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Old 08-26-2008, 08:15 PM   #41
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Ah, I didn't connect the 16 years mentioned with the raid.

New question; if it was 16 years ago, then Rachel would certainly know about the Spartans seeing as she was well into her teens by then. Why didn't she recognize Alex was a Spartan? And how would she not recognize the tattoo he has, if 16 years ago there were a whole passle of them still protecting the village?
With the amount of scars Alex has, she really didn't connent the brand with the Spartans. She never saw Alex before he walked away.
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Another question is how would she not know that Shahra's father was also a Spartan? It seemed as though she didn't.
She didn't. The older generation assumed Shahra's father was one of the Spartans killed. The younger generation didn't know because Shahra and her husband don't talk about it and as a general rule people don't mention it.
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It wouldn't be so much gossip as it would be cold hard fact. Another thing, if she ran into the forest when she was a child, that was before the raid and of death of the Spartans, so of course there would be no ghosts or venegeful Spartans.
Ok you got a point there. But you are also considered a child until you reach 20.

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Arg... Sorry... I'll button my beak.
lol. Hey when I finish and with all the stuff your pointing out I'll do a rewrite and send you the finished product.
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Old 12-29-2008, 02:11 PM   #42
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Sorry I haven't updated this in a while. I've been very busy and with limited access to the internet I haven't been able to update. I should have an update with in the next few weeks.
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Old 12-29-2008, 02:32 PM   #43
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Looking forward to it
You also promised me some pics...
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Old 01-06-2009, 01:03 PM   #44
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Old 03-17-2009, 09:36 PM   #45
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As promised, the update.
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Old 03-22-2009, 01:31 AM   #46
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First time ever reading this... and so far it's pretty good! Keep it up while ya can!


P.S. It's been a while since I've been on. How've ya been?
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Old 03-29-2009, 09:55 PM   #47
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TUINOR!!! I missed you! I've been great. You?

Thanks, I kinda got stuck on the current post
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Old 03-31-2009, 04:19 PM   #48
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I've been well, but rather busy. I'm glad to hear you've been doing good! I am hoping that I'll be on more frequently again. In the meantime, I'll keep myself entertained on this nifty story of yours.
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Old 04-01-2009, 05:45 PM   #49
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I almost forgot about this story!!!

Here's an update for your reading pleasure
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OK here's the deal:

Don't expect anymore updates because this story has officially died.


Thanks for reading what I did write
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