My Story: Chaos Ascendant

Rána Eressëa · 12-20-2003, 08:16 PM

I'd love some reviews on the story I'm working on. I've been trying to write it for ages, but only just recently had my Muse finally wake up and help me write it.

Summary
In Araemia, a civil war brews between natives and the Cimmerians who conquered 400 years ago. Theodoric, a foreign captive who lost it all because of King Emyr, wants revenge. With friends, rebels, and an ancient weapon on his side, he tries to get it.

You can find it here: http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1433661

12-20-2003, 08:16 PM	#1
Rána Eressëa The Rogue Elf Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 1,722	My Story: Chaos Ascendant I'd love some reviews on the story I'm working on. I've been trying to write it for ages, but only just recently had my Muse finally wake up and help me write it. Summary In Araemia, a civil war brews between natives and the Cimmerians who conquered 400 years ago. Theodoric, a foreign captive who lost it all because of King Emyr, wants revenge. With friends, rebels, and an ancient weapon on his side, he tries to get it. You can find it here: http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1433661

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