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03-17-2009, 08:44 PM
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Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: In trouble. As usual.
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This was a really great beginning, Doc. The opening hook was just that. It hooked the reader. I, myself, when developing a story write in pen then transfer it to computer. There are times I write separate scenes as they come to me. Creating profiles for your characters, like Hector suggested, may help you. Don't give up. A story is like a child, nurture it and it will grow.
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