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Old 05-02-2003, 11:32 AM   #21
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I'm gunning down romance
It never did a thing for me
But heartache and misery
Ain't nothing but a tragedy



just had to quote this
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Old 05-03-2003, 07:58 AM   #22
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That's nice poetry. Why do I know so many people who suffer in love?
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Old 05-03-2003, 01:21 PM   #23
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I'm with Snowdog. I think for it to work, you have to be careful to add it into another story. Romance alone has been over worked probably. That's why in mine I have put the love story into the social and political aspects of the story. The romance works around the more important issues. And that's the way I find it works. Otherwise it's always so predictable. He meets her. They fall in love. Something goes wrong/someone else comes onto the scene. They have a fight, or lose each other, or think they don't love each other. They realise the truth. They defeat the obstacle and live happily ever after. Blergh.
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Old 05-04-2003, 01:02 AM   #24
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Some might consider that drama, and it is if it's done properly. Even though that formula is classic, stereotype. Whether that's bad or not is another matter- it depends on how it's done.
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Old 05-07-2003, 10:19 AM   #25
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No, I meant that was what happens in all love stories. Not that's what I am writing. I write angsty things that go all wrong. I guess classic love stories can work if done well, but there are so many romance books. I'm pretty sure it's difficult to find something unique.
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Old 05-07-2003, 04:13 PM   #26
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I love writing romance and reading about it. In one of my stories I've got two people that hate each other then they fall madly, deeply, in love then one of them dies the other person goes into deep depression so they kill themselves and then it turns out that the other person never really died and was just really wounded so then they go into depression and then it's the end.
Then in another story I have an immortal in love with a 12 year old girl who thinks of him as a father, kind of twisted when he's smelling her hair and kissing her neck.
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Old 05-07-2003, 08:51 PM   #27
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you know, my fave romance was one where Meika (main character) is married to Nic but he gets killed and she's really bummed out but then she and Leo (a complete stranger) go to find her birth mother (whom they don't know is dead) and they sort of. hmm... comfort each other since like everyone they know is dying and then they realise that they were created in the same gene lab (although they're not related) and then they kind of split up but remain in contact... it's like "I'm sad, you're sad, we comforted each other and maybe went a little too far but we don't really have any feelings for each other so crap now what do we do?"

It's a LOT more complicated than that. But I never have those sappy romances in my books.
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Old 03-06-2004, 07:27 PM   #28
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I've never tried to write a romance... I personally enjoy writing adventure. But I like romance books: Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte, Pride and Prejudice by You-Know-Who, Wuthering Heights by Emily Bronte, that sort of this... mostly classics, I guess... but sometimes I like new romances... *shrug*

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