I made a song!!!!!

StrawberryIcecream · 03-01-2002, 02:20 PM

I was inspired my good friend, Glorfindel's poem so I had a go at one myself.

"The Lord of the Ring" sung to the tune of the Lord of the Dance Chorus repeated several times cos I can’t remember the rest of the tune.

Come then, whoever you may be,
I am the Lord of the Ring said he,
And I’ll lead you all to Mordor’s mystery,
And I’ll lead you all by the Ring said he.

Come then, Pippi-in and Mer-r-y,
I am the Lord of the Ring said he,
And I’ll eat with you… supper and aft’noon tea,
And I’ll eat with you if it don’t get fiery.

Come now? Where’s the wizard that knows me?
Heeee’s stood me-e-e up at the Pran-cing Pony,
And now it’s too late, cos Pippin has told he,
A-a-and when I fell, I rather hurt my knee.

Who’s that fellow, who won’t stop looking at me,
I think he needs to-o stay off the coffee,
But he seems to help, specially when I hurt my knee,
Hop’fully he knows what to do with the ring given to me.

Come then, Bill the Po-ony,
I ca-an’t think of a use for thee,
But if you don’t come, Sam will be mad with me,
Cos for some reason, he thinks your pally.

Come then Arwen, b’fore I turn to a stiffy,
Though I think that the black, wo-ould really suit me,
But I don’t like horses, as shown with the pony,
And being so dead, I wo-ould bound to get wiffy.

Now at Rivendell, I meet Leg’as and Gimli,
They all seem to ha-a-ave plaits but me,
I used to like my hair but now Im abit iffy,
I now need a straightner, to stop b’ing so curly.

Now we have ev’ryone, lets get on with our journey,
I think my companys cool, but Bor’mir’s a maybe,
I don’t like his attitude, he may steal the ring from me,
Oh look now he’s dead, and I am now free.

AND ONE FOR LATER:
Come then, through the marshes that we see,
Though I kno-o-ow Sam, that they are rather stinky,
But those faces are dead, no nee-ed to worry,
Though the look on them really makes me want to pee.

Feel free to make more verses and reply with feedback!

[U]

StrawberryIcecream · 03-01-2002, 03:44 PM

I guess no one likes my poem then. I'm going to go sit under a rock and cry now.

Arathorn · 03-01-2002, 03:53 PM

but you inspired me and I got busy doing this one:

Your Ring
by Arathorn
(adapted from Elton John's Your Song)
(Original Lyrics by Bernie Taupin)

It's a little bit fiery the writing inside
I don't quite dig tengwar, and that I don't hide
Neither do I speak dark tongue, but boy, if I did
Ash Nazg Durbatuluk, I'm sure it'll read

If Mithrandir takes it, but then again, no
Or any of the elf lords who walk on the snow
I'll just have to bear it, it's the best I can do
To Mordor I'll bring it, though precious for you

And I won't tell anybody this is the One
It may look quite simple but needs be undone
I hope You don't mind
I hope You don't mind, but in Samath Naur
We lost you you're Precious when Gollum left the world

I walked down through mushrooms and kicked off the moss
With Sam, Pip and Merry 'hope Maggot's not cross
We're going to Bree now, and it won't be long
Singing an old song: "The road goes ever on"

Gandalf is gone now but trudge on I do
Boromir's dead too and now we are two
Gollum keeps pace but I hope he's not mean
We caught him with Sam's rope, he sure is quite lean

And I won't tell anybody this is the One
It may look quite simple but needs be undone
I hope You don't mind
I hope You don't mind, but in Samath Naur
We lost you you're Precious when Gollum left the world

StrawberryIcecream · 03-01-2002, 03:56 PM

*emerges from underneath rock*

That's really good Arathorn! By the way I've never had chance to say but I LOVE your signature!

FRODO LIVES!

Laurelyn · 03-01-2002, 04:31 PM

Wow! These are awesome! *scuttles off to write one of her own*

Glorious Glorfindel · 03-02-2002, 08:55 AM

tee hee hee
these r soooo cool, but lets not 4 get the original song poem starter!!
Arathorn urs is particularly cool!
i like Your song by Elton John, its really cool, especially with LotR verses 2 go with it!
And Strawberry, thats just hilarious, silly, extremely silly in fact, but hilarious all the same!!!

Arathorn · 03-02-2002, 11:14 AM

Thanks, you guys. I might come up with another one after midnight here but don't hold your breath just yet.
Hmmm, I think I'll take "Your Ring" and submit it to Rivendell....

P.S. Glorious G., I've made very minor revisions and added the original Lyricist's name

Earenya · 03-02-2002, 12:18 PM

Yeah, I really like yours, Arathorn. Very clever! You definately should submit it...

StrawberryIceCream- Lord of the Dance is one of my favorite tunes- I sang yours to my roommate, quite good!

StrawberryIcecream · 03-02-2002, 03:52 PM

Ahhh. Your so sweet! And before anyone judges on my writing skills, That isnt my best writing (or rhyming actually) I just had 10 mins to spare before i could go on the internet.

eowyn144 · 03-02-2002, 04:09 PM

wow arathorn that was amazing!it's really weird cos i was listening to the real your song earlier today!ur version is wicked!please post some more soon!
my friend came up with this idea of doing a song to "there's a hole in my bucket" otherwise known now as "there's a hole in my ring".its not very creative or funny but she seemed to like it.

There's a hole in my ring, dear Gandalf, dear Gandalf
There's a hole in my ring, dear Gandalf, a hole.

ok, now that i write it down, its really not as funny as it first sounded!if ne1 can come up with any better verses feel free.especially u gg or arathorn or STRAWBERRY!!!! as u seem to have a flare for this sort of composing.....writing...thing!

StrawberryIcecream · 03-02-2002, 04:16 PM

*sniff sniff*

eowyn144 · 03-02-2002, 04:18 PM

y so glum strawberry?

StrawberryIcecream · 03-02-2002, 04:22 PM

You said only them were good at poetry.

I know it may not be that good but it's not that rubbish is it?

Earenya · 03-02-2002, 09:28 PM

A bit of what I've come up with, this is Sauron's song.

(tune of "American Woman- original Guess Who version")

Frodo Baggins, stay away from me.
Frodo Baggins, hobbit let me be.

Dont come a-hangin around Orodruin
Tryin' to cast that Ring into Doom
Ive got all of Middle Earth to rule
You'll never escape my Nazgul.

Now hobbit, 'said stay away.
Frodo Baggins, listen t'what I say.

Don't try to come through Mordor
Don't wanna see your little shadow no more
My firey eye can hypnotize
So say my loyal spies.

Oh hobbit, 'said get away.
Frodo Baggins, listen t'what I say.

Arathorn · 03-03-2002, 01:08 AM

awww, Strawberry, don't you dare cry,
I liked your poetry and that I don't lie
That's how I got started writing "Your Ring"
'Hope we all get to posting more for them to sing

Oh well, back to the other threads for now
I'm reading about one that involves a cow.

StrawberryIcecream · 03-03-2002, 06:33 AM

Thank you Arathorn, you are very nice,
I loved your poem, I read it twice,
I think every post on this thread should rhyme,
From now until the end of time!

Arathorn · 03-03-2002, 12:21 PM

Great one, Earenya!
Keep writing, maybe we'll see macarenya (it rhymes)
Maybe not rhyming all the time, StrawberryIcecream
Even just remotely close to the theme

Here's one from chicago
With which I had a go
A lot of the original lyrics were really good
So I kept them in to preserve the mood, knock on wood...

(Original lyrics by PETER CETERA's You're The Inspiration)
You're The One Temptation
by Arathorn

You know my rule was meant to be
The kind of rule that lasts forever
And I need you worn on me
From tonight until the end of time

Elves should know, everywhere you go
You're always on my mind,
In my eye, in my soul
malice

CHORUS
You're the One Ring of my life
You are the temptation
You bring suffering to their lives
You're the desperation
'Wanna have you on me
I wanna have you shining, glinting
No one needs you more than my finger

And I know, yes I know that it's plain to see
They'll never win when we're together
Now I know, that I need you here with me
From tonight until the end of time

Wraiths should know, everywhere they go
You're always on my mind,
In my eye, in my soul

CHORUS

'Wanna have you on me
I wanna have you shining, glinting
No one needs you more than my finger

You're the malice of my life
You are the temptation
You bring ruin to their lives
You're the complication
When you're that ambitious, till the end of time
When you're that malicious, always on my mind
When you're that seditious, till the end of time
When you're that blasphemous, always on my mind
When you're that ambitious till the end of time
When you're that malicious, always on my mind

Glorious Glorfindel · 03-03-2002, 01:19 PM

LOL arathorn!

Earenya · 03-03-2002, 06:31 PM

Thank you, Arathorn, your flattery is kind,
I thouroughly enjoy reading your rhymes.
StrawberryIceCream, your tunes are quite fun,
I look forward to more of them in the long run.

Nariel Starfire · 03-03-2002, 10:52 PM

anyody like Billy Joel? I'm gonna try some of that!

03-01-2002, 02:20 PM	#1
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	I made a song!!!!! I was inspired my good friend, Glorfindel's poem so I had a go at one myself. "The Lord of the Ring" sung to the tune of the Lord of the Dance Chorus repeated several times cos I can’t remember the rest of the tune. Come then, whoever you may be, I am the Lord of the Ring said he, And I’ll lead you all to Mordor’s mystery, And I’ll lead you all by the Ring said he. Come then, Pippi-in and Mer-r-y, I am the Lord of the Ring said he, And I’ll eat with you… supper and aft’noon tea, And I’ll eat with you if it don’t get fiery. Come now? Where’s the wizard that knows me? Heeee’s stood me-e-e up at the Pran-cing Pony, And now it’s too late, cos Pippin has told he, A-a-and when I fell, I rather hurt my knee. Who’s that fellow, who won’t stop looking at me, I think he needs to-o stay off the coffee, But he seems to help, specially when I hurt my knee, Hop’fully he knows what to do with the ring given to me. Come then, Bill the Po-ony, I ca-an’t think of a use for thee, But if you don’t come, Sam will be mad with me, Cos for some reason, he thinks your pally. Come then Arwen, b’fore I turn to a stiffy, Though I think that the black, wo-ould really suit me, But I don’t like horses, as shown with the pony, And being so dead, I wo-ould bound to get wiffy. Now at Rivendell, I meet Leg’as and Gimli, They all seem to ha-a-ave plaits but me, I used to like my hair but now Im abit iffy, I now need a straightner, to stop b’ing so curly. Now we have ev’ryone, lets get on with our journey, I think my companys cool, but Bor’mir’s a maybe, I don’t like his attitude, he may steal the ring from me, Oh look now he’s dead, and I am now free. AND ONE FOR LATER: Come then, through the marshes that we see, Though I kno-o-ow Sam, that they are rather stinky, But those faces are dead, no nee-ed to worry, Though the look on them really makes me want to pee. Feel free to make more verses and reply with feedback! [U] __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-01-2002, 03:44 PM	#2
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	I made a song!! I guess no one likes my poem then. I'm going to go sit under a rock and cry now. __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there. Last edited by Earniel : 04-25-2006 at 03:46 PM.

03-01-2002, 03:53 PM	#3
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	I like it but you inspired me and I got busy doing this one: Your Ring by Arathorn (adapted from Elton John's Your Song) (Original Lyrics by Bernie Taupin) It's a little bit fiery the writing inside I don't quite dig tengwar, and that I don't hide Neither do I speak dark tongue, but boy, if I did Ash Nazg Durbatuluk, I'm sure it'll read If Mithrandir takes it, but then again, no Or any of the elf lords who walk on the snow I'll just have to bear it, it's the best I can do To Mordor I'll bring it, though precious for you And I won't tell anybody this is the One It may look quite simple but needs be undone I hope You don't mind I hope You don't mind, but in Samath Naur We lost you you're Precious when Gollum left the world I walked down through mushrooms and kicked off the moss With Sam, Pip and Merry 'hope Maggot's not cross We're going to Bree now, and it won't be long Singing an old song: "The road goes ever on" Gandalf is gone now but trudge on I do Boromir's dead too and now we are two Gollum keeps pace but I hope he's not mean We caught him with Sam's rope, he sure is quite lean And I won't tell anybody this is the One It may look quite simple but needs be undone I hope You don't mind I hope You don't mind, but in Samath Naur We lost you you're Precious when Gollum left the world __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 03-02-2002 at 11:10 AM.

03-01-2002, 03:56 PM	#4
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	emerges from underneath rock That's really good Arathorn! By the way I've never had chance to say but I LOVE your signature! FRODO LIVES! __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-01-2002, 04:31 PM	#5
Laurelyn Elf Lord Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Valinor, right next to Telperion . . . what did you expect, Michigan? Posts: 1,315	Wow! These are awesome! scuttles off to write one of her own __________________ The Third Age of Entmoot has begun. Angel of music, guide and guardian! Grant to me your glory! The country I eat and spend the day in is by no means the country I sleep and dream in. Define patriotism. Hold the boat, you spastic monkey! ~ Elenka

03-02-2002, 08:55 AM	#6
Glorious Glorfindel Elven Warrior Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: im too doped up to remember Posts: 371	poems and songs tee hee hee these r soooo cool, but lets not 4 get the original song poem starter!! Arathorn urs is particularly cool! i like Your song by Elton John, its really cool, especially with LotR verses 2 go with it! And Strawberry, thats just hilarious, silly, extremely silly in fact, but hilarious all the same!!! __________________ A Elbereth Gilthonial Silivren penna miriel o menal aglar elenath Na-chaered palan-diriel o galadhremmin ennorath Fanuilos, le linnathon nef aear, si nef aearon! add a drop of lavander to milk. leave town with an orange and pretend you're laughing at it.

03-02-2002, 11:14 AM	#7
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Thanks, you guys. I might come up with another one after midnight here but don't hold your breath just yet. Hmmm, I think I'll take "Your Ring" and submit it to Rivendell.... P.S. Glorious G., I've made very minor revisions and added the original Lyricist's name __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 03-02-2002 at 12:24 PM.

03-02-2002, 12:18 PM	#8
Earenya Elven Warrior Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Pinnath Gelin, formerly in Angaron... Posts: 228	Yeah, I really like yours, Arathorn. Very clever! You definately should submit it... StrawberryIceCream- Lord of the Dance is one of my favorite tunes- I sang yours to my roommate, quite good! __________________ O mor henion i dhu Ely siriar, el sila Ai! Aniron.... Tiro! El eria e mor I 'lir en el luitha 'uren Ai! Aniron... FRODO LIVES!

03-02-2002, 03:52 PM	#9
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	Ahhh. Your so sweet! And before anyone judges on my writing skills, That isnt my best writing (or rhyming actually) I just had 10 mins to spare before i could go on the internet. __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-02-2002, 04:09 PM	#10
eowyn144 Elven Warrior Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 435	wow arathorn that was amazing!it's really weird cos i was listening to the real your song earlier today!ur version is wicked!please post some more soon! my friend came up with this idea of doing a song to "there's a hole in my bucket" otherwise known now as "there's a hole in my ring".its not very creative or funny but she seemed to like it. There's a hole in my ring, dear Gandalf, dear Gandalf There's a hole in my ring, dear Gandalf, a hole. ok, now that i write it down, its really not as funny as it first sounded!if ne1 can come up with any better verses feel free.especially u gg or arathorn or STRAWBERRY!!!! as u seem to have a flare for this sort of composing.....writing...thing! __________________ If you want to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe Last edited by eowyn144 : 03-02-2002 at 04:24 PM.

03-02-2002, 04:16 PM	#11
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	sniff sniff __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-02-2002, 04:18 PM	#12
eowyn144 Elven Warrior Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 435	y so glum strawberry? __________________ If you want to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe

03-02-2002, 04:22 PM	#13
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	You said only them were good at poetry. I know it may not be that good but it's not that rubbish is it? __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-02-2002, 09:28 PM	#14
Earenya Elven Warrior Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Pinnath Gelin, formerly in Angaron... Posts: 228	A bit of what I've come up with, this is Sauron's song. (tune of "American Woman- original Guess Who version") Frodo Baggins, stay away from me. Frodo Baggins, hobbit let me be. Dont come a-hangin around Orodruin Tryin' to cast that Ring into Doom Ive got all of Middle Earth to rule You'll never escape my Nazgul. Now hobbit, 'said stay away. Frodo Baggins, listen t'what I say. Don't try to come through Mordor Don't wanna see your little shadow no more My firey eye can hypnotize So say my loyal spies. Oh hobbit, 'said get away. Frodo Baggins, listen t'what I say. __________________ O mor henion i dhu Ely siriar, el sila Ai! Aniron.... Tiro! El eria e mor I 'lir en el luitha 'uren Ai! Aniron... FRODO LIVES!

03-03-2002, 01:08 AM	#15
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	awww, Strawberry, don't you dare cry, I liked your poetry and that I don't lie That's how I got started writing "Your Ring" 'Hope we all get to posting more for them to sing Oh well, back to the other threads for now I'm reading about one that involves a cow. __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 03-03-2002 at 10:10 AM.

03-03-2002, 06:33 AM	#16
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	Thank you Arathorn, you are very nice, I loved your poem, I read it twice, I think every post on this thread should rhyme, From now until the end of time! __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-03-2002, 12:21 PM	#17
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Great one, Earenya! Keep writing, maybe we'll see macarenya (it rhymes) Maybe not rhyming all the time, StrawberryIcecream Even just remotely close to the theme Here's one from chicago With which I had a go A lot of the original lyrics were really good So I kept them in to preserve the mood, knock on wood... (Original lyrics by PETER CETERA's You're The Inspiration) You're The One Temptation by Arathorn You know my rule was meant to be The kind of rule that lasts forever And I need you worn on me From tonight until the end of time Elves should know, everywhere you go You're always on my mind, In my eye, in my soul malice CHORUS You're the One Ring of my life You are the temptation You bring suffering to their lives You're the desperation 'Wanna have you on me I wanna have you shining, glinting No one needs you more than my finger And I know, yes I know that it's plain to see They'll never win when we're together Now I know, that I need you here with me From tonight until the end of time Wraiths should know, everywhere they go You're always on my mind, In my eye, in my soul CHORUS 'Wanna have you on me I wanna have you shining, glinting No one needs you more than my finger You're the malice of my life You are the temptation You bring ruin to their lives You're the complication When you're that ambitious, till the end of time When you're that malicious, always on my mind When you're that seditious, till the end of time When you're that blasphemous, always on my mind When you're that ambitious till the end of time When you're that malicious, always on my mind __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 03-03-2002 at 12:55 PM.

03-03-2002, 01:19 PM	#18
Glorious Glorfindel Elven Warrior Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: im too doped up to remember Posts: 371	LOL arathorn! __________________ A Elbereth Gilthonial Silivren penna miriel o menal aglar elenath Na-chaered palan-diriel o galadhremmin ennorath Fanuilos, le linnathon nef aear, si nef aearon! add a drop of lavander to milk. leave town with an orange and pretend you're laughing at it.

03-03-2002, 06:31 PM	#19
Earenya Elven Warrior Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Pinnath Gelin, formerly in Angaron... Posts: 228	Thank you, Arathorn, your flattery is kind, I thouroughly enjoy reading your rhymes. StrawberryIceCream, your tunes are quite fun, I look forward to more of them in the long run. __________________ O mor henion i dhu Ely siriar, el sila Ai! Aniron.... Tiro! El eria e mor I 'lir en el luitha 'uren Ai! Aniron... FRODO LIVES!

03-03-2002, 10:52 PM	#20
Nariel Starfire Elven Warrior Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: La La Land Posts: 309	anyody like Billy Joel? I'm gonna try some of that! __________________ It is the failed skydiver who leaves an impression upon the earth. "But what about the R.O.U.Ses?" Yours Truly, The Tisroc -You forgot to say "May he live forever" -That's because I don't want him to live forever! - The Horse and his Boy--C.S. Lewis

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