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Old 05-06-2003, 03:21 PM   #1
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can someone please call the police? There is someone who should be arrested. lol
We should go back to the fantasy writing (and not spamming).
*cough* me??? i'm shocked lai i would NEVER spam.... *lie detector goes off*.... i'm getting sick of that....

okay ANYWAY.....

i couldn't sleep last night so i wrote a balrog poem..... wanna hear.... i don't think it's good, but then i don't write much peotry.
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Old 05-07-2003, 09:17 PM   #2
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Lets hear it!!
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Old 05-08-2003, 08:52 AM   #3
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Yeah, I would like to read it too.

This isn't fantasy writing, but I wrote this piece for English about Pride. The whole class apparently really liked it, and it seemed like a 'real book'. (My teacher said it was written in a mature style as well! Yeah!). It's not really that good, ask Lalaith. (Though she will lie) It was really funny listening other other classmates' stories, cause practically all of them had a protagonist who was too proud/stupid and ends up commiting suicide. Ahhh, we are such a depressed class.
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Old 05-08-2003, 09:56 AM   #4
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Yeah, I would like to read it too.

This isn't fantasy writing, but I wrote this piece for English about Pride. The whole class apparently really liked it, and it seemed like a 'real book'. (My teacher said it was written in a mature style as well! Yeah!). It's not really that good, ask Lalaith. (Though she will lie) It was really funny listening other other classmates' stories, cause practically all of them had a protagonist who was too proud/stupid and ends up commiting suicide. Ahhh, we are such a depressed class.
Damn, it's good and I don't lie. I'm no liar.
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Old 05-08-2003, 03:44 PM   #5
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you asked for it... i am NOT proud of it, it does balrogs no justise but please remember that i was writing this at about 4am, with no previous sleep....

((it's been edited out cos it was s*it))

UGH!!! i should have burnt it.... i can see several mistakes just by glancing and not looking at it.... and to anyone who things balrogs don't have wings i think they do so..

i'll edit the poem out later, and to make up for it i'll post my best poem ever.... one i had to do for english, and it's pretty good for someone who can't write poetry. LOL. not like this one....
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Old 05-10-2003, 02:43 AM   #6
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My first post in this forum! Yes, I write fantasy, mainly LOTR fan fiction. And, no, you cannot see it because it's private and I really think it's not very good. At least I've learnt a lot about punctuation and grammer, thanks to lovely beta readers.
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Old 05-30-2003, 03:48 PM   #7
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A beast of fire and molten rock,
It's flame ridden breath does burn,
From taloned claws to stretched out wings,
It haunts the depth of the earth,
A fearful creature full of might,
Little has been known,
Of the balrogs origen and why it so does burn.

I don't suppose it has some sort of meter? Poems don't sound like poems unless they have some sort of flow or rhyme.
It's spelled 'origin'.

And, I mean, if you read the Silmarillion, you do know why it burns.
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Old 05-31-2003, 11:19 AM   #8
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http://www.astronomytower.org/

THis is a new story I had just checked and gotten ready. It is a romance and I love it to much for words.
JUst press search by aithers at the top of the screen near the sign that says astronomy tower and scroll down to find The werewolf's Wand fic. "Once Upon A Full Moon" that is my story. Hope you like it.
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Old 05-31-2003, 10:42 PM   #9
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My brother complanes on how much fantasy writing I do. That jerk.
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Old 06-01-2003, 07:56 AM   #10
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That doesn't make sense. Why would he complain about something that doesn't have to do with him?
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Old 06-02-2003, 11:12 AM   #11
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Your brother is IronParrot, right? From what I hear, he's none to fond of fantasy (especially with stupid, outlandish names ).
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Old 06-11-2003, 10:44 AM   #12
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I don't suppose it has some sort of meter? Poems don't sound like poems unless they have some sort of flow or rhyme.
It's spelled 'origin'.

And, I mean, if you read the Silmarillion, you do know why it burns.
*nods* well i did say it was s*it.... i burnt it... and i do have an excuse, cos i was writing it in the early hours after drinking alot of something that i can't even remember the name of.... i don't think it had a name, i think my friend made it....
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Old 07-12-2003, 04:01 PM   #13
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I'm working on a little something at the moment called Xavon of Almazadan. It's about four peoples who live in this other world and the land gets split in a shifting of the land. It's kind of complicated but I'll go into detail if anyone asks specifically.
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Old 05-23-2009, 12:06 PM   #14
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I'm in the process of writing a book, but it's not very developed yet. I've been doing a lot of thinking, and I've written five chapters. I've also drawn some pictures of the characters.
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Old 05-23-2009, 09:40 PM   #15
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I have a couple of Novels done in a trilogy. The first I'm going to do a few more edits on before taking to a publisher
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Old 07-31-2009, 04:11 PM   #16
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I haven't moved on very much i'm at the six chapter now. I'm still thinking of a good title.
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Ive been writing a book for while. It's pretty good but I also still need a title.
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Old 09-19-2009, 03:20 PM   #18
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If you want to try to get them published, I suppose the publisher will help you find a good title for your books.
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Hello. I also write fantasy, but not nearly on the level of Tolkien or Rowling.
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