I made a song!!!!! - Page 12

Eruviel Greenleaf · 03-22-2002, 04:19 AM

You want another copy, Arathorn? Well, this one does have more songs on it. . .whatever you want!

I'll send it now, it is a convenient way of avoiding those nasty reports on birds that I have to do

StrawberryIcecream · 03-22-2002, 04:48 AM

and me!!!!

Have you got a front cover yet? If you havent can I make one? I'm off school all today and I'm bored so i have the spare time!

Eruviel Greenleaf · 03-22-2002, 04:52 AM

Do make a cover, StrawberryIcecream! That would be cool

Lucky you, being off school. . .we almost had a snow day today--er, yesterday. But then the snow melted!

StrawberryIcecream · 03-22-2002, 05:23 AM

oh how I long for snow

Shall the cover be A4 or A5 and any idea what to put on it?

Characters from films?

Elfmaster XK · 03-22-2002, 05:44 AM

Can i have a copy please?
A cover would be good, but comeone needs to credit all the original songs don't they?
I'm gonna write a poem about all the writers now, perhaps to begin the book...

StrawberryIcecream · 03-22-2002, 06:03 AM

How is this for a conclusion?

I know its not quite right yet but I'll work on another.

This book has now come to an end,
Everything’s finished,
A message we send,
No matter the problem,
No matter the woe,
Whoever is troubling you,
Friend or foe,
Look at our stories,
Sung to a tune,
And remember the hobbits,
Upon a full moon.

Elfmaster XK · 03-22-2002, 06:04 AM

Okay, here's the poem, now i know iv'e missed people out but that is not intentional, i just couldn't go back through 23 pgs and couldn't remember everyone, so please write a verse for yourself, and if i've been mean to you or said something you don't like feel free to change it.

The Lords of the Rhymes
By Elfmaster XK

Life was once a boring thing
So dull and full of s**t
The we found the Lord of the Rings
Needed songs and words to fit

There’s StrawberryIceCream first
She started with a song
And Rosie-lass was afraid to write
For fear of getting it all wrong

Eowyn 144, she didn’t want to have a go
She thinks she hasn’t got the knack
But if she knew what some others would do
She’d soon see, talent, she doesn’t lack

Eruviel, our noble note taker
Had initiative to write it all up
She kindly voulenteered herself
To compile a short song book

Our newest writer, Dwarven Sen
Has left us for two weeks
She’s taken up a pad and pen
To compose quietly away from freaks (it rhymed, anything better?)

Then Cirdan, he’s the man
He takes time to get his songs done
But all the effort he puts in
Make his songs set to stun

Finally, Arathorn stands out above us all
The master for all time
Cirdan, our god of titles
Names him ‘Lord of the Sometime Rhyme.’

Also i wrote another song at midnight last nite. Not that good due to tiredness and lack of sleep over this week...here goes.

‘Can You Feel The Love Tonight’ by Elton John
‘Can You Find The Ring Tonight’ by Elfmaster XK

[Frodo]
Now I’m getting closer
To the centre of the fray
Where the always watching eye
Can’t be turned away.

[Sauron]
Some kind of trouble’s brewing
I feel the ring here or there
And I know that Baggins is near
I just can’t see where.

[Frodo]
And can you find the ring tonight?
As I’m climbing ever higher
I’ll take it to the cracks of doom
And cast it to the fire.

Your Orcs will never find us
Though we are right here
When they search because of Sam
They see a warrior to fear

[Sauron]
There’s a time an reason
Why it’s you who brings the ring
Soon you’ll drop it right into my palm
And I’ll crush your precious king!

[Frodo]
And can you find the ring tonight?
No, it’s laid to rest
Sauron and the ring are defeated
This is the end of the quest.

Now Sauron’s gone away tonight
All is laid to rest
Evil is gone and a new age begins
But I’ll retreat into the West.

StrawberryIcecream · 03-22-2002, 06:18 AM

Ok. I have made a front cover but i'n not sure how to send it to you guys. Can anyone tell me?!

Elfmaster XK · 03-22-2002, 06:24 AM

Write an email and attach the file by clicking the attach button and search for the place you saved the file (i.e. C:/...) as you would when searching for a file.

StrawberryIcecream · 03-22-2002, 06:37 AM

ok. Thankyou. Anyone wanna se it. It aint got any characters on cos i couldnt out em all on. I also couldnt remember what title we chose so remind me some time and i'll change it.

Want any characters on it? I wasnt sure cos the poems are kore of a book thing arent they than a movie thing.

StrawberryIcecream · 03-22-2002, 06:47 AM

Nope. Damn. It wont attach.

Arathorn · 03-22-2002, 09:42 AM

Very nice, guys! It's almost sad; It feels almost like the first time I finished ROTK...

Eruviel Greenleaf · 03-22-2002, 12:33 PM

StrawberryIcecream, if you are able to attatch it ever, do send it to me! Now I have to go add all the new songs and poems--they are much needed in the songbook! I like your poem, Elfmaster!

So, I guess I'll add the rest tonight. Problem is, we keep thinking of new songs, so I don't think it will ever be complete!

Elfmaster XK · 03-22-2002, 12:49 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Eruviel Greenleaf
StrawberryIcecream, if you are able to attatch it ever, do send it to me! Now I have to go add all the new songs and poems--they are much needed in the songbook! I like your poem, Elfmaster! So, I guess I'll add the rest tonight. Problem is, we keep thinking of new songs, so I don't think it will ever be complete!

Thanks Eruviel, i thought we should all have a verse since the book is by us, so why not make it about us too??

Finrod Felagund · 03-22-2002, 03:06 PM

Can you imagine the kind of LoTR song could be written to the tune of American Pie ? I'm gonna get right on it!!!!

(Weird Al did a Star Wars version so why not?)

Cirdan · 03-22-2002, 03:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Arathorn
Very nice, guys! It's almost sad; It feels almost like the first time I finished ROTK...

me too. You know, it reminds me of that Green Day song "Good Riddance (Time of your Life)". Hey, if I change the lyrics a bit... *walks away mumbling to self*

eowyn144 · 03-22-2002, 03:22 PM

oooh!do some greenday cirdan!definetly do some greenday!
elfmaster-great poem!i love the way i get a verse even though i haven't written anything.i'm working on some but still wouldn't have guts to post them. am really bad,seriously.
aaaahh!why is entmoot suddenly pink?

Cirdan · 03-22-2002, 03:37 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by eowyn144
aaaahh!why is entmoot suddenly pink?

O good, I thought is was one of those pesky brain tumors. It must be for Easter. Hop, Hop, Hop... Hey, get away from me with the hammer and nails!!!

StrawberryIcecream · 03-22-2002, 03:51 PM

Or maybe it is honour of me! Strawberry ice cream!!!!!!!!

A girl can dream!

Glorious Glorfindel · 03-22-2002, 04:01 PM

okay, SOME pple at least will have seen empire records right?
well, if you ahve, then you will know what i am talking about when i say im rewriting sugar high by coyote shivers. he totally rocks, as does sugar(ina completely NON drug addict way, i just happen to like chocolate)
but to be honest, i don't actually see the need in bagging that son,g as hardly n e one will have heard of it n e way. im gonna shut up now.

03-22-2002, 04:19 AM	#221
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	You want another copy, Arathorn? Well, this one does have more songs on it. . .whatever you want! I'll send it now, it is a convenient way of avoiding those nasty reports on birds that I have to do __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

03-22-2002, 04:48 AM	#222
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	and me!!!! Have you got a front cover yet? If you havent can I make one? I'm off school all today and I'm bored so i have the spare time! __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-22-2002, 04:52 AM	#223
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	Do make a cover, StrawberryIcecream! That would be cool Lucky you, being off school. . .we almost had a snow day today--er, yesterday. But then the snow melted! __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

03-22-2002, 05:23 AM	#224
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	oh how I long for snow Shall the cover be A4 or A5 and any idea what to put on it? Characters from films? __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there. Last edited by StrawberryIcecream : 03-22-2002 at 05:24 AM.

03-22-2002, 05:44 AM	#225
Elfmaster XK Possessive Villain Fancier Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: On my ship, riding the waves YARR! Posts: 2,008	Can i have a copy please? A cover would be good, but comeone needs to credit all the original songs don't they? I'm gonna write a poem about all the writers now, perhaps to begin the book... __________________ My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies, Fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly - my friends. XK

03-22-2002, 06:03 AM	#226
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	How is this for a conclusion? I know its not quite right yet but I'll work on another. This book has now come to an end, Everything’s finished, A message we send, No matter the problem, No matter the woe, Whoever is troubling you, Friend or foe, Look at our stories, Sung to a tune, And remember the hobbits, Upon a full moon. __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-22-2002, 06:04 AM	#227
Elfmaster XK Possessive Villain Fancier Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: On my ship, riding the waves YARR! Posts: 2,008	Okay, here's the poem, now i know iv'e missed people out but that is not intentional, i just couldn't go back through 23 pgs and couldn't remember everyone, so please write a verse for yourself, and if i've been mean to you or said something you don't like feel free to change it. The Lords of the Rhymes By Elfmaster XK Life was once a boring thing So dull and full of s**t The we found the Lord of the Rings Needed songs and words to fit There’s StrawberryIceCream first She started with a song And Rosie-lass was afraid to write For fear of getting it all wrong Eowyn 144, she didn’t want to have a go She thinks she hasn’t got the knack But if she knew what some others would do She’d soon see, talent, she doesn’t lack Eruviel, our noble note taker Had initiative to write it all up She kindly voulenteered herself To compile a short song book Our newest writer, Dwarven Sen Has left us for two weeks She’s taken up a pad and pen To compose quietly away from freaks (it rhymed, anything better?) Then Cirdan, he’s the man He takes time to get his songs done But all the effort he puts in Make his songs set to stun Finally, Arathorn stands out above us all The master for all time Cirdan, our god of titles Names him ‘Lord of the Sometime Rhyme.’ Also i wrote another song at midnight last nite. Not that good due to tiredness and lack of sleep over this week...here goes. ‘Can You Feel The Love Tonight’ by Elton John ‘Can You Find The Ring Tonight’ by Elfmaster XK [Frodo] Now I’m getting closer To the centre of the fray Where the always watching eye Can’t be turned away. [Sauron] Some kind of trouble’s brewing I feel the ring here or there And I know that Baggins is near I just can’t see where. [Frodo] And can you find the ring tonight? As I’m climbing ever higher I’ll take it to the cracks of doom And cast it to the fire. Your Orcs will never find us Though we are right here When they search because of Sam They see a warrior to fear [Sauron] There’s a time an reason Why it’s you who brings the ring Soon you’ll drop it right into my palm And I’ll crush your precious king! [Frodo] And can you find the ring tonight? No, it’s laid to rest Sauron and the ring are defeated This is the end of the quest. Now Sauron’s gone away tonight All is laid to rest Evil is gone and a new age begins But I’ll retreat into the West. __________________ My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies, Fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly - my friends. XK

03-22-2002, 06:18 AM	#228
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	Ok. I have made a front cover but i'n not sure how to send it to you guys. Can anyone tell me?! __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-22-2002, 06:24 AM	#229
Elfmaster XK Possessive Villain Fancier Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: On my ship, riding the waves YARR! Posts: 2,008	Write an email and attach the file by clicking the attach button and search for the place you saved the file (i.e. C:/...) as you would when searching for a file. __________________ My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies, Fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly - my friends. XK

03-22-2002, 06:37 AM	#230
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	ok. Thankyou. Anyone wanna se it. It aint got any characters on cos i couldnt out em all on. I also couldnt remember what title we chose so remind me some time and i'll change it. Want any characters on it? I wasnt sure cos the poems are kore of a book thing arent they than a movie thing. __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-22-2002, 06:47 AM	#231
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	Nope. Damn. It wont attach. __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there. Last edited by StrawberryIcecream : 03-22-2002 at 06:51 AM.

03-22-2002, 09:42 AM	#232
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Very nice, guys! It's almost sad; It feels almost like the first time I finished ROTK... __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures...

03-22-2002, 12:33 PM	#233
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	StrawberryIcecream, if you are able to attatch it ever, do send it to me! Now I have to go add all the new songs and poems--they are much needed in the songbook! I like your poem, Elfmaster! So, I guess I'll add the rest tonight. Problem is, we keep thinking of new songs, so I don't think it will ever be complete! __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

03-22-2002, 03:06 PM	#235
Finrod Felagund King of Nargothrond Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Canada! eh? Posts: 2,002	Can you imagine the kind of LoTR song could be written to the tune of American Pie ? I'm gonna get right on it!!!! (Weird Al did a Star Wars version so why not?) __________________ "THE EAGLES ARE COMING, THE EAGLES ARE COMING......AND A MOTH!!!!!"

03-22-2002, 03:22 PM	#237
eowyn144 Elven Warrior Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 435	oooh!do some greenday cirdan!definetly do some greenday! elfmaster-great poem!i love the way i get a verse even though i haven't written anything.i'm working on some but still wouldn't have guts to post them. am really bad,seriously. aaaahh!why is entmoot suddenly pink? __________________ If you want to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe

03-22-2002, 03:51 PM	#239
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	Or maybe it is honour of me! Strawberry ice cream!!!!!!!! A girl can dream! __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-22-2002, 04:01 PM	#240
Glorious Glorfindel Elven Warrior Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: im too doped up to remember Posts: 371	okay, SOME pple at least will have seen empire records right? well, if you ahve, then you will know what i am talking about when i say im rewriting sugar high by coyote shivers. he totally rocks, as does sugar(ina completely NON drug addict way, i just happen to like chocolate) but to be honest, i don't actually see the need in bagging that son,g as hardly n e one will have heard of it n e way. im gonna shut up now. __________________ A Elbereth Gilthonial Silivren penna miriel o menal aglar elenath Na-chaered palan-diriel o galadhremmin ennorath Fanuilos, le linnathon nef aear, si nef aearon! add a drop of lavander to milk. leave town with an orange and pretend you're laughing at it.

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