Would you read this story?

Mihara of Yeldar · 01-31-2002, 07:42 PM

Just wanna do a little back checking before I finish writing to see if it's worth my time...
In a time and world far from ours, the forces of evil are only kept from destroying the world by a powerful but tiny sect of magi known as they Shadow. But the Shadow are dying, and the chosen one prophised to lead them through the storm is a half-blood child raised in the darkness...
Okay, to be blunt, the story is about a mixed blood elf named Mihara from the Kingdom of Yeldar who is supposed to save the Shadow (red) magi and in turn the world. But she is an outcast among her own people, and the leader of the Evil knows her face and weaknesses.
Just wanna know, would anyone read it?

Arat-Falathion · 02-01-2002, 06:14 AM

It sounds interensting... I just might read it, yes

Bhaal Iyaden · 02-01-2002, 08:01 AM

Sounds great!

***Tessar*** · 02-02-2002, 04:49 PM

sounds interesting.

btu if I were you I wouldent call them "shadow" magi. makes them sound evil.

Araethirion · 02-02-2002, 09:34 PM

Sure!!! Sounds great, and they're called "Shadow" Magi ^_^ I love Shadows... in fact, 'Araethirion' means 'Shadow Eater'

Mihara of Yeldar · 02-04-2002, 06:51 PM

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Originally posted by Tesseract12
btu if I were you I wouldent call them "shadow" magi. makes them sound evil. [/B]

I'm calling them Shadow Magi because shadow is right in the middle of dark and light, and keeping the peace between darkness and light is their enitire purpose.

RosieCotton · 03-02-2002, 01:14 PM

What a creative idea! I'd love to read it. What the title?
~Rosie~

Carafin · 05-25-2002, 09:39 PM

That does sound interesting!!!

Laredith · 05-30-2002, 06:08 PM

It sounds great! I love books of that kind...alas! One more book in my "must read some time" list, and this one I can't read!

katya · 09-01-2002, 09:34 PM

this sounds like a great book. i would read it. i like the shadow name too. especially now that i know what it means. sweet!

Blackboar · 12-06-2002, 02:31 PM

You bet I would read it!
Sounds great!

Helix · 12-08-2002, 04:47 PM

Sounds kind of like Terry Brooks's "Elfstones of Shannara," which I'm about 100 pages into. It's an excellent plot, but Brooks isn't an outstanding author (he's not bad, and I've only read 2 of his other books, but he's not stellar).

eowyngirl14 · 12-23-2002, 12:59 AM

This book sounds really interesting. I would definetly read it. I love the shadow, half way between good and evil, light and dark idea! Are you going to write this story and try to publish it? I really hope you do, it sounds great!

Adrian Baggins · 12-26-2002, 06:10 PM

Sounds really great. you might think about making a serise about the girl Mihara and calling it OUTCAST and have this be the first boor called OUTCAST Mihara and the Shadows.

01-31-2002, 07:42 PM	#1
Mihara of Yeldar Sapling Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: South Yeldar, beneath Forest of Giants Posts: 12	Would you read this story? Just wanna do a little back checking before I finish writing to see if it's worth my time... In a time and world far from ours, the forces of evil are only kept from destroying the world by a powerful but tiny sect of magi known as they Shadow. But the Shadow are dying, and the chosen one prophised to lead them through the storm is a half-blood child raised in the darkness... Okay, to be blunt, the story is about a mixed blood elf named Mihara from the Kingdom of Yeldar who is supposed to save the Shadow (red) magi and in turn the world. But she is an outcast among her own people, and the leader of the Evil knows her face and weaknesses. Just wanna know, would anyone read it? __________________ "Sometimes, it's better just not to know what's going through a Shadow Mage's mind, because 1. you won't understand it, and 2. if you do, that means you have to be a sort of mage yourself, which is horrid, because then you have to wear those ugly red robes." I cannot fight a battle of the minds with someone who is unarmed.

02-01-2002, 06:14 AM	#2
Arat-Falathion A'mael Dalharen Eldarele Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Norway Posts: 707	It sounds interensting... I just might read it, yes __________________ Atharon, where heroes are born. A constantly evolving forum rpg created by Lief Erikson, Falathion and its players.

02-02-2002, 09:34 PM	#5
Araethirion Hobbit Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Mirkwood! Ok, ok... California. What's the difference? Errr... nevermind. Posts: 35	Sure!!! Sounds great, and they're called "Shadow" Magi ^_^ I love Shadows... in fact, 'Araethirion' means 'Shadow Eater' __________________ ~Araethirion FRODO LIVES!!

03-02-2002, 01:14 PM	#7
RosieCotton Elven Warrior Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Hobbiton...no wait.... Posts: 263	What a creative idea! I'd love to read it. What the title? ~Rosie~ __________________ Fortune rides like the Sun on high With the fox that makes the ravens fly Luck his sould, the lightning his eye He snatches the moons from out of the sky.

05-25-2002, 09:39 PM	#8
Carafin Elven Warrior Join Date: May 2002 Location: The warm (or West) coast of Canada Posts: 150	That does sound interesting!!! __________________ Elen sila lumenn' omentielvo; a star shines on the hour of our meeting, - LotR (FotR) four be the things I'd be better off without, love, curiousity, freckles, and doubt Queen Guinevere? ... Though all to ruin fell the world, And were dissolved and backward hurled, Unmade into the old abyss, Yet were its making good for this, The dusk, the dawn, the earth, the sea, That Luthien for a time shoud be ~ ~Beren: The Song of Parting

02-01-2002, 08:01 AM	#3
Bhaal Iyaden Sapling Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Dale-Lands Posts: 7	Sounds great!

02-02-2002, 04:49 PM	#4
*Tessar* Master and Wielder of the Cardboard Harp of Gondor Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: IM IN UR POSTZ, EDITIN' UR WURDZ Posts: 6,433	sounds interesting. btu if I were you I wouldent call them "shadow" magi. makes them sound evil.

05-30-2002, 06:08 PM	#9
Laredith Enting Join Date: May 2002 Location: Gondor...no seriously, I do. Posts: 64	It sounds great! I love books of that kind...alas! One more book in my "must read some time" list, and this one I can't read! __________________ "You're rum little creatures, you humans." --Bree, from HHB ohh...and by the way... FRODO LIVES!!!

09-01-2002, 09:34 PM	#10
katya Elven Maiden Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 3,309	this sounds like a great book. i would read it. i like the shadow name too. especially now that i know what it means. sweet!

12-06-2002, 02:31 PM	#11
Blackboar Legolas's beloved sister and Queen of the Wood Elves of Mirkwood Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Under the hill at Bag-end, Hobbiton the Shire Or Rivendell,I can't remember!!!!!!!!!! Posts: 1,086	You bet I would read it! Sounds great!

12-08-2002, 04:47 PM	#12
Helix Elven Warrior Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: School! Posts: 107	Sounds kind of like Terry Brooks's "Elfstones of Shannara," which I'm about 100 pages into. It's an excellent plot, but Brooks isn't an outstanding author (he's not bad, and I've only read 2 of his other books, but he's not stellar). __________________ Elen sila lumenn' omentielvo. -Elvish Greeting

12-23-2002, 12:59 AM	#13
eowyngirl14 i don't know what i am talking about either, so don't ask Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 1,353	This book sounds really interesting. I would definetly read it. I love the shadow, half way between good and evil, light and dark idea! Are you going to write this story and try to publish it? I really hope you do, it sounds great! __________________ 'The coming of dawn is ever the hope to the heart of men' -Aragorn 'Then I will die as one of them' -Aragorn TTT movie “They that can give up essential liberty to obtain a little safety deserve neither liberty nor safety” - Benjamin Franklin arms are made for hugging avatar from the avatar shop! made by Eowyn, Lady of Rohan

12-26-2002, 06:10 PM	#14
Adrian Baggins Frodo's lil sis HP LotR fan Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: in a tree reading Harry P. and LotR Posts: 585	Sounds really great. you might think about making a serise about the girl Mihara and calling it OUTCAST and have this be the first boor called OUTCAST Mihara and the Shadows. __________________ AB Adrian Baggins wizard, elf, mortal, hobbit Owner of the 3 unknown rings I LIKE HIEI!! LOOK AT MY AVITAR IF YOU DON'T KNOW WHO THAT IS!! H. Hysterically cold I. Insanely unhuman E. Effortlessly mocking I. Irresistabely hott "You're a team player, a save-the-day superhero pause I hate people like you." ~Hiei

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