Criticism please ^^

Darkhalcyon · 12-03-2001, 11:15 AM

Here's a pencil drawing i just did. I'd like to know what you all think.

Thankyou!

fireworks19 · 12-03-2001, 11:57 AM

Ooo! Ooh! I LIKE IT!

***Sister Golden Hair*** · 12-03-2001, 12:07 PM

I assume this is a female? It's cute, but the ears are too big.

Elvellon · 12-03-2001, 02:29 PM

It’s quite good, but I would like it even more if her ears were shorter (making her more like tolkien’s elves).

Wayfarer · 12-03-2001, 04:49 PM

The ears are really WAY too big.
the eyes are a bit large... but you can leave them that way.

And the head isn't really a very natural shape. I mean... it's too rounded, and the chin is too small.

But hey, all I can do is inanimate objects with particle effects. IT's nice, overall. In a sort of anime, not anywhere close to being realistic, way.

Kirinki54 · 12-03-2001, 05:53 PM

Yea, I agree it´s a nice pic.
But honestly, the ears ARE a bit K-9, don´t you agree?

Darkhalcyon · 12-03-2001, 06:38 PM

i noticed the ears when i scanned it. honestly, those things add ten pounds!

This is a new style for me, and i try notto do the tiny tolkien ears. i strive to be original. however, i agree on the overboardness. As for the big eyes well, i love 'em big ^.^ and i normally do anime anyway. BUt i'll work on that! thanks!!! you guys are so sweet!

Ñólendil · 12-03-2001, 07:50 PM

If you really want to be original, you can give the Elf-woman round ears

Always trying to impress his ideas on others,

***Ben*** · 12-03-2001, 11:08 PM

Not bad... would you be interested in having it put up at the Tolkien Trail?

Lightice · 12-04-2001, 12:41 PM

That's not tolkien-elf, but that's a very nice anime-elf!
I liked it!

byrde123 · 12-14-2001, 02:27 AM

She's very pretty. Her eyes are wonderful. The ears? Well, if that is how you see an elf then that is how her ears should be to you. As for me....maybe I see them a little smaller or mayber her hair would fall differently. But, the eyes....I really liked the eyes. Post more pics.

bombcar · 12-17-2001, 04:47 AM

It's a little to "anime" to be an elf, but other than that it's very good (minus the ears

)

Darkhalcyon · 12-19-2001, 11:22 AM

what do you mean to "anime" to be an elf????

Ever hear of loddoss wars......it stars an elf. In fact, it's from there that i adopted my anime elf style. wow, that sound's like stolen...but deedlit's ears are soooo pretty! ^^;

BTW, there's a nother pic i have scanned, but i won't post it here. Now, all imaturity aside, it's a fae and she has no clothes. it's tasteful but i know that some ppl wouldn't want it on here. so PM me. thankyou! you guys are so great!

mirrille · 12-20-2001, 05:13 AM

That's right. There are tons of elves in anime and they are all beautiful. I happen to like anime style drawing. Too bad I couldn't draw to save my life.
Keeping drawing!

Shin Ryu · 12-20-2001, 01:39 PM

The Pic isnt bad i guess if your into that type of thing i guess ^.^
(im the artist's boyfriend)

12-03-2001, 11:57 AM	#2
fireworks19 Elven Warrior Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Indiana Posts: 156	Ooo! Ooh! I LIKE IT! __________________ Just Watch the Fireworks Just Meet Fireworks =)

12-03-2001, 02:29 PM	#4
Elvellon Elf Lord Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Lindon Posts: 637	It’s quite good, but I would like it even more if her ears were shorter (making her more like tolkien’s elves). __________________ **************************************** "None are more hoplessly enslaved than those who falsely believe they are free." - Johann Wolfgang von Goethe Reality is just an illusion, albeit a very persistent one - Albert Einstein The Caffeine Mantra It is by caffeine alone I set my mind in motion. It is by the juice of Brazil that the thoughts aquire speed, The hands aquire shaking, the shaking becomes a warning. It is by caffeine alone I set my mind in motion... Elvellon Erelion

12-03-2001, 04:49 PM	#5
Wayfarer The Insufferable Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 3,333	The ears are really WAY too big. the eyes are a bit large... but you can leave them that way. And the head isn't really a very natural shape. I mean... it's too rounded, and the chin is too small. But hey, all I can do is inanimate objects with particle effects. IT's nice, overall. In a sort of anime, not anywhere close to being realistic, way. __________________ Disgraced he may be, yet is not dethroned, and keeps the rags of lordship once he owned

12-03-2001, 05:53 PM	#6
Kirinki54 Elven Warrior Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: European Union Posts: 463	Yea, I agree it´s a nice pic. But honestly, the ears ARE a bit K-9, don´t you agree? __________________ 'They need more gardens,' said Legolas. 'The houses are dead, and there is too little here that grows and is glad. If Aragorn comes into his own, the people of the Wood shall bring him birds that sing and trees that do not die.'

12-03-2001, 06:38 PM	#7
Darkhalcyon Elven Warrior Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: a boring little town not too far from manhattan Posts: 140	i noticed the ears when i scanned it. honestly, those things add ten pounds! This is a new style for me, and i try notto do the tiny tolkien ears. i strive to be original. however, i agree on the overboardness. As for the big eyes well, i love 'em big ^.^ and i normally do anime anyway. BUt i'll work on that! thanks!!! you guys are so sweet! __________________ Absolute power corrupts. Knowledge is power. Study hard, be evil.

12-03-2001, 12:07 PM	#3
*Sister Golden Hair* Queen of Nargothrond Administrator Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Akron, Ohio - USA Posts: 7,121	I assume this is a female? It's cute, but the ears are too big.

12-03-2001, 07:50 PM	#8
Ñólendil Elf Lord Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: California Posts: 60,865	If you really want to be original, you can give the Elf-woman round ears Always trying to impress his ideas on others, __________________ Falmon -- Dylan

12-03-2001, 11:08 PM	#9
*Ben* Retired Ent Join Date: Sep 1999 Posts: 60,631	Not bad... would you be interested in having it put up at the Tolkien Trail? __________________ ---Ben formerly known in the forums as bmilder Owner of The Tolkien Trail and Entmoot. Buy Entmoot shirts and mugs!

12-04-2001, 12:41 PM	#10
Lightice Elven Warrior Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 192	That's not tolkien-elf, but that's a very nice anime-elf! I liked it!

12-14-2001, 02:27 AM	#11
byrde123 Sapling Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Shores of Lake Erie Posts: 5	Elf Pic She's very pretty. Her eyes are wonderful. The ears? Well, if that is how you see an elf then that is how her ears should be to you. As for me....maybe I see them a little smaller or mayber her hair would fall differently. But, the eyes....I really liked the eyes. Post more pics.

12-17-2001, 04:47 AM	#12
bombcar Hobbit Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Santa Paula, CA Posts: 22	Art It's a little to "anime" to be an elf, but other than that it's very good (minus the ears )

12-19-2001, 11:22 AM	#13
Darkhalcyon Elven Warrior Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: a boring little town not too far from manhattan Posts: 140	what do you mean to "anime" to be an elf???? Ever hear of loddoss wars......it stars an elf. In fact, it's from there that i adopted my anime elf style. wow, that sound's like stolen...but deedlit's ears are soooo pretty! ^^; BTW, there's a nother pic i have scanned, but i won't post it here. Now, all imaturity aside, it's a fae and she has no clothes. it's tasteful but i know that some ppl wouldn't want it on here. so PM me. thankyou! you guys are so great! __________________ Absolute power corrupts. Knowledge is power. Study hard, be evil.

12-20-2001, 05:13 AM	#14
mirrille Elven Warrior Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Canada Posts: 479	That's right. There are tons of elves in anime and they are all beautiful. I happen to like anime style drawing. Too bad I couldn't draw to save my life. Keeping drawing!

12-20-2001, 01:39 PM	#15
Shin Ryu Hobbit Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Long Island New York Posts: 15	The Pic isnt bad i guess if your into that type of thing i guess ^.^ (im the artist's boyfriend)

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