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Old 03-01-2002, 03:44 PM   #1
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I made a song!!

I guess no one likes my poem then. I'm going to go sit under a rock and cry now.
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Old 03-01-2002, 03:53 PM   #2
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I like it

but you inspired me and I got busy doing this one:

Your Ring
by Arathorn
(adapted from Elton John's Your Song)
(Original Lyrics by Bernie Taupin)


It's a little bit fiery the writing inside
I don't quite dig tengwar, and that I don't hide
Neither do I speak dark tongue, but boy, if I did
Ash Nazg Durbatuluk, I'm sure it'll read

If Mithrandir takes it, but then again, no
Or any of the elf lords who walk on the snow
I'll just have to bear it, it's the best I can do
To Mordor I'll bring it, though precious for you

And I won't tell anybody this is the One
It may look quite simple but needs be undone
I hope You don't mind
I hope You don't mind, but in Samath Naur
We lost you you're Precious when Gollum left the world

I walked down through mushrooms and kicked off the moss
With Sam, Pip and Merry 'hope Maggot's not cross
We're going to Bree now, and it won't be long
Singing an old song: "The road goes ever on"

Gandalf is gone now but trudge on I do
Boromir's dead too and now we are two
Gollum keeps pace but I hope he's not mean
We caught him with Sam's rope, he sure is quite lean

And I won't tell anybody this is the One
It may look quite simple but needs be undone
I hope You don't mind
I hope You don't mind, but in Samath Naur
We lost you you're Precious when Gollum left the world
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Old 03-01-2002, 03:56 PM   #3
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*emerges from underneath rock*

That's really good Arathorn! By the way I've never had chance to say but I LOVE your signature!

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Wow! These are awesome! *scuttles off to write one of her own*
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Old 03-02-2002, 08:55 AM   #5
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poems and songs

tee hee hee
these r soooo cool, but lets not 4 get the original song poem starter!!
Arathorn urs is particularly cool!
i like Your song by Elton John, its really cool, especially with LotR verses 2 go with it!
And Strawberry, thats just hilarious, silly, extremely silly in fact, but hilarious all the same!!!
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Old 03-02-2002, 11:14 AM   #6
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Thanks, you guys. I might come up with another one after midnight here but don't hold your breath just yet.
Hmmm, I think I'll take "Your Ring" and submit it to Rivendell....

P.S. Glorious G., I've made very minor revisions and added the original Lyricist's name
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Old 03-02-2002, 12:18 PM   #7
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Yeah, I really like yours, Arathorn. Very clever! You definately should submit it...

StrawberryIceCream- Lord of the Dance is one of my favorite tunes- I sang yours to my roommate, quite good!
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Ahhh. Your so sweet! And before anyone judges on my writing skills, That isnt my best writing (or rhyming actually) I just had 10 mins to spare before i could go on the internet.
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Old 03-02-2002, 04:09 PM   #9
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wow arathorn that was amazing!it's really weird cos i was listening to the real your song earlier today!ur version is wicked!please post some more soon!
my friend came up with this idea of doing a song to "there's a hole in my bucket" otherwise known now as "there's a hole in my ring".its not very creative or funny but she seemed to like it.

There's a hole in my ring, dear Gandalf, dear Gandalf
There's a hole in my ring, dear Gandalf, a hole.

ok, now that i write it down, its really not as funny as it first sounded!if ne1 can come up with any better verses feel free.especially u gg or arathorn or STRAWBERRY!!!! as u seem to have a flare for this sort of composing.....writing...thing!
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Old 03-02-2002, 04:16 PM   #10
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*sniff sniff*
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y so glum strawberry?
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Old 03-02-2002, 04:22 PM   #12
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You said only them were good at poetry.

I know it may not be that good but it's not that rubbish is it?
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Old 03-02-2002, 09:28 PM   #13
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A bit of what I've come up with, this is Sauron's song.

(tune of "American Woman- original Guess Who version")

Frodo Baggins, stay away from me.
Frodo Baggins, hobbit let me be.

Dont come a-hangin around Orodruin
Tryin' to cast that Ring into Doom
Ive got all of Middle Earth to rule
You'll never escape my Nazgul.

Now hobbit, 'said stay away.
Frodo Baggins, listen t'what I say.

Don't try to come through Mordor
Don't wanna see your little shadow no more
My firey eye can hypnotize
So say my loyal spies.

Oh hobbit, 'said get away.
Frodo Baggins, listen t'what I say.
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Old 03-03-2002, 01:08 AM   #14
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awww, Strawberry, don't you dare cry,
I liked your poetry and that I don't lie
That's how I got started writing "Your Ring"
'Hope we all get to posting more for them to sing

Oh well, back to the other threads for now
I'm reading about one that involves a cow.
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Old 03-03-2002, 06:33 AM   #15
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Thank you Arathorn, you are very nice,
I loved your poem, I read it twice,
I think every post on this thread should rhyme,
From now until the end of time!
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Great one, Earenya!
Keep writing, maybe we'll see macarenya (it rhymes)
Maybe not rhyming all the time, StrawberryIcecream
Even just remotely close to the theme

Here's one from chicago
With which I had a go
A lot of the original lyrics were really good
So I kept them in to preserve the mood, knock on wood...

(Original lyrics by PETER CETERA's You're The Inspiration)
You're The One Temptation
by Arathorn

You know my rule was meant to be
The kind of rule that lasts forever
And I need you worn on me
From tonight until the end of time

Elves should know, everywhere you go
You're always on my mind,
In my eye, in my soul
malice

CHORUS
You're the One Ring of my life
You are the temptation
You bring suffering to their lives
You're the desperation
'Wanna have you on me
I wanna have you shining, glinting
No one needs you more than my finger

And I know, yes I know that it's plain to see
They'll never win when we're together
Now I know, that I need you here with me
From tonight until the end of time

Wraiths should know, everywhere they go
You're always on my mind,
In my eye, in my soul

CHORUS

'Wanna have you on me
I wanna have you shining, glinting
No one needs you more than my finger

You're the malice of my life
You are the temptation
You bring ruin to their lives
You're the complication
When you're that ambitious, till the end of time
When you're that malicious, always on my mind
When you're that seditious, till the end of time
When you're that blasphemous, always on my mind
When you're that ambitious till the end of time
When you're that malicious, always on my mind
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Old 03-03-2002, 01:19 PM   #17
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LOL arathorn!



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Old 03-03-2002, 06:31 PM   #18
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Thank you, Arathorn, your flattery is kind,
I thouroughly enjoy reading your rhymes.
StrawberryIceCream, your tunes are quite fun,
I look forward to more of them in the long run.
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anyody like Billy Joel? I'm gonna try some of that!
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Here's an abridged one (Now the FINISHED ONE)
that I think I have done
Originally by Billy Joel
the lyrics need some fuel(whew)

We Didn't Start The War
(We Didn't Start The Fire)

Iluvatar, Manwe, Feanor, Soronume
Valinorian, Numenorean, Middle-Earth Telerian

G'ladriel, Nerdanel, Tinuviel, and Undomiel
Fangorn Forest, Lothlorien, all the way to Ithilien

Uruk-hai, Ring-Wraiths, Oliphaunts and Fire Drakes
Strider is the Elfstone, Aragorn the Dunedain

Boromir, Faramir, Eowyn and Eomer
Ungoliant, Gorgoroth, Sauron 's boss is Morgoth!

We didn't start the war
They were always raiding
Since Melkor went stealing
We didn't start the war
No we didn't wage it
Feanor's oath did it

Palantiri, One Ring, Fellowship, Return of King
Shelob, Olog-hai, Easterlings attack from nigh

Beren, Luthien, Thingol had his Melian
Sauron, Carcaroth, killed Huan and both were lost

Saruman, Olorin, Radagast where have you been?
Samwise, Pippin, Merry did the Morgul in

Angband, Mordor, Beleriand near the shore
Dagorlad, Morgulvale, Udun it does makes me pale!

We didn't start the war
They were always raiding
Since Melkor went stealing
We didn't start the war
No we didn't wage it
Feanor's oath did it

Shadowfax , Asfaloth, Snowmane, and Bill is no sloth
Eastfold, Westfold, Oh Rohan You had been told.

Finarfin, Fingolfin, I don't know where has he been
Bywater, Bag End, Sharkey's gone Grima did rend
Firecrackers, Taters, conies near the craters
Bruinen, Rivendell, Nazgul got caught in its spell

Barliman still sits at Bree, when will it be ruffian-free?
Bilbo Baggins, Frodo, left the Shire to Lotho!

We didn't start the war
They were always raiding
Since Melkor went stealing
We didn't start the war
No we didn't wage it
Feanor's oath did it


Erebor, Mount Doom, Treebeard's voice went with a boom
There's Ghan-Buri-Ghan, in the forest dwelt his clan

Tol Eressea, Barrow Downs, Gollum's such a weird clown
Glorfindel, Arwen, will PJ change plot again?

JRR thinks he's Beren, Buried with his Luthien
Christopher's H.O.M.E, I got to save some money!

We didn't start the war
They were always raiding
Since Melkor went stealing
We didn't start the war
No we didn't wage it
Feanor's oath did it

Do Balrogs have got wings? kids like to debate these things
Valinor, Undying Lands, Elves are safe in Cirdan's hands
Ents took over Isengard, Huorns beat orcs when off their guard
Denethor just lost his mind, Gondor is in such a bind

'Wonder where's the Gulf of Lhun, 'better get my map soon
East Farthing Far Downs, Hobbits won't go out of town
Man in the Moon Came down to Soon, Shire folk sure enjoyed that tune
Periannath, Halflings, Hobbits killed the Lord of Rings!

We didn't start the war
They were always raiding
Since Melkor went stealing
We didn't start the war
No we didn't wage it
Feanor's oath did it

EDIT: This is the FINAL Version
(unless I make a correction)
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