Some Poems

[EllethValatari]

Originally Posted by Nerdanel

wow, it's quiet in here.. o.O



change

and yes, it is true
that you managed to pierce
deep, deep under my thick skin
- that's where you placed your drug

but of course, it is known
that it was bound to happen
even to me, although
I always thought I was something else

love, do you see
that i'm the one with more
to lose? that you changed me
from a martyr to a creator?

i never wished to be holy.

so tell me, love,
how does one distinguish
humble development
from brainwashing?

29.09.2010


(i'm not sure it's finished yet...)

Indeed it is...I just spent about 30 min. reading back through all of these poems-I'm suddenly inspired to go write myself-such good poetry!

Nerdanel, the poem is quite good, especially the 3rd stanza. I like how it ends. It leaves you thinking.