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Old 05-02-2003, 11:45 PM   #1
Entlover
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I love "Spin." I think it's very well written. I don't think she's emotionally disturbed, I just think the timeline's off. If only a year had passed instead of ten years, her feelings would be completely understandable. and so would her father's (perhaps precipitous) desire to start to date again. Maybe he just misses having someone iron his handkerchiefs and sort his socks.
The way the game melds into her emotions is superb.

I don't care so much for Tough as Snails. I prefer elves and fairies as tall as humans, rather than the teeny ones with wings who were invented by the Victorians. But if you have to have one, I guess one that bites people on the nose is the best kind.
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