I made a song!!!!! part II - Page 4

Ms. Undomial · 09-17-2002, 03:54 PM

thank you. but it is no where near a good as yours Arathorn!
you are a Expert!!!

Arathorn · 09-17-2002, 03:59 PM

Thanks. But I haven't been at it for a while now. I'm getting rusty, I think.

Ms. Undomial · 09-17-2002, 04:15 PM

Here is a funny little joke that I found on the internet:

Gandalf: "I am servent of the secret fire wielder of the flame of andor, you cannot pass!"

Balrog: "Gandalf..... I am your father."

Gandalf: *gasp* *faints*

Eruviel Greenleaf · 09-17-2002, 06:31 PM

As I said before, Ms. Undomial, good song

Oh, and clear out your inbox! I can't pm you until you do.

Arathorn...write some more songs, eh? Your songs are always good

Aeryn · 09-17-2002, 07:57 PM

I've read a few pages and I think they are funny
They are cute like my dear little bunny?
I hope I rythme
for this short time
to compliment the writers for their poems
so they may see it in their homes
???????????????????????????

Arathorn · 09-18-2002, 05:50 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Aeryn
I've read a few pages and I think they are funny
They are cute like my dear little bunny?
I hope I rythme
for this short time
to compliment the writers for their poems
so they may see it in their homes
???????????????????????????

Radagast The Brown · 09-18-2002, 02:26 PM

funny...

yeah. funny is the word.

Arathorn · 09-18-2002, 08:27 PM

It's by a 17 yr old lass named Avril Lavigne. Here's a version I did just now when I woke up in the office...

Frustrated
(Originally COMPLICATED by Avril Lavigne)

Uh huh, elves’re like this
Uh huh, uh huh, that's the way it is
While dwarves’re like this
Uh huh, uh huh that's the way it is

Sail out whatcha mumblin’ for?
Westward it's where they’ve gone before
And if you could only trust in me
Master Gimli
She likes you the way you are
When you’re calling her a star
and you're telling stories, dwarf to elf, that you’re in love

Some other elf yes another elf
You're watching your back you’re holding your axe
You're checking your tools you look like a fool at sea
Tell me

Why'd you have to fall for her you’ll only be frustrated?
I see the way you're acting like in Lothlorien well she’s just over-rated
Elves’re like this they
Well they sing while you crawl and they dream while you take what you mine and I don’t know what’s your destiny
and promise me we’re never gonna go regret it
no no no

You pass westward unannounced
Dressed up like you're not a dwarf
Those eldar in Eldamar you see
they’re teasing me
Head out don’t you strike a pose
Take off all those elvish clothes
You know you're not fooling anyone
when you become

Some other elf yes another elf
You're watching your back you’re holding your axe
You're checking your tools you look like a fool at sea
Tell me

Why'd you have to fall for her you’ll only be frustrated?
I see the way you're acting like in Lothlorien well she’s just over-rated
Elves’re like this they
Well they sing while you crawl and they dream while you take what you mine and I don’t know what’s your destiny
and promise me we’re never gonna go regret it
no no

Cast out whatcha mumbling for?
Pull back, the ship will reach the shore
And if you would only come with me
You will see

Some other elf yes another elf
You're watching your back you’re holding your axe
You're checking your tools you look like a fool at sea
Tell me

Why'd you have to fall for her you’ll only be frustrated?
I see the way you're acting like in Lothlorien well she’s just over-rated
Elves’re like this they
Well they sing while you crawl and they dream while you take what you mine and I don’t know what’s your destiny
and promise me we’re never gonna go regret it
no no

Why'd you have to fall for her you’ll only be frustrated?
I see the way you're acting like in Lothlorien well she’s just over-rated
Elves’re like this they
Well they sing while you crawl and they dream while you take what you mine and I don’t know what’s your destiny
and promise me we’re never gonna go regret it
no no no

Ms. Undomial · 09-18-2002, 08:45 PM

I love That one!!!!! It is the best I have ever heard!! THank you So much for writeing it!!!!!! I love It!!!

Radagast The Brown · 09-19-2002, 04:26 PM

I like your very short - I mean - your shortest song.

I really like it.

Eruviel Greenleaf · 09-19-2002, 05:37 PM

*grin*
I'm listening to Complicated right now while reading the song...

Great song, Arathorn!

Especially since I now know the song...*cheers*

Arathorn · 09-19-2002, 09:23 PM

The most difficult part of mangling a song is usually choosing which song to do.

After that, it's a matter of choosing a middle-earth theme and then losing yourself in that theme. 'takes about an hour or less...

I've learned that it's easiest to do all these when I'm happy, very very sleepy, sad or heart-broken; when my hypothalamus seems to be overpowering my analytic centers...

Elfmaster XK · 09-24-2002, 09:45 AM

Heh, not been here for a while! But that was good Oh great bard! I knew it too EG!

Anyhow, *stretches fingers* Here goes one from me. Parts of it are the same, but they fitted.

( Originally Iris by Goo Goo Dolls)

Ranger (from POV of Eowyn)

And I'd give up forever to touch you
'Cause i don't want to stay here without you
You just came into my life to leave
And I don't want anything but now

And all I want is me and you
And all I want is for you to live
'Cause sooner or later it's over
I just don't wanna be left behind

And I only want to come with you
'Cause I thought you'd understand
When everything is over
I just want you to know who I am

And I can't fight my fears that aren't coming
I never get a chance to anyway
When everything feels like a vision
Yeah, you need pain to know you're alive

And I only want to come with you
'Cause I thought you'd understand
When everything is over
I just want you to know who I am

And I only want to come with you
'Cause I thought you'd understand
When everything is over
I just want you to know who I am

And I only want to come with you
'Cause I thought you'd understand
When everything is over
I just want you to know who I am

I just want you to know who I am
I just want you to know who I am
I just want you to know who I am

There, i hope that's not too murderous to the original song! *sigh*

Arathorn · 09-24-2002, 01:58 PM

Great song, your's is as well, E XK!

Googoo Dolls will be having a concert here in Manila in a few weeks; and shortly after that, we'll have Oasis!

Here's one mangled from their classic:

They Don’t Easily Fall
(Originally WONDERWALL by Oasis)

This age is gonna be the age that they're gonna take the Ring from you
By now you shoulda somehow realized what those men could do
I don't believe that any balrog feels the way wraiths do about you now

Black heat, the orcs are on their feet coz the fire in your realm is out
I'm sure you've heard it all before but you never really had a doubt
I don't believe that any balrog feels the way wraiths do about you now

And all the fords we have to wade are winding
And all the wights that lead us there are minding
There are many tales that I would like to wail to you
But I don't dare howl

Because maybe
Those hobbits are the ones that end thee
And after all
They don’t eas’ly fall

This age was gonna be the age that they'll never give the One to you
By now you shoulda somehow realized what those elves could do
I don't believe that any watcher feels the way we do about you now

And all the scents that lead us there were failing
And all the lights that lead those two are blinding
There are many tales that I would like to wail to you
But I don't dare howl

I said maybe
That Gollum is the one that takes thee
And after all
He did take that fall

Because maybe
Those hobbits are the ones that end thee
And after all
They don’t eas’ly fall

I said maybe
Those hobbits are the ones that end thee
Those hobbits are the ones that end thee
Those hobbits are the ones that end thee

Radagast The Brown · 09-24-2002, 02:02 PM

nice...nice...nice....nice....ammm....oh....ok....

Eruviel Greenleaf · 09-24-2002, 02:06 PM

Great songs, E XK and Arathorn!

Aeryn · 09-24-2002, 06:12 PM

Well I heard an annoying song on the radio and decided to make it into an annoying middle-earth song. I can't seem to remember most of the words so I can only do the chorus but here goes

Fly like an eagle by Seal

I want to walk into Mordor
Oh those Nazgul follow me
I want to walk into Mordor
Let that Sauron set me free

Gotta feed those hobbits
Who ain't hadda 'nuff to eat
Don't gotta shoe no hobbits
Who got big leath-er-y feet
Gotta find that Gandalf
Who fell down real deep

Walk right into the Black Land.

Sorry if that was terrible.

Tanoliel · 09-24-2002, 08:53 PM

It wasn't terrible! Do try your hand at other songs, too...we always like more mangles.

Wonderful songs, EXK and Arathorn! *cheers*
Now someone PM and explain where from and how to download stuff so I can listen to the original song...rawr. Please? Thankee.
-tano

Elfmaster XK · 09-25-2002, 08:46 AM

Thanks!

Awww! I wanna go see goo goo dolls! Dammit! And Arathorn, you know Oasis are from my home town, Manchester! Are you ghoing to see them?

Which song Tano, or did you mean in general?

Arathorn · 09-25-2002, 03:28 PM

Yep. The girls here in the office wanna see Googoo Dolls while the guys wanna watch Oasis. I'm certainly gonna see the latter. I'll be sure to ask them if they know you, Xen.

Of course, I'm not sure if they'd hear me ask or whether they do know you.

09-17-2002, 03:59 PM	#62
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Thanks. But I haven't been at it for a while now. I'm getting rusty, I think. __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures...

09-17-2002, 04:15 PM	#63
Ms. Undomial Custous Sanctus Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: In your subconsicious.... Posts: 1,184	funny little joke Here is a funny little joke that I found on the internet: Gandalf: "I am servent of the secret fire wielder of the flame of andor, you cannot pass!" Balrog: "Gandalf..... I am your father." Gandalf: gasp faints

09-17-2002, 06:31 PM	#64
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	As I said before, Ms. Undomial, good song Oh, and clear out your inbox! I can't pm you until you do. Arathorn...write some more songs, eh? Your songs are always good __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

09-17-2002, 07:57 PM	#65
Aeryn Bank'ress of Sith Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: In a hot-hot place, heh Posts: 913	lovely I've read a few pages and I think they are funny They are cute like my dear little bunny? I hope I rythme for this short time to compliment the writers for their poems so they may see it in their homes ??????????????????????????? __________________ my new account name feigndeath. This one is deactivated, I think.

09-18-2002, 02:26 PM	#67
Radagast The Brown Elf Lord Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Israel Posts: 6,975	funny... yeah. funny is the word. __________________ Lalala... poof! AboutNewJersey.com - New Jersey Travel and Tourism Guide

09-17-2002, 03:54 PM	#61
Ms. Undomial Custous Sanctus Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: In your subconsicious.... Posts: 1,184	thank you. but it is no where near a good as yours Arathorn! you are a Expert!!!

09-18-2002, 08:27 PM	#68
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	There's a song everyone seems to be singing in the office lately... It's by a 17 yr old lass named Avril Lavigne. Here's a version I did just now when I woke up in the office... Frustrated (Originally COMPLICATED by Avril Lavigne) Uh huh, elves’re like this Uh huh, uh huh, that's the way it is While dwarves’re like this Uh huh, uh huh that's the way it is Sail out whatcha mumblin’ for? Westward it's where they’ve gone before And if you could only trust in me Master Gimli She likes you the way you are When you’re calling her a star and you're telling stories, dwarf to elf, that you’re in love Some other elf yes another elf You're watching your back you’re holding your axe You're checking your tools you look like a fool at sea Tell me Why'd you have to fall for her you’ll only be frustrated? I see the way you're acting like in Lothlorien well she’s just over-rated Elves’re like this they Well they sing while you crawl and they dream while you take what you mine and I don’t know what’s your destiny and promise me we’re never gonna go regret it no no no You pass westward unannounced Dressed up like you're not a dwarf Those eldar in Eldamar you see they’re teasing me Head out don’t you strike a pose Take off all those elvish clothes You know you're not fooling anyone when you become Some other elf yes another elf You're watching your back you’re holding your axe You're checking your tools you look like a fool at sea Tell me Why'd you have to fall for her you’ll only be frustrated? I see the way you're acting like in Lothlorien well she’s just over-rated Elves’re like this they Well they sing while you crawl and they dream while you take what you mine and I don’t know what’s your destiny and promise me we’re never gonna go regret it no no Cast out whatcha mumbling for? Pull back, the ship will reach the shore And if you would only come with me You will see Some other elf yes another elf You're watching your back you’re holding your axe You're checking your tools you look like a fool at sea Tell me Why'd you have to fall for her you’ll only be frustrated? I see the way you're acting like in Lothlorien well she’s just over-rated Elves’re like this they Well they sing while you crawl and they dream while you take what you mine and I don’t know what’s your destiny and promise me we’re never gonna go regret it no no Why'd you have to fall for her you’ll only be frustrated? I see the way you're acting like in Lothlorien well she’s just over-rated Elves’re like this they Well they sing while you crawl and they dream while you take what you mine and I don’t know what’s your destiny and promise me we’re never gonna go regret it no no no __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 09-18-2002 at 08:53 PM.

09-18-2002, 08:45 PM	#69
Ms. Undomial Custous Sanctus Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: In your subconsicious.... Posts: 1,184	I love That one!!!!! It is the best I have ever heard!! THank you So much for writeing it!!!!!! I love It!!!

09-19-2002, 04:26 PM	#70
Radagast The Brown Elf Lord Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Israel Posts: 6,975	I like your very short - I mean - your shortest song. I really like it. __________________ Lalala... poof! AboutNewJersey.com - New Jersey Travel and Tourism Guide

09-19-2002, 05:37 PM	#71
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	grin I'm listening to Complicated right now while reading the song... Great song, Arathorn! Especially since I now know the song...cheers __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

09-19-2002, 09:23 PM	#72
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Thanks guys. I'm particularly proud of that last one. :) The most difficult part of mangling a song is usually choosing which song to do. After that, it's a matter of choosing a middle-earth theme and then losing yourself in that theme. 'takes about an hour or less... I've learned that it's easiest to do all these when I'm happy, very very sleepy, sad or heart-broken; when my hypothalamus seems to be overpowering my analytic centers... __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 09-19-2002 at 09:24 PM.

09-24-2002, 09:45 AM	#73
Elfmaster XK Possessive Villain Fancier Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: On my ship, riding the waves YARR! Posts: 2,008	Heh, not been here for a while! But that was good Oh great bard! I knew it too EG! Anyhow, stretches fingers Here goes one from me. Parts of it are the same, but they fitted. ( Originally Iris by Goo Goo Dolls) Ranger (from POV of Eowyn) And I'd give up forever to touch you 'Cause i don't want to stay here without you You just came into my life to leave And I don't want anything but now And all I want is me and you And all I want is for you to live 'Cause sooner or later it's over I just don't wanna be left behind And I only want to come with you 'Cause I thought you'd understand When everything is over I just want you to know who I am And I can't fight my fears that aren't coming I never get a chance to anyway When everything feels like a vision Yeah, you need pain to know you're alive And I only want to come with you 'Cause I thought you'd understand When everything is over I just want you to know who I am And I only want to come with you 'Cause I thought you'd understand When everything is over I just want you to know who I am And I only want to come with you 'Cause I thought you'd understand When everything is over I just want you to know who I am I just want you to know who I am I just want you to know who I am I just want you to know who I am There, i hope that's not too murderous to the original song! sigh __________________ My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies, Fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly - my friends. XK

09-24-2002, 01:58 PM	#74
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Great song, your's is as well, E XK! Googoo Dolls will be having a concert here in Manila in a few weeks; and shortly after that, we'll have Oasis! Here's one mangled from their classic: They Don’t Easily Fall (Originally WONDERWALL by Oasis) This age is gonna be the age that they're gonna take the Ring from you By now you shoulda somehow realized what those men could do I don't believe that any balrog feels the way wraiths do about you now Black heat, the orcs are on their feet coz the fire in your realm is out I'm sure you've heard it all before but you never really had a doubt I don't believe that any balrog feels the way wraiths do about you now And all the fords we have to wade are winding And all the wights that lead us there are minding There are many tales that I would like to wail to you But I don't dare howl Because maybe Those hobbits are the ones that end thee And after all They don’t eas’ly fall This age was gonna be the age that they'll never give the One to you By now you shoulda somehow realized what those elves could do I don't believe that any watcher feels the way we do about you now And all the scents that lead us there were failing And all the lights that lead those two are blinding There are many tales that I would like to wail to you But I don't dare howl I said maybe That Gollum is the one that takes thee And after all He did take that fall Because maybe Those hobbits are the ones that end thee And after all They don’t eas’ly fall I said maybe Those hobbits are the ones that end thee Those hobbits are the ones that end thee Those hobbits are the ones that end thee __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures...

09-24-2002, 02:02 PM	#75
Radagast The Brown Elf Lord Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Israel Posts: 6,975	nice...nice...nice....nice....ammm....oh....ok.... __________________ Lalala... poof! AboutNewJersey.com - New Jersey Travel and Tourism Guide

09-24-2002, 02:06 PM	#76
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	Great songs, E XK and Arathorn! __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

09-24-2002, 06:12 PM	#77
Aeryn Bank'ress of Sith Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: In a hot-hot place, heh Posts: 913	rough outline Well I heard an annoying song on the radio and decided to make it into an annoying middle-earth song. I can't seem to remember most of the words so I can only do the chorus but here goes Fly like an eagle by Seal I want to walk into Mordor Oh those Nazgul follow me I want to walk into Mordor Let that Sauron set me free Gotta feed those hobbits Who ain't hadda 'nuff to eat Don't gotta shoe no hobbits Who got big leath-er-y feet Gotta find that Gandalf Who fell down real deep Walk right into the Black Land. Sorry if that was terrible. __________________ my new account name feigndeath. This one is deactivated, I think.

09-24-2002, 08:53 PM	#78
Tanoliel Eccentric Chocolate Crow Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Emerald City--Seattle, WA Posts: 1,861	It wasn't terrible! Do try your hand at other songs, too...we always like more mangles. Wonderful songs, EXK and Arathorn! cheers Now someone PM and explain where from and how to download stuff so I can listen to the original song...rawr. Please? Thankee. -tano __________________ Wisdom for Short Attention Spans...Ozy and Millie. It rocks. Food Of The Gods: 3,7-dihydro-3,7-dimethyl-1H-purine-2,6-dione Feed Me.... Another Online Dwelling Place... "All right, I confess. It is my intention to comandeer a ship, pick up a crew in Tortuga, to rape, pillage, plunder and otherwise pilfer my weasely black guts out." -Captain Jack Sparrow "The trouble with unknown enemies is that they are so difficult to identify." -Amelia Peabody Emerson "Most people obey the orders of someone who is pointing a gun at their head." -A.P. Emerson

09-25-2002, 08:46 AM	#79
Elfmaster XK Possessive Villain Fancier Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: On my ship, riding the waves YARR! Posts: 2,008	Thanks! Awww! I wanna go see goo goo dolls! Dammit! And Arathorn, you know Oasis are from my home town, Manchester! Are you ghoing to see them? Which song Tano, or did you mean in general? __________________ My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies, Fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly - my friends. XK

09-25-2002, 03:28 PM	#80
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Yep. The girls here in the office wanna see Googoo Dolls while the guys wanna watch Oasis. I'm certainly gonna see the latter. I'll be sure to ask them if they know you, Xen. Of course, I'm not sure if they'd hear me ask or whether they do know you. __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures...

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