I made a song!!!!! - Page 48

Dwarven Sen · 06-26-2002, 09:26 AM

Sting(shape of my heart) again with the album song

He deals armies with a strange elation
And numenor never suspect
He doesn’t play unless he wins
He wants fear and respect
He searches the earth to find the one ring
Against the swords and the lance
The hidden one and the probable outcome
The others have no chance

I know that the bows and sword for elf soldier
I know that the axes are weapons of dwarf
I know that mortal men with rings cannot part
That’s not a good fight to start

He may issue hordes of uruks
He may slay the queen by raids
He may conceals a king of the nine
While it becomes a wraith and fades

I know that the bows and sword for elf soldier
I know that the axes are weapons of dwarf
I know that mortal men with rings cannot part
That’s not a good fight to start

And if I told you that I hate him
You’d never think there’s nothing wrong
I’m not a man I walk in hobbit paces
The ring I wear is one (/ there can be only one)
Those who quest know battle
And survive at a cost
Like those who fight the orcs in too many places
And those who don’t are lost

I know that the bows and sword for elf soldier
I know that the axes are weapons of dwarf
I know that mortal men with rings cannot part
That’s not a good fight to start

Eruviel Greenleaf · 06-26-2002, 11:54 AM

Wow! Songs!!! And good ones

Arathorn · 06-27-2002, 04:10 AM

Tolkienification
(Originally Affirmation by Savage Garden)

I believe Arien should never set upon this Morgul Vale
I believe we placed the fate of men in two brave hobbit’s trails
I believe the One Ring feels so good because it's bad for you
I believe the Eldar did the best job they knew how to do
I believe the Dark Lord’s denizens promote low self-esteem
I believe Huorns laughed when they’re completely by themselves alone

I believe, vile Grima, what you gave is what you got returned
I believe you can't appreciate the Balrogs until you've been burned
I believe Lothlorien’s no greener than the Western Lands
I believe Sam didn't know what he had until Frode said goodbye

I believe Ents can't control or choose their destiny
I believe that Tom had some importance in the sto-ory
I believe the hobbit’s strongest features are their heart and soul
I believe that Gimli’s friend is worth more than mithril or gold

I believe our barring from Undying Lands is unfair
I believe the only ones who disagree are Quendi Heirs

I believe, vile Grima, what you gave is what you got returned
I believe you can't appreciate the Balrogs until you've been burned
I believe Lothlorien’s no greener than the Western Lands
I believe Sam didn't know what he had until Frode said goodbye

I believe forgiveness is the key to Noldor grievances
I believe that wedded bliss negates the need to sail out West
I believe Eru does not endorse Ainur biologists
I believe Treebeard surviving death into eternity

I believe, vile Grima, what you gave is what you got returned
I believe you can't appreciate the Balrogs until you've been burned
I believe Lothlorien’s no greener than the Western Lands
I believe Sam didn't know what he had until Frode said goodbye

Dwarven Sen · 06-27-2002, 05:22 AM

Wow I love it Arathorn, I wil steal my mums CD tonight to sing along to it. Tomorrow I'm going to Glastonbury, hurrah, hurrah YIPEE

Radagast The Brown · 06-27-2002, 04:30 PM

arathorn, I heard (or read) this song. *check in other messege boards* amm... that's the song from tooktalk!

Tanoliel · 06-27-2002, 08:32 PM

YAY! The Mangler is back! *throws confetti frogs* And a splendid song, too...I should find the CD, neh? I hate reading all these awesome songs I don't know...must fix that...*mutter, mutter, plot, plot*

-tano

Arathorn · 06-27-2002, 10:32 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Radagast The Brown
arathorn, I heard (or read) this song. *check in other messege boards* amm... that's the song from tooktalk!

Yes. Like I said before, I'm posting it on both forums.

Arathorn · 06-28-2002, 01:29 AM

Someday Noldo
(Originally "Someday We'll Know" by The New Radicals)

40 leagues east of Edoras
Can't stop running
Friends might be alive
So many Orc signs
Us three need an answer
Four days later, they?re still on our minds
Whatever happened to Gandalf the Elf Friend
Who talks to stars up in the sky
Is it true Elves love once in a lifetime
Did Fair Luthien for her Beren cry
Someday we'll know
If Ents can move a mountain
Someday we'll know
Why hobbits are few
Someday we'll know
Why Olog-hai look like trees
Does anybody know the way to Tol Eressëa
Or what Nienna says when she cries
Sam?s passing by the place where he met Rosie
For the 111th time tonight

[chorus]
Someday we'll know
Why Aragorn loved Arwen
One day I'll go
Sailing with the moon
Someday you'll know
That I?d throw the One for you
I rode a pony to the end of the Havens
I watched the ships sail past the sea
If I could ask Eru one question
Why aren't you here with me?

[chorus]
([Post Script:] Seeing you in Valinor was great
stories eventually all come true "time heals most
wounds" I went to make us some Dwarf Ale
and you ran out the door with another Elf
I woke up on the pier with my boots on
A smile on my face and I don't even care)

The Ringbearer · 06-28-2002, 02:52 AM

WOW StrawberryIceCream! I always did love' The Lord of the Dance' but they never play it in church.....sorry if this is a bit late

but I just now looked at your first song.

Eruviel Greenleaf · 06-28-2002, 04:04 AM

Yay!
*joins Tano in throwing confettin into the air*
The mangler had returned once again!

*cheers*
And with great songs, too

Garina · 06-30-2002, 05:19 PM

Go Arathorn! Go Arathorn!

I apologise for the blonde bimbo moment. I will try to prevent it from happening again!

I have mangler's block!

samwiselvr2008 · 07-06-2002, 11:40 AM

i wish that i was a talented person,

i'll come back someday with a better poem!

Radagast The Brown · 07-06-2002, 04:45 PM

hey!

another great song by Arathorn!

samwiselvr2008 · 07-11-2002, 08:17 PM

here, i finally found one that i wrote a couple of weeks ago!

Surrounded by Orcs
By Jennifer Thornburg

Little soft feet,
Heavily pressed.
No seat,
All day wear watched.

A sharp word,
At a small movement.
A whip so hard,
Gave little improvement.

Falling on the ground,
He covers his eyes.
Trying to make no sound,
What would they do if they heard him yelp, and saw him as he cries?

He could not speak,
To his friend so near.
He could not talk,
To his friend so dear.

Tiredness,
Hunger, hurt and pane.
Brought no kindness,
Head was pulled back and drink pored in where he had been put.

A little shutter,
His body painfully heated.
A small tear,
With Orc medicine he had been treated.

Forced to run,
All day long.
He felt that he was barely moven.
His legs wear shorter then the Orcs so painfully strong.

No rest was given,
Before the days end.
Every thing he had was seen,
By pressing eyes that never left him it seamed.

The Ringbearer · 07-12-2002, 07:36 AM

Very good samwiselvr2008!

*sniff* That's a sad song!

I like it alot! (not because it is sad though.) :rolleyes

Is that about Merry and Pip, or Frodo and Sam? Either way it is great!

Radagast The Brown · 07-12-2002, 03:47 PM

good, samwiselvr2008, you have future.

samwiselvr2008 · 07-12-2002, 05:03 PM

thanks

i wrot it at 4:30 in the morning b/c i coulden't sleep! it started out as a poim about merry and pippon, but then i thought that it could be about sam and frodo, and i coulden't deside so, i geuss that you get to pick who you wont it to be about! thanks, lots of times people think that i'm a bad writer!

Eruviel Greenleaf · 07-12-2002, 06:35 PM

Good song

The best ones are written very late at night, I find

StrawberryIcecream · 07-26-2002, 07:23 AM

ok. First song ive mangled in ages and it shows.

Walking in Mordor

Put on my gold shiny ring
As I entered into shadow
No Aragorn, hes off to be crowned King
Just sam and I running from the foe

Sauron- won't you look down over me
Yeah, I got your gold ring
But I'm not about to give it to you

Then I'm walking in Mordor
I was walking with the ring
heavy, right onto my chest
Walking in Mordor
But will I really throw it into Saurons nest?

on the Isen-Mouthe we Saw the shadow of gollum,
But we couldn’t search him out ourselves
Because our heads were down low,
Now this orc army had thought we were soldiers,
And we had to walk far away,
But then came a road from barad-dûr,
We could escape though with fatigue we would pay

When I was walking in Mordor
I was walking with fatigue
in my hands, feet and eyes,
”I’ll throw the ring into Mt.Doom’
But I know to me this is all lies.

Then I'm walking in Mordor
I was walking with the ring
heavy, right onto my chest
Walking in Mordor
But will I really pass the ultimate test?

They got uruk-hai in the towers
They got eyes everywhere,
And gandalf cant you see my tears?
As I go into evil’s lair,
There is just too much evil in Mordor

Now we enter into the fire,
And I prepare to toss it in,
But then again just why should I?
If I keep it then I’D win
I feel the evil in me,
As I fight with all my might,
But then Gollum mistakenly pulls it in
And now my, heart is no longer night.

Then I'm walking in Mordor
I was walking with the ring
heavy, right onto my chest
Walking in Mordor
But would I really pass the ultimate test?

Put on my gold shiny ring yeah.
Yeah I’ll put it on.

samwiselvr2008 · 07-26-2002, 01:42 PM

that was not bad! that was good!!!

06-26-2002, 11:54 AM	#942
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	Wow! Songs!!! And good ones __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

06-27-2002, 04:10 AM	#943
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	for Rosie-Lass Tolkienification (Originally Affirmation by Savage Garden) I believe Arien should never set upon this Morgul Vale I believe we placed the fate of men in two brave hobbit’s trails I believe the One Ring feels so good because it's bad for you I believe the Eldar did the best job they knew how to do I believe the Dark Lord’s denizens promote low self-esteem I believe Huorns laughed when they’re completely by themselves alone I believe, vile Grima, what you gave is what you got returned I believe you can't appreciate the Balrogs until you've been burned I believe Lothlorien’s no greener than the Western Lands I believe Sam didn't know what he had until Frode said goodbye I believe Ents can't control or choose their destiny I believe that Tom had some importance in the sto-ory I believe the hobbit’s strongest features are their heart and soul I believe that Gimli’s friend is worth more than mithril or gold I believe our barring from Undying Lands is unfair I believe the only ones who disagree are Quendi Heirs I believe, vile Grima, what you gave is what you got returned I believe you can't appreciate the Balrogs until you've been burned I believe Lothlorien’s no greener than the Western Lands I believe Sam didn't know what he had until Frode said goodbye I believe forgiveness is the key to Noldor grievances I believe that wedded bliss negates the need to sail out West I believe Eru does not endorse Ainur biologists I believe Treebeard surviving death into eternity I believe, vile Grima, what you gave is what you got returned I believe you can't appreciate the Balrogs until you've been burned I believe Lothlorien’s no greener than the Western Lands I believe Sam didn't know what he had until Frode said goodbye __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures...

06-27-2002, 04:30 PM	#945
Radagast The Brown Elf Lord Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Israel Posts: 6,975	arathorn, I heard (or read) this song. check in other messege boards amm... that's the song from tooktalk! __________________ Lalala... poof! AboutNewJersey.com - New Jersey Travel and Tourism Guide

06-27-2002, 08:32 PM	#946
Tanoliel Eccentric Chocolate Crow Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Emerald City--Seattle, WA Posts: 1,861	YAY! The Mangler is back! throws confetti frogs And a splendid song, too...I should find the CD, neh? I hate reading all these awesome songs I don't know...must fix that...mutter, mutter, plot, plot -tano __________________ Wisdom for Short Attention Spans...Ozy and Millie. It rocks. Food Of The Gods: 3,7-dihydro-3,7-dimethyl-1H-purine-2,6-dione Feed Me.... Another Online Dwelling Place... "All right, I confess. It is my intention to comandeer a ship, pick up a crew in Tortuga, to rape, pillage, plunder and otherwise pilfer my weasely black guts out." -Captain Jack Sparrow "The trouble with unknown enemies is that they are so difficult to identify." -Amelia Peabody Emerson "Most people obey the orders of someone who is pointing a gun at their head." -A.P. Emerson

06-28-2002, 01:29 AM	#948
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Someday Noldo (Originally "Someday We'll Know" by The New Radicals) 40 leagues east of Edoras Can't stop running Friends might be alive So many Orc signs Us three need an answer Four days later, they?re still on our minds Whatever happened to Gandalf the Elf Friend Who talks to stars up in the sky Is it true Elves love once in a lifetime Did Fair Luthien for her Beren cry Someday we'll know If Ents can move a mountain Someday we'll know Why hobbits are few Someday we'll know Why Olog-hai look like trees Does anybody know the way to Tol Eressëa Or what Nienna says when she cries Sam?s passing by the place where he met Rosie For the 111th time tonight [chorus] Someday we'll know Why Aragorn loved Arwen One day I'll go Sailing with the moon Someday you'll know That I?d throw the One for you I rode a pony to the end of the Havens I watched the ships sail past the sea If I could ask Eru one question Why aren't you here with me? [chorus] ([Post Script:] Seeing you in Valinor was great stories eventually all come true "time heals most wounds" I went to make us some Dwarf Ale and you ran out the door with another Elf I woke up on the pier with my boots on A smile on my face and I don't even care) __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 06-28-2002 at 01:30 AM.

06-26-2002, 09:26 AM	#941
Dwarven Sen Elven Warrior Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Edinburgh University Library Posts: 410	Sting(shape of my heart) again with the album song He deals armies with a strange elation And numenor never suspect He doesn’t play unless he wins He wants fear and respect He searches the earth to find the one ring Against the swords and the lance The hidden one and the probable outcome The others have no chance I know that the bows and sword for elf soldier I know that the axes are weapons of dwarf I know that mortal men with rings cannot part That’s not a good fight to start He may issue hordes of uruks He may slay the queen by raids He may conceals a king of the nine While it becomes a wraith and fades I know that the bows and sword for elf soldier I know that the axes are weapons of dwarf I know that mortal men with rings cannot part That’s not a good fight to start And if I told you that I hate him You’d never think there’s nothing wrong I’m not a man I walk in hobbit paces The ring I wear is one (/ there can be only one) Those who quest know battle And survive at a cost Like those who fight the orcs in too many places And those who don’t are lost I know that the bows and sword for elf soldier I know that the axes are weapons of dwarf I know that mortal men with rings cannot part That’s not a good fight to start

06-27-2002, 05:22 AM	#944
Dwarven Sen Elven Warrior Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Edinburgh University Library Posts: 410	Wow I love it Arathorn, I wil steal my mums CD tonight to sing along to it. Tomorrow I'm going to Glastonbury, hurrah, hurrah YIPEE

06-28-2002, 02:52 AM	#949
The Ringbearer Elven Warrior Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Crickhollow in the summer, and Rivendell in the winter Posts: 397	WOW StrawberryIceCream! I always did love' The Lord of the Dance' but they never play it in church.....sorry if this is a bit late but I just now looked at your first song. __________________ 'Go away, and never come back!!' '......what?' 'But you're a part of this world! Aren't you?' Frodo lives!

06-28-2002, 04:04 AM	#950
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	Yay! joins Tano in throwing confettin into the air The mangler had returned once again! cheers And with great songs, too __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

06-30-2002, 05:19 PM	#951
Garina Elf Lord Join Date: May 2002 Location: Tring, Herts, England Posts: 582	Go Arathorn! Go Arathorn! I apologise for the blonde bimbo moment. I will try to prevent it from happening again! I have mangler's block! __________________ Entmoot Resident Bard #2 Wielder of the shiny fire extinguisher Worshipper of the divine cheesecake Hamsters and Rangers everywhere, rejoice!!! Minsc, Baldur's Gate 2 Children, don't take drugs. Become a pop star, then people give them to you for free!!! - Billy Mack, Love Actually. While I'm sure the nice people from the local archery club meant well, a moment's consideration would have made them realise that giving my friend and I lethal weapons was probably not a good idea! Dammit, eyeliner and dreadlocks should not be that sexy!

07-06-2002, 11:40 AM	#952
samwiselvr2008 Elf Lord Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Hobbiton Posts: 739	i wish that i was a talented person, i'll come back someday with a better poem! __________________ Jesus loves you! Movie vewing count from the theater: Return of the King:9 Two Towers: 11 Fellowship: 13 FRODO LIVES!

07-06-2002, 04:45 PM	#953
Radagast The Brown Elf Lord Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Israel Posts: 6,975	hey! another great song by Arathorn! __________________ Lalala... poof! AboutNewJersey.com - New Jersey Travel and Tourism Guide

07-11-2002, 08:17 PM	#954
samwiselvr2008 Elf Lord Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Hobbiton Posts: 739	here, i finally found one that i wrote a couple of weeks ago! Surrounded by Orcs By Jennifer Thornburg Little soft feet, Heavily pressed. No seat, All day wear watched. A sharp word, At a small movement. A whip so hard, Gave little improvement. Falling on the ground, He covers his eyes. Trying to make no sound, What would they do if they heard him yelp, and saw him as he cries? He could not speak, To his friend so near. He could not talk, To his friend so dear. Tiredness, Hunger, hurt and pane. Brought no kindness, Head was pulled back and drink pored in where he had been put. A little shutter, His body painfully heated. A small tear, With Orc medicine he had been treated. Forced to run, All day long. He felt that he was barely moven. His legs wear shorter then the Orcs so painfully strong. No rest was given, Before the days end. Every thing he had was seen, By pressing eyes that never left him it seamed. __________________ Jesus loves you! Movie vewing count from the theater: Return of the King:9 Two Towers: 11 Fellowship: 13 FRODO LIVES!

07-12-2002, 07:36 AM	#955
The Ringbearer Elven Warrior Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Crickhollow in the summer, and Rivendell in the winter Posts: 397	Very good samwiselvr2008! sniff That's a sad song! I like it alot! (not because it is sad though.) :rolleyes Is that about Merry and Pip, or Frodo and Sam? Either way it is great! __________________ 'Go away, and never come back!!' '......what?' 'But you're a part of this world! Aren't you?' Frodo lives!

07-12-2002, 03:47 PM	#956
Radagast The Brown Elf Lord Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Israel Posts: 6,975	good, samwiselvr2008, you have future. __________________ Lalala... poof! AboutNewJersey.com - New Jersey Travel and Tourism Guide

07-12-2002, 05:03 PM	#957
samwiselvr2008 Elf Lord Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Hobbiton Posts: 739	thanks i wrot it at 4:30 in the morning b/c i coulden't sleep! it started out as a poim about merry and pippon, but then i thought that it could be about sam and frodo, and i coulden't deside so, i geuss that you get to pick who you wont it to be about! thanks, lots of times people think that i'm a bad writer! __________________ Jesus loves you! Movie vewing count from the theater: Return of the King:9 Two Towers: 11 Fellowship: 13 FRODO LIVES!

07-12-2002, 06:35 PM	#958
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	Good song The best ones are written very late at night, I find __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

07-26-2002, 07:23 AM	#959
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	ok. First song ive mangled in ages and it shows. Walking in Mordor Put on my gold shiny ring As I entered into shadow No Aragorn, hes off to be crowned King Just sam and I running from the foe Sauron- won't you look down over me Yeah, I got your gold ring But I'm not about to give it to you Then I'm walking in Mordor I was walking with the ring heavy, right onto my chest Walking in Mordor But will I really throw it into Saurons nest? on the Isen-Mouthe we Saw the shadow of gollum, But we couldn’t search him out ourselves Because our heads were down low, Now this orc army had thought we were soldiers, And we had to walk far away, But then came a road from barad-dûr, We could escape though with fatigue we would pay When I was walking in Mordor I was walking with fatigue in my hands, feet and eyes, ”I’ll throw the ring into Mt.Doom’ But I know to me this is all lies. Then I'm walking in Mordor I was walking with the ring heavy, right onto my chest Walking in Mordor But will I really pass the ultimate test? They got uruk-hai in the towers They got eyes everywhere, And gandalf cant you see my tears? As I go into evil’s lair, There is just too much evil in Mordor Now we enter into the fire, And I prepare to toss it in, But then again just why should I? If I keep it then I’D win I feel the evil in me, As I fight with all my might, But then Gollum mistakenly pulls it in And now my, heart is no longer night. Then I'm walking in Mordor I was walking with the ring heavy, right onto my chest Walking in Mordor But would I really pass the ultimate test? Put on my gold shiny ring yeah. Yeah I’ll put it on. __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there. Last edited by StrawberryIcecream : 07-26-2002 at 07:24 AM.

07-26-2002, 01:42 PM	#960
samwiselvr2008 Elf Lord Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Hobbiton Posts: 739	that was not bad! that was good!!! __________________ Jesus loves you! Movie vewing count from the theater: Return of the King:9 Two Towers: 11 Fellowship: 13 FRODO LIVES!

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