I made a song!!!!!

[Dwarven Sen]

This is my first try so I hope its OK. Its a version of Bon Jovi's Its My Life:

This aint a song for the broken hearted
Or a silent prayer for ring departed
I aint gonna be just an elf in the crowd
Youll hear the halfling vioce if I shout it out loud

Its my ring for now and ever
Cos now Im gonna live forever
I just wanna keep it while I hide
(the ring is mine) My road is an open highway
with wraiths along the byway
I just wanna keep it while I hide
cos its my life

Now I'm involved with whats goin' down
For Merry and Bilbo so they aren't cut down
Tomorrow'll be harder make no mistake
The road to mordor is what we're gonna have to take

Its my ring for now and ever
Cos now I'm gonna live forever
I just wanna keep it while I hide
(the ring is mine) the road is an open highway
with balrogs on the byway
Ijust wanna keep it while I hide
cos the ring is mine

The others stand tall while i hide back
dont bend or break into a body stack
its my ring for now and ever
cos now i'm gonna live forever
i just wanna keep it while i hide
(the ring is mine) my road is an open highway
with the eye at every doorway
i just wanna keep it while i hide
(the ring is mine) my road is an open highway
if we could just find a dryway
I just wanna keep it while i hide
cos its my ring


what do you think i also have

I see a little silouhetto on the wall
Its a wraith! Its a wraith!
Its time to run away now

and by the way Dido has made a song called my lovers gone and it just reminds me of elvves ?!?!