I made a song!!!!! - Page 10

Elfmaster XK · 03-20-2002, 01:50 PM

Okay here goes!! I before said i felf unable to do this so her i go!!

[ Originally ‘The show must go on’ by Queen]

(‘The Quest must go on’ By Elfmaster XK)

Empty space – why have I come here?
Abandoned places – There’s so much to fear
On and on, does anybody know we’re already here?
Another pitfall, another mountain looms
In the land of Mordor, to the cracks of doom
Hold the climb, does anybody want to take the ring for me?

The Quest must go on
The Quest must go on
Inside my heart is quaking
My courage may be shaking
But my mind still says ‘on!’

Whatever happens I left it all to fate,
I followed Gollum, knowing of his hate
On and on, does anybody know; will we get there?
I guess I’m nearing, the ring is heavy now
I’ll soon be turning to see the mountain now
Outside the dawn is braking
But inside the dark I’m aching just to see…

But the Quest must go on
The Quest must go on
Inside my heart is pained
My courage may have waned
But I still must go on

My soul is tormented by this evil thing
I want to destroy it, but just can’t deny the ring
It wants to live – my friends

The Quest must go on
The Quest must go on
I face Orodruin
I’m never giving in
On – with the Quest
I’ll top the hill, I’ll shoot to kill
I have to find the will to carry on
On with the Quest
The Quest must go on…go on…go on…

*Smiles happily* Not quite up to Arathorns standard but still…it’s a first try.

Cirdan · 03-20-2002, 02:22 PM

Excellent!!! (insert standing ovation w/ lighters

) Elfmaster XK Well crafted! Your first entry is a most impressive one.

Arathorn · 03-20-2002, 02:25 PM

*enters in a shroud*
"Hmmm...the Force is strong in this one. Midiclorians are unusually high."

Elfmaster XK · 03-20-2002, 02:36 PM

Thanks guys! *wipes away a tear* I value such praise from the masters of tolkienating songs.
I also love star wars! I'm making an attempt at another Queen song, but i found a little poem which was quite cute and changed it to this...

Glint ye! Shines ye! Even so,
The ring may bring both joy and woe.
It twists your mind with fear and strife
And betrays you now to save it's life.

I feel this thread needs poetry too, and that is what i;'m here to do.

eowyn144 · 03-20-2002, 02:37 PM

that was great elfmaster xk!better than i could do! (which is currently nothing)
Eruviel Greenleaf-can i have a copy of Lord of the Ryhmes or whatever its called now?they are all so great!my favourite so far is still Your Ring (as in Your Song-Elton John) by the glorious arathorn.i find it really hard to sing the original to that without slipping into your version!

Rosie-Lass · 03-20-2002, 04:48 PM

Plz could you send me a copy of the song book, Eruviel???

Pretty please!

I am, afterall, the Great Motivator!

Rosie-Lass · 03-20-2002, 04:50 PM

Sorry about this.

I need to tell the whole Moot, that it is not just I that like U2, Eowyn, GG and Strawberry also like them, which is an amendment to the original message that said that some of my friends dislike them.

I actually meant by that a boy I know called Ed, who has it on his computer SCREENSAVER that U2 and Wheatus suck, which are, perhaps not so incidentally, 2 bands that I like.

Happy now, you three???

Shelob · 03-20-2002, 05:02 PM

I can't resist!
I have to try this. Here goes.

Yesterday by Frodo Baggins.
(Yestarday by The Beatles)

Yestarday, all my troubles seemed so far away
Now the Ring is here and it cannot stay
Oh, I believe in yesterday

Suddenly, I bore the Ring to Rivendale via Bree
The Ring Wraith persuit shadowed over me
Oh, yesterday came suddenly

Why Bilbo took that Ring, I don't know, he wouldn't say
I must now feel it's weight, now I long for yesterday

Yesterday, I just smoked weed and had lazy days
Now, to Mordor I must travel away
I knew no Sauron yesterday

Why, Bilbo took that Ring, I don't know, he wouldn't say
I must now feel it's weight, now I long for yesterday

Yesterday, I had fun at Bilbo's big Birthday
I didn't know the Ring prolonged his age
Oh, I believe in yesterday, Mm

Elfmaster XK · 03-20-2002, 05:04 PM

Can you send me a copy of the songbook too? Please?

Rosie-Lass · 03-20-2002, 05:06 PM

Cool song, Shelob.

Shelob · 03-20-2002, 05:07 PM

I've just noticed that my spelling was a bit didgy there, oops

Arathorn · 03-20-2002, 05:10 PM

Please do some more shelob. BTW, you can edit your posts, I think, when you level up.<makes thumbs up sign>

StrawberryIcecream · 03-20-2002, 05:14 PM

I'm sad and depressed so i feel a really sad song coming on. Don't say I didnt warn you.

Elfmaster XK · 03-20-2002, 05:15 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Shelob
I've just noticed that my spelling was a bit didgy there, oops

You think you cant spell? You should see my attempts at wordss!! Cool song BTW, the beatles make such great songs to tolkienify don't they!!!

Arathorn · 03-20-2002, 05:16 PM

Shelob · 03-20-2002, 05:28 PM

Thanks for the replies everybody. I really like this thread, I've been reading it for weeks but not had the guts to post a song.
Using Beatles songs are handy 'cause everyone know's them, and they're great (big Beatles fan).
I'm working on a new song now but I'm not sure how long it'll take me.

Shelob · 03-20-2002, 06:42 PM

Ok, I've finished.
He, he. This is fun!

Smells Like My Precious by Gollum
(Smells Like Teen Spirit by Nirvana)

Load up on fish, I'll help new friends
It's fun to trick and to pretend
I'll get it back, just wait and see
I have a plan and they're trusting me

It's mine, it's mine, it's mine, all mine

*chorus* With the lights out it's more dangerous
Here I am now
Where's my Precious
I feel desperate but they are cautious
Here I am now
Where's my Precious
I was Smeagol
Now I'm Gollum
It was my present
But I lost it
Yeeeaaah.

I will lead them through marshes dead
Nasty Hobbitses, easily lead
For I have formed a cleaver plan
We'll take a secret way onto Mordor land

It's mine, it's mine, it's mine, all mine

*chorus*

So, on we go
To Shelob's lair
Gollum, I guess it makes me smile.
I wants that Ring
It was hard to find
The Hobbits will die, oh well, nevermind.

It's mine, it's mine, it's mine, all mine.

*chorus*

Arathorn · 03-20-2002, 07:15 PM

Wooohhoohh! Smells Like FISSSHHHH!!!

Let's see if we haves something else to DISHHH!!

This is probably what Cirdan should sing to win back Galadriel.

Sweet Elven Child
(Sweet Child of Mine by Guns'n Roses)

She's got a phial that it seems to me
Reminds me of Starlit memories
When everything
Was as fresh as the 1st Age sky
Now and then when I give her chase
She takes me away to that
elven place
And if I fare too long
I'd probably look back and sigh

Oh
Sweet elven child
Oh
Sweet elf o' mine

She's got eyes like the noldor wise
As if they ever age
I hate to look into those eyes
And see her family's rage
Her hair reminds me
Of a golden place
Where as a child I'd hide
And play with the hunters
As they stray
And I quickly pass them by

Oh
Sweet elven child
Oh
Sweet elf o' mine

Where is the West
Where is the West now
Where is the West
Sweet elven child

Shelob · 03-20-2002, 07:29 PM

Rock on Arathorn!!!

Cirdan · 03-20-2002, 08:32 PM

*croak* *croak* Could I just lip sync, Arathorn? Excellent tue, once again. Loved the Nirana, too, Shelob (keep those pincers to yourself

03-20-2002, 01:50 PM	#181
Elfmaster XK Possessive Villain Fancier Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: On my ship, riding the waves YARR! Posts: 2,008	Okay here goes!! I before said i felf unable to do this so her i go!! [ Originally ‘The show must go on’ by Queen] (‘The Quest must go on’ By Elfmaster XK) Empty space – why have I come here? Abandoned places – There’s so much to fear On and on, does anybody know we’re already here? Another pitfall, another mountain looms In the land of Mordor, to the cracks of doom Hold the climb, does anybody want to take the ring for me? The Quest must go on The Quest must go on Inside my heart is quaking My courage may be shaking But my mind still says ‘on!’ Whatever happens I left it all to fate, I followed Gollum, knowing of his hate On and on, does anybody know; will we get there? I guess I’m nearing, the ring is heavy now I’ll soon be turning to see the mountain now Outside the dawn is braking But inside the dark I’m aching just to see… But the Quest must go on The Quest must go on Inside my heart is pained My courage may have waned But I still must go on My soul is tormented by this evil thing I want to destroy it, but just can’t deny the ring It wants to live – my friends The Quest must go on The Quest must go on I face Orodruin I’m never giving in On – with the Quest I’ll top the hill, I’ll shoot to kill I have to find the will to carry on On with the Quest The Quest must go on…go on…go on… Smiles happily Not quite up to Arathorns standard but still…it’s a first try. __________________ My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies, Fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly - my friends. XK

03-20-2002, 02:22 PM	#182
Cirdan Elf Lord of the Grey Havens Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: somewhere else Posts: 2,381	Excellent!!! (insert standing ovation w/ lighters ) Elfmaster XK Well crafted! Your first entry is a most impressive one. __________________ There exists a limit to the force even ther most powerful may apply without destroying themselves. Judging this limit is the true artistry of government. Misuse of power is the fatal sin. The law cannot be a tool of vengance, never a hostage, nor a fortification against the martyrs it has created. You cannot threaten any individual and escape the consequences. -Muad'dib on Law The Stilgar Commentary

03-20-2002, 02:25 PM	#183
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	enters in a shroud "Hmmm...the Force is strong in this one. Midiclorians are unusually high." __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 03-20-2002 at 02:32 PM.

03-20-2002, 02:36 PM	#184
Elfmaster XK Possessive Villain Fancier Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: On my ship, riding the waves YARR! Posts: 2,008	Thanks guys! wipes away a tear I value such praise from the masters of tolkienating songs. I also love star wars! I'm making an attempt at another Queen song, but i found a little poem which was quite cute and changed it to this... Glint ye! Shines ye! Even so, The ring may bring both joy and woe. It twists your mind with fear and strife And betrays you now to save it's life. I feel this thread needs poetry too, and that is what i;'m here to do. __________________ My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies, Fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly - my friends. XK

03-20-2002, 02:37 PM	#185
eowyn144 Elven Warrior Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 435	that was great elfmaster xk!better than i could do! (which is currently nothing) Eruviel Greenleaf-can i have a copy of Lord of the Ryhmes or whatever its called now?they are all so great!my favourite so far is still Your Ring (as in Your Song-Elton John) by the glorious arathorn.i find it really hard to sing the original to that without slipping into your version! __________________ If you want to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe

03-20-2002, 04:48 PM	#186
Rosie-Lass Elven Warrior Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: A dizzy state between insanity and sleep! Posts: 173	Plz could you send me a copy of the song book, Eruviel??? Pretty please! I am, afterall, the Great Motivator! __________________ Yoda Lives!

03-20-2002, 04:50 PM	#187
Rosie-Lass Elven Warrior Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: A dizzy state between insanity and sleep! Posts: 173	Sorry about this. I need to tell the whole Moot, that it is not just I that like U2, Eowyn, GG and Strawberry also like them, which is an amendment to the original message that said that some of my friends dislike them. I actually meant by that a boy I know called Ed, who has it on his computer SCREENSAVER that U2 and Wheatus suck, which are, perhaps not so incidentally, 2 bands that I like. Happy now, you three??? __________________ Yoda Lives!

03-20-2002, 05:02 PM	#188
Shelob Sapling Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Cirith Ungol Posts: 8	I can't resist! I have to try this. Here goes. Yesterday by Frodo Baggins. (Yestarday by The Beatles) Yestarday, all my troubles seemed so far away Now the Ring is here and it cannot stay Oh, I believe in yesterday Suddenly, I bore the Ring to Rivendale via Bree The Ring Wraith persuit shadowed over me Oh, yesterday came suddenly Why Bilbo took that Ring, I don't know, he wouldn't say I must now feel it's weight, now I long for yesterday Yesterday, I just smoked weed and had lazy days Now, to Mordor I must travel away I knew no Sauron yesterday Why, Bilbo took that Ring, I don't know, he wouldn't say I must now feel it's weight, now I long for yesterday Yesterday, I had fun at Bilbo's big Birthday I didn't know the Ring prolonged his age Oh, I believe in yesterday, Mm

03-20-2002, 05:04 PM	#189
Elfmaster XK Possessive Villain Fancier Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: On my ship, riding the waves YARR! Posts: 2,008	Can you send me a copy of the songbook too? Please? __________________ My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies, Fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly - my friends. XK

03-20-2002, 05:06 PM	#190
Rosie-Lass Elven Warrior Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: A dizzy state between insanity and sleep! Posts: 173	Cool song, Shelob. __________________ Yoda Lives!

03-20-2002, 05:07 PM	#191
Shelob Sapling Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Cirith Ungol Posts: 8	I've just noticed that my spelling was a bit didgy there, oops

03-20-2002, 05:10 PM	#192
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Please do some more shelob. BTW, you can edit your posts, I think, when you level up.<makes thumbs up sign> __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures...

03-20-2002, 05:14 PM	#193
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	I'm sad and depressed so i feel a really sad song coming on. Don't say I didnt warn you. __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

03-20-2002, 05:16 PM	#195
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	<the anticipation mounts> __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures...

03-20-2002, 05:28 PM	#196
Shelob Sapling Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Cirith Ungol Posts: 8	Thanks for the replies everybody. I really like this thread, I've been reading it for weeks but not had the guts to post a song. Using Beatles songs are handy 'cause everyone know's them, and they're great (big Beatles fan). I'm working on a new song now but I'm not sure how long it'll take me.

03-20-2002, 06:42 PM	#197
Shelob Sapling Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Cirith Ungol Posts: 8	Ok, I've finished. He, he. This is fun! Smells Like My Precious by Gollum (Smells Like Teen Spirit by Nirvana) Load up on fish, I'll help new friends It's fun to trick and to pretend I'll get it back, just wait and see I have a plan and they're trusting me It's mine, it's mine, it's mine, all mine chorus With the lights out it's more dangerous Here I am now Where's my Precious I feel desperate but they are cautious Here I am now Where's my Precious I was Smeagol Now I'm Gollum It was my present But I lost it Yeeeaaah. I will lead them through marshes dead Nasty Hobbitses, easily lead For I have formed a cleaver plan We'll take a secret way onto Mordor land It's mine, it's mine, it's mine, all mine chorus So, on we go To Shelob's lair Gollum, I guess it makes me smile. I wants that Ring It was hard to find The Hobbits will die, oh well, nevermind. It's mine, it's mine, it's mine, all mine. chorus

03-20-2002, 07:15 PM	#198
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Wooohhoohh! Smells Like FISSSHHHH!!! Let's see if we haves something else to DISHHH!! This is probably what Cirdan should sing to win back Galadriel. Sweet Elven Child (Sweet Child of Mine by Guns'n Roses) She's got a phial that it seems to me Reminds me of Starlit memories When everything Was as fresh as the 1st Age sky Now and then when I give her chase She takes me away to that elven place And if I fare too long I'd probably look back and sigh Oh Sweet elven child Oh Sweet elf o' mine She's got eyes like the noldor wise As if they ever age I hate to look into those eyes And see her family's rage Her hair reminds me Of a golden place Where as a child I'd hide And play with the hunters As they stray And I quickly pass them by Oh Sweet elven child Oh Sweet elf o' mine Where is the West Where is the West now Where is the West Sweet elven child __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 03-21-2002 at 02:02 AM.

03-20-2002, 07:29 PM	#199
Shelob Sapling Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Cirith Ungol Posts: 8	Rock on Arathorn!!!

03-20-2002, 08:32 PM	#200
Cirdan Elf Lord of the Grey Havens Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: somewhere else Posts: 2,381	croak croak Could I just lip sync, Arathorn? Excellent tue, once again. Loved the Nirana, too, Shelob (keep those pincers to yourself __________________ There exists a limit to the force even ther most powerful may apply without destroying themselves. Judging this limit is the true artistry of government. Misuse of power is the fatal sin. The law cannot be a tool of vengance, never a hostage, nor a fortification against the martyrs it has created. You cannot threaten any individual and escape the consequences. -Muad'dib on Law The Stilgar Commentary

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