04-12-2005, 04:20 PM | #41 |
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"B_i_g/_e_s/./_e/_o_k/_u_/f_o_/h_l_s/./_e/_l_m_/b_g/_o_n_a_n/_n_/l_o_/d_w_/./
S_o_e-_i_y/_s/_u_t/./_i_e/_u_n_/t_e_e/_u_s_d_/;/n_w/_n_i_e/_o_/./Y_u/_i_h/ _o/_o_e/_h_r_/?/T_e_/y_u/_u_t/_e/_u_c_/./B_t/_o_g_n/_n_/m_n/_u_/f_o_/f_r/ _w_y/,/_i_/o_/h_r_e-_o_d/./_e_y/_a_y/,/_o_e/_h_n/_o_s_-m_n/./" |
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Bring bees.
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04-13-2005, 08:14 AM | #43 |
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Bring is correct.
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04-13-2005, 10:45 PM | #45 |
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Ghan-Buri-Ghan?
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04-13-2005, 11:16 PM | #46 |
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"Bring less. We look out from hills. We climb big mountain and look down. Stone-city is hurt. Fire burns there outside; now inside too. You wish to come there? Then you must be quick. But Gorgon and men run? from far away, kin of horse-lord. Very wary. Come then horse-men."
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04-14-2005, 10:09 AM | #47 |
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'less' is wrong. I made a mistake in the word after 'Stone-City' - it's not 'hurt', and should be '/_h_t/'.
Also wrong - gorgon, run, kin, lord, wary, last 'come', last 'then'. |
04-14-2005, 11:06 AM | #48 |
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04-15-2005, 06:41 AM | #49 |
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"Bring /_e_s/. We look out from hills. We climb big mountain and look down. Stone-city is shut. Fire burns there outside; now inside too. You wish to come there? Then you must be quick. But Gorgun and men out from far away, /_i_/ of horse-_o_d. Very many. More than horse-men."
You didn't do any more 'typos', did you? Is it possibly "eyes" and "king"?
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04-15-2005, 01:27 PM | #50 |
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Bring eyes? No. There aren't any more typos..
Everything you fixed is correct. Didn't notice the 'of' before the last 'horse', which is wrong too.. sorry. |
04-15-2005, 01:46 PM | #51 |
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'news' and then 'sit on horse-road'
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04-15-2005, 08:44 PM | #52 |
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Yes. Only speaker left.
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04-16-2005, 10:05 AM | #56 |
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Your turn Chrys.
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04-16-2005, 10:17 AM | #57 |
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"I_/i_/n_t/_e_d_d/_h_t/_h_/r_n_/s_o_l_/b_/f_u_d/,/
_o_/w_i_e/_t/_b_d_s/_n/_a_t_/a_d/_s/_o_/u_m_d_/,/ s_i_l/_h_e/_o_e_/t_a_/i_/h_l_s/_i_l/_i_e/,/_n_/S_u_o_/ w_l_/g_o_/a_d/_a_e/_o_e/./_h_/m_g_t/_f/_h_/E_v_s/ _n_/t_e/_l_-f_i_n_s/_s/_e_s/_o_/t_a_/a_y/_f/_l_/./" |
04-16-2005, 04:53 PM | #58 |
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"It is not needed that the ring should be found,
not while it abides in/_a_t_/and is not unmade,/ still thee/_o_e_/that it holds/_i_l/_i_e/,/and Sauron/ will grow and make move. The might of the Elves and the elf-friends is less/_o_/than any of all." Don't want to know how many mistakes I have here. |
04-16-2005, 06:52 PM | #59 |
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1st line - all right
2nd - 'not' and 'in' are wrong 3rd - 'thee' is wrong, but it should be 'the', my error so i'll let you have it 4th - 'make' and 'move' are wrong 5th - 'all' is wrong |
04-16-2005, 07:03 PM | #60 |
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"It is not needed that the ring should be found, now while it abides on/_a_t_/and is not unmade,/
still the power that it holds will/_i_e/,/and Sauron/ will grow and have hope. The might of the Elves and the elf-friends is less now than any of old." |
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