Rules Are Meant to Be Broken Discussion - Page 3

Nautipus · 10-21-2007, 07:57 PM

HOLY CRAP!! That post was incredibly, if subtly, hardcore! Claudious is my MAN!! Yeah!

Acalewia · 10-21-2007, 08:07 PM

Do elaborate on that, my fellow writer.

Nautipus · 10-21-2007, 08:14 PM

If you insist

Claudious asesses the situation, but doesnt act on it. He's cool, and calculating in the line of fire. Quite literally too, because Echo apparently has it out for him. He knows that he needs more proof of Echo's actions before he can act, and he follows his intellect through on that decision. He's calm, loyal, and a survivor. Traits that are shown throughout your tale, but he is really illustrated here as a person who has the best nterests of the whole at heart, but knows how to act in that regard.

I hope that does it.

Acalewia · 10-21-2007, 08:43 PM

Wow, that pretty much hit the nail on the head in regards to Claudious

Acalewia · 10-22-2007, 08:16 PM

I really think you guy will like this post and I really need some feed back on this scene. Too much, not enough? Let me know

Nautipus · 10-22-2007, 08:22 PM

Me personally, I thought it was very nicely done. Not too showy, not too fancy, just right. I do want to know who spilled the beans on them both, but maybe we'll find out later

In any case, I thought it was a very warm scene, and it made me smile and giggle a little too, especially when Lark and Dove walked in on our couple of the week (at least here at the 'Moot

). And I confess, I leaned back in me rolly-chair and let off a wee giggle.

Acalewia · 10-22-2007, 08:47 PM

Romantic scenes aren't my best suit

You know me, I had to put some humor into it

Glad this scene made you giggle

What did you think about the twist?

Nautipus · 10-22-2007, 08:52 PM

The twist kinda blindsided me. Almost rudely, there I was, reading minding my own buisness, then suddenly-WHAM- I'm hit from behind with what felt like an empty SOBE bottle. The I said "Am I...I'm bleedin'....Somebody's gettin the a**-kickin of their lifetime."

But i was too drawn in to really follow through with that, so it'll have to wait.

But seriously, the twist caught me off gaurd, sent me reeling, then shed some light on a couple of subjects. Very interesting.....must.....have....more.....

Acalewia · 10-23-2007, 03:41 PM

And totally smashed Tuinor's theory

On with another post

Nautipus · 10-23-2007, 04:31 PM

hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe.....Tuinor....the fool.

Acalewia · 10-23-2007, 06:02 PM

I know it's hard for you, but be nice

Nautipus · 10-23-2007, 07:08 PM

OH MY GO*!! Tuinor tells me the EXACT same thing in real life, usually right after I've made some funny joke.

Nautipus · 10-23-2007, 07:17 PM

Geez, man, this last post...blody, bloody, bloody.....I dont think that word should be allowed that many times in one sentence!

Seriosly, someone should just kill Echo. You know what? I think I'll do it.
*Hurls bullet at Echo, which bounces harmlessly off, leaving naught but a small welt*

Dang, and I thought that was how you used those....Oh, well....on to Plan B!
*Prepares to hurl porcupine at Echo*

Acalewia · 10-23-2007, 08:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nautipus

OH MY GO*!! Tuinor tells me the EXACT same thing in real life, usually right after I've made some funny joke.

Ok that's scary

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tuinor

Geez, man, this last post...blody, bloody, bloody.....I dont think that word should be allowed that many times in one sentence!

Seriosly, someone should just kill Echo. You know what? I think I'll do it.
*Hurls bullet at Echo, which bounces harmlessly off, leaving naught but a small welt*

Dang, and I thought that was how you used those....Oh, well....on to Plan B!
*Prepares to hurl porcupine at Echo*

A porcupine? And I thought Nautipus was one strange individual

Nautipus · 10-23-2007, 08:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Acalewia

A porcupine? And I thought Nautipus was one strange individual

hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe.....Acalewia...the foo-wait! She told me to be nice.....Acalewia.....the incredibly perceptive and astoundingly brilliant person......hehehehehehehehe *giggle* he

Acalewia · 10-23-2007, 08:47 PM

Nautipus, you're giggling like a schoolgirl again

Nautipus · 10-23-2007, 09:00 PM

I'm doing wha-.....AAWW DANGIT!

Tuinor · 10-24-2007, 11:59 AM

I've got a bit of catching up to do, I see. Hmm. I guess I'll start by saying I'm no good at romantic scenes, so Acalewia, you're on your own. Sorry. Still, I like the way the plot has developed. Ryman was right, of course. Too bad he didn't live to see it. I'm still catching up on a lot of things, so I will probably post again later. I have to go now though. See you all.

Nautipus · 10-24-2007, 12:10 PM

What? GO!? BULL***T!!! Your gonna stay right HERE

Tuinor · 10-24-2007, 03:51 PM

I'm hungry now. Darn you.

10-21-2007, 07:57 PM	#41
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	HOLY CRAP!! That post was incredibly, if subtly, hardcore! Claudious is my MAN!! Yeah! __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

10-21-2007, 08:07 PM	#42
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Do elaborate on that, my fellow writer. __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

10-21-2007, 08:14 PM	#43
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	If you insist Claudious asesses the situation, but doesnt act on it. He's cool, and calculating in the line of fire. Quite literally too, because Echo apparently has it out for him. He knows that he needs more proof of Echo's actions before he can act, and he follows his intellect through on that decision. He's calm, loyal, and a survivor. Traits that are shown throughout your tale, but he is really illustrated here as a person who has the best nterests of the whole at heart, but knows how to act in that regard. I hope that does it. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

10-21-2007, 08:43 PM	#44
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Wow, that pretty much hit the nail on the head in regards to Claudious __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

10-22-2007, 08:16 PM	#45
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	I really think you guy will like this post and I really need some feed back on this scene. Too much, not enough? Let me know __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

10-22-2007, 08:22 PM	#46
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	Me personally, I thought it was very nicely done. Not too showy, not too fancy, just right. I do want to know who spilled the beans on them both, but maybe we'll find out later In any case, I thought it was a very warm scene, and it made me smile and giggle a little too, especially when Lark and Dove walked in on our couple of the week (at least here at the 'Moot ). And I confess, I leaned back in me rolly-chair and let off a wee giggle. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

10-22-2007, 08:47 PM	#47
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Romantic scenes aren't my best suit You know me, I had to put some humor into it Glad this scene made you giggle What did you think about the twist? __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

10-22-2007, 08:52 PM	#48
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	The twist kinda blindsided me. Almost rudely, there I was, reading minding my own buisness, then suddenly-WHAM- I'm hit from behind with what felt like an empty SOBE bottle. The I said "Am I...I'm bleedin'....Somebody's gettin the a-kickin of their lifetime." But i was too drawn in to really follow through with that, so it'll have to wait. But seriously, the twist caught me off gaurd, sent me reeling, then shed some light on a couple of subjects. Very interesting.....must.....have....more..... __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies.** "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

10-23-2007, 03:41 PM	#49
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	And totally smashed Tuinor's theory On with another post __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

10-23-2007, 04:31 PM	#50
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe.....Tuinor....the fool. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

10-23-2007, 06:02 PM	#51
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	I know it's hard for you, but be nice __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

10-23-2007, 07:08 PM	#52
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	OH MY GO!! Tuinor tells me the EXACT same thing in real life, usually right after I've made some funny joke. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies.* "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

10-23-2007, 07:17 PM	#53
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	Geez, man, this last post...blody, bloody, bloody.....I dont think that word should be allowed that many times in one sentence! Seriosly, someone should just kill Echo. You know what? I think I'll do it. Hurls bullet at Echo, which bounces harmlessly off, leaving naught but a small welt Dang, and I thought that was how you used those....Oh, well....on to Plan B! Prepares to hurl porcupine at Echo __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

10-23-2007, 08:47 PM	#56
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Nautipus, you're giggling like a schoolgirl again __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

10-23-2007, 09:00 PM	#57
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	I'm doing wha-.....AAWW DANGIT! __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

10-24-2007, 11:59 AM	#58
Tuinor Elven Warrior Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Wandering in circles until they become triangles Posts: 292	I've got a bit of catching up to do, I see. Hmm. I guess I'll start by saying I'm no good at romantic scenes, so Acalewia, you're on your own. Sorry. Still, I like the way the plot has developed. Ryman was right, of course. Too bad he didn't live to see it. I'm still catching up on a lot of things, so I will probably post again later. I have to go now though. See you all.

10-24-2007, 12:10 PM	#59
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	What? GO!? BULL*T!!! Your gonna stay right HERE __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies.** "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

10-24-2007, 03:51 PM	#60
Tuinor Elven Warrior Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Wandering in circles until they become triangles Posts: 292	I'm hungry now. Darn you.

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