Anyone want to read a First Age Tolkien Fan-Fic?

[Curufin]

Now, while I've RP'ed a lot in my life, this is my first adventure into the world of Fan Fic. A friend on another board and I are in a RP together, and we decided to do some PM RP between our characters so we could figure out exactly what their relationship was. It was way more fun than we expected, and we decided to turn it into a fan fic.

Those characters are Nolofinwë (Fingolfin) and Anairë (his wife).

We'd love to have criticism (as long as it's constructive ) and comments about what you think we could do better, etc., etc.

Please read here and let me know what you think. There are four chapters (as of 9/4/08), so make sure you read them all.