Rules Are Meant to Be Broken Discussion

Acalewia · 09-06-2007, 08:39 PM

I'm going to remind you from the start this is a work in progress. I'd like to hear your feedback on this

Nautipus · 09-12-2007, 08:29 AM

Whoa.... I dont really know what's going on, but that's good

This looks pretty good, I wasnt going to post until you extended the story a little bit, but I went ahead and did anyway. I really am curious about Ryman, and the queen also has me asking questions. Please keep writing!

Acalewia · 09-12-2007, 05:22 PM

Thanks, Nautipus. This is acually the first story I wrote in my current style. Hopefully, it'll be better than Dragonmaiden.

I'll give warning now. Later posts in this story will contain some language

Nautipus · 09-12-2007, 10:03 PM

Well, so far your current style has me hooked.

These story seems to be moving at an almost frenzied pace, and under normal circumstances I would say slow down, but it flows so well right now that it would be unnecessary.
Thanks for the warning, by the way.

Acalewia · 09-16-2007, 04:29 PM

You're welcome. Sorry about just now getting a new post in. Been working double shifts at work.

Acalewia · 09-17-2007, 12:31 PM

I might not get another post in until maybe next wed or thursday

Nautipus · 09-17-2007, 02:47 PM

Once again, thanks for the update.

Nautipus · 09-18-2007, 09:29 PM

That queen is getting feisty, but rightly so. Ryman seems like a forward, inconsiderate jerk. she shoulda kicked him in the n**s. jerk

Tuinor · 09-18-2007, 11:51 PM

Fight! Fight! Fight!

Are Claudious and Ryman gonna square off? Cause if they are, I'm personally cheering for Ryman (Sorry, Nautipus, man, some people drink coke, ya know?)

.

I seriously enjoy his character. He seems to be the misfit of the trio, which kinda earns my pity, while at the same time his most recent interractions with the queen have been (for me) quite hilarious, which automatically makes him fun to read about.

Funny characters like him add a little something to a story, you know? Like seasoning. Only, it makes you laugh instead of say "Mmmm!"

My stories could use more of those.

It'd be a HUGE twist if he turned out to be the bad dude.

. . . I hope that doesn't happen, though.

Acalewia · 09-19-2007, 04:40 PM

This is funny. I have gotten two different responses to Ryman

I was able to sneak some time in today for a post. Enjoy

Nautipus · 09-19-2007, 05:35 PM

Like I said before, the fast pace of this story works very well. But you must tell me, who the h*** is Endura?(!) That's for your benefit, Tuinor.
It was kind of sad about Ryman's son though

And Claudious

Acalewia, quit it!!!!

Keep up the good work.

Tuinor · 09-19-2007, 06:47 PM

. . . I'm never, ever suggesting plot twists to you again!

Just kidding 'bout that.

You probably planned this from the beginning. I've kinda got a knack for guessing at plots.

I feel sorry for Ryman; having his son murdered in front of him.

I didn't see that one coming.

I hope he doesn't die, though if he ever meets the queen again, he probably will.

Still, I would like to see him get some chance at redemption (and, possibly, revenge

)

Acalewia · 09-20-2007, 11:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nautipus

Acalewia, quit it!!!!

*looks sweet and innocent* Quit what?

Nautipus · 09-20-2007, 11:30 AM

Dont you toy with me, dont you do it!

Acalewia · 09-20-2007, 11:33 AM

what are the chances of getting hit with the Rule twice in a row?

Nautipus · 09-20-2007, 11:41 AM

I think it depends on who you are and how your day's going...but that's just a guess.

Acalewia · 09-22-2007, 12:21 PM

Hahaha

Nautipus · 09-25-2007, 04:56 PM

That's RIGHT, hahaha

There oughta be ROFLMAO thrown in there for good measure!

Acalewia · 09-26-2007, 06:57 PM

Roflmao

Nautipus · 09-26-2007, 07:26 PM

ThankYOU!

Yay Claudious!!! This last post made me so happy that I started giggling, then I saw your little comment on the discussion for sky blue and tried to hold it in.

*snorts with gleeful joy and good ol' comic license*

Well, that's good enough.

Great story so far, I hope we learn more about Endura though...
I have an idea of what Endura might be.... but I'll keep it to myself.

09-06-2007, 08:39 PM	#1
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Rules Are Meant to Be Broken Discussion I'm going to remind you from the start this is a work in progress. I'd like to hear your feedback on this __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

09-12-2007, 08:29 AM	#2
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	Whoa.... I dont really know what's going on, but that's good This looks pretty good, I wasnt going to post until you extended the story a little bit, but I went ahead and did anyway. I really am curious about Ryman, and the queen also has me asking questions. Please keep writing! __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

09-12-2007, 05:22 PM	#3
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Thanks, Nautipus. This is acually the first story I wrote in my current style. Hopefully, it'll be better than Dragonmaiden. I'll give warning now. Later posts in this story will contain some language __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

09-12-2007, 10:03 PM	#4
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	Well, so far your current style has me hooked. These story seems to be moving at an almost frenzied pace, and under normal circumstances I would say slow down, but it flows so well right now that it would be unnecessary. Thanks for the warning, by the way. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

09-16-2007, 04:29 PM	#5
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	You're welcome. Sorry about just now getting a new post in. Been working double shifts at work. __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

09-17-2007, 12:31 PM	#6
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	I might not get another post in until maybe next wed or thursday __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

09-17-2007, 02:47 PM	#7
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	Once again, thanks for the update. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

09-18-2007, 09:29 PM	#8
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	That queen is getting feisty, but rightly so. Ryman seems like a forward, inconsiderate jerk. she shoulda kicked him in the ns. jerk __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies.** "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

09-18-2007, 11:51 PM	#9
Tuinor Elven Warrior Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Wandering in circles until they become triangles Posts: 292	Fight! Fight! Fight! Are Claudious and Ryman gonna square off? Cause if they are, I'm personally cheering for Ryman (Sorry, Nautipus, man, some people drink coke, ya know?) . I seriously enjoy his character. He seems to be the misfit of the trio, which kinda earns my pity, while at the same time his most recent interractions with the queen have been (for me) quite hilarious, which automatically makes him fun to read about. Funny characters like him add a little something to a story, you know? Like seasoning. Only, it makes you laugh instead of say "Mmmm!" My stories could use more of those. It'd be a HUGE twist if he turned out to be the bad dude. . . . I hope that doesn't happen, though.

09-19-2007, 04:40 PM	#10
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	This is funny. I have gotten two different responses to Ryman I was able to sneak some time in today for a post. Enjoy __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

09-19-2007, 05:35 PM	#11
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	Like I said before, the fast pace of this story works very well. But you must tell me, who the h* is Endura?(!) That's for your benefit, Tuinor. It was kind of sad about Ryman's son though And Claudious Acalewia, quit it!!!! Keep up the good work. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies.** "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

09-19-2007, 06:47 PM	#12
Tuinor Elven Warrior Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Wandering in circles until they become triangles Posts: 292	. . . I'm never, ever suggesting plot twists to you again! Just kidding 'bout that. You probably planned this from the beginning. I've kinda got a knack for guessing at plots. I feel sorry for Ryman; having his son murdered in front of him. I didn't see that one coming. I hope he doesn't die, though if he ever meets the queen again, he probably will. Still, I would like to see him get some chance at redemption (and, possibly, revenge )

09-20-2007, 11:30 AM	#14
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	Dont you toy with me, dont you do it! __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

09-20-2007, 11:33 AM	#15
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	what are the chances of getting hit with the Rule twice in a row? __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

09-20-2007, 11:41 AM	#16
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	I think it depends on who you are and how your day's going...but that's just a guess. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

09-22-2007, 12:21 PM	#17
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Hahaha __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera

09-25-2007, 04:56 PM	#18
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	That's RIGHT, hahaha There oughta be ROFLMAO thrown in there for good measure! __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

09-26-2007, 06:57 PM	#19
Acalewia Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In trouble. As usual. Posts: 4,674	Roflmao __________________ "Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. "Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera Last edited by Acalewia : 09-26-2007 at 07:00 PM.

09-26-2007, 07:26 PM	#20
Nautipus Kraken King Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Under the sea Posts: 2,714	ThankYOU! Yay Claudious!!! This last post made me so happy that I started giggling, then I saw your little comment on the discussion for sky blue and tried to hold it in. snorts with gleeful joy and good ol' comic license Well, that's good enough. Great story so far, I hope we learn more about Endura though... I have an idea of what Endura might be.... but I'll keep it to myself. __________________ Being the King of these Beings, This is my Child One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons One of the best Global Warming Messages out there

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