-13-2002, 03:44 AM	#88
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	LOL, Cirdan. write the rest! er, yeah. anyway. I should go write some, except that a. I don't know very many songs, and b. I have to write a scene for school, and if I don't get it done I'm doomed. . . Maybe this summer, after I graduate, if I don't end up with two jobs. . .no, I'll think of some more sooner than that. __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

03-13-2002, 04:28 AM	#89
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Oh goodie! Another Billy Joel song! Please finish it Cirdan. I have another one that's bursting to come out like Ainur off Eru's thoughts. __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 03-13-2002 at 04:30 AM.

03-13-2002, 04:36 AM	#90
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	Um, Arathorn, are you always online, 24:7? Sorry, it just seems like it. . . I just decided to do one from Octopus's Garden. . .Galadriel's Lorien, or something like that. It might take me a while. . .especially considering I'm bad with getting the syllables and rhymes and stuff right in my songs. __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK! Last edited by Eruviel Greenleaf : 03-13-2002 at 04:37 AM.

03-13-2002, 05:00 AM	#91
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Nope. But I have A PC that's usually up in the office. Also, I was just wondering the same about you. BTW, here's another Beatles song: Here Comes The One By Arathorn (based on "Here Comes The Sun" by George Harrison) Here comes the One, here comes the One And I say with Frodo Little hobbit it's been a long dark daunting journey Little hobbit it feels like butter on too much bread Here comes the One, here comes the One And I say unmake it Little hobbit I know nazgul have hurt you dear Little hobbit it seems like years since we left Bree Here comes the One, here come the One And I say it's your fight One, One, One, here it comes Gone, gone, gone, when he comes One, One, One, here it comes Gone, gone, gone, when he comes One, One, One, here it comes Little hobbit the blade of ice ain't really meltin' Little hobbit it seems like fear is still quite near Here comes the One, destroy the One And I say yes that's right! Here comes the One, destroy the One Yes that's right! Yes that's right! __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 03-13-2002 at 06:03 AM.

03-13-2002, 05:07 AM	#92
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	claps It's great! Yay, Beatles songs... More music that I actually know. And about being online constantly, I am, so I shouldn't talk. . .well, not quite constantly, but pretty often! Every chance I get, that is. Especially since last week when there was no school on Friday, so I spent literally all day at entmoot, except for going to the library in hopes that the books I put on hold were in (Unfinished Tales, two hoME books. . .) __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

03-13-2002, 12:24 PM	#93
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	hee hee hee! Wow! I'm glad I started this thread! Need a song to write. Any requests? __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-13-2002, 02:12 PM	#94
Glorious Glorfindel Elven Warrior Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: im too doped up to remember Posts: 371	urm, i think we should stick 2 beatles personally. Arathorn, u r pure genius u know! i might try a crowded house song, but im still working on the beatles!! __________________ A Elbereth Gilthonial Silivren penna miriel o menal aglar elenath Na-chaered palan-diriel o galadhremmin ennorath Fanuilos, le linnathon nef aear, si nef aearon! add a drop of lavander to milk. leave town with an orange and pretend you're laughing at it.

03-13-2002, 02:49 PM	#95
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Thanks Glorfindel; though I wouldn't go that far. Here are 2 songs by one of my favorite bands: The Corrs! The first is so perfect for Eowyn to sing to Aragorn that I did not touch it: What Can I Do? (The Corrs - Talk On Corners) I haven't slept at all in days It's been so long since we have talked And I have been here many times I just don't know what I'm doing wrong (Chorus) What can I Do to make you love me What can I do to make you care What can I say to make you feel this What can I do to get you there There's only so much I can take And I've just got to let it go And who knows I might feel better If I don't try and I don't hope (Chorus) No more waiting, no more aching No more fighting, no more trying... Maybe there's nothing more to say And in a funny way I'm calm Because the power is not mine I'm just gonna let it fly... (Chorus) Love me... This next one I adapted from "Dreams" which was originally sung by Fleetwood Mac but revived well by the Corrs. It's a song I suppose from Saruman to Sauron. I call it: Palantir Visions Now here you go again, you say you want your ring back Well who am I to keep you down It's only right that you should send your wraiths to fetch it But listen carefully to the sound [Bridge] Of the halfling steps That draw closer and drive you mad In the stillness of Barad-dûr where you stand And where you lost And what you had And what you lost [Refrain] Thunder only happens when you're reigning Ologs only love you when they're praying Say, Uruks they will come and they will go When the Ring-wraiths find the One you'll know, you'll know Now here I go again, I see Palantir visions I keep my visions to myself It's only me who wants to wrap around your dreams and Have you any dreams you'd like to tell Dreams of halfling steps... [Bridge] [Refrain thrice] You'll know, whoa-o-oa, you'll know __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 03-13-2002 at 03:17 PM.

03-13-2002, 02:51 PM	#96
Cirdan Elf Lord of the Grey Havens Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: somewhere else Posts: 2,381	to the tune of "Blackbird" by the Beatles Ringwraith riding in the dead of night, find the magic ring and fly away In your strife, you were only waiting for this hobbit to arrive. ringwraith fly, into the dark of the shroud of doom. Ringwraith chasing after Arwen fair, watch her speeding steed fade away In your strife, you were only waiting for this hobbit to arrive. ringwraith fly, into the dark of the shroud of doom. Ringwaith flaling in the charging wake, leave your broken steed and learn to walk failed your task you will never catch the hobbit Frodo alive ringwraith leave, into the dark of the shroud of doom. __________________ There exists a limit to the force even ther most powerful may apply without destroying themselves. Judging this limit is the true artistry of government. Misuse of power is the fatal sin. The law cannot be a tool of vengance, never a hostage, nor a fortification against the martyrs it has created. You cannot threaten any individual and escape the consequences. -Muad'dib on Law The Stilgar Commentary

03-13-2002, 02:54 PM	#97
Nariel Starfire Elven Warrior Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: La La Land Posts: 309	I have decided that someone needs to pull out the olde Abba. I'm gonna try to do some Queen, kay? __________________ It is the failed skydiver who leaves an impression upon the earth. "But what about the R.O.U.Ses?" Yours Truly, The Tisroc -You forgot to say "May he live forever" -That's because I don't want him to live forever! - The Horse and his Boy--C.S. Lewis

03-13-2002, 03:51 PM	#98
Glorious Glorfindel Elven Warrior Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: im too doped up to remember Posts: 371	im am sooooooooooooooo sorry 2 all those who read this post b4 i managed 2 edit it! my sister managed 2 get on2 entmoot its okay, i killed her already! __________________ A Elbereth Gilthonial Silivren penna miriel o menal aglar elenath Na-chaered palan-diriel o galadhremmin ennorath Fanuilos, le linnathon nef aear, si nef aearon! add a drop of lavander to milk. leave town with an orange and pretend you're laughing at it. Last edited by Glorious Glorfindel : 03-13-2002 at 05:01 PM.

03-13-2002, 03:58 PM	#99
eowyn144 Elven Warrior Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 435	errrr nice try gg! someone definetly do some Queen! __________________ If you want to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe

03-13-2002, 04:23 PM	#100
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	i'll do some abba. And i might have a good go at we will rock u __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

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