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Old 04-18-2006, 07:07 AM   #1
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First Chapters

What will your first chapter be about?

Mine is going to be a dream about an ancester being attacked because she has been blamed for witchcraft.
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The axes hewed Forlong as he fought alone and unhorsed; and both Duilin of Morthond and his brother were trampled to death when they assailed the mumakil,leading their bowmen close to shoot at the eyes of the monsters. Neither Hirluin the fair would return to Pinnath Gelin, nor Grimbold to Grimslade, nor Halbarad to the northlands,dour-handed Ranger.

Those that would not return home, page830-831, The Battle of the Pelennor Fields, The Return of the King

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Old 04-18-2006, 01:12 PM   #2
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On one, My first chapter will be on one main character's awaking to the political problems of the time after meeting the other main character.

On the other, the mess one main character got into after a royal's death. (and no it wasn't by his hand)

that sounds like a great begining to a story, s8
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Old 04-18-2006, 01:43 PM   #3
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mine is three characters in the middle of their fortresses ruins reading the final passage from a tattered blood-stained book.
interesting i know
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Old 04-19-2006, 12:47 PM   #4
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On one, My first chapter will be on one main character's awaking to the political problems of the time after meeting the other main character.

On the other, the mess one main character got into after a royal's death. (and no it wasn't by his hand)

that sounds like a great begining to a story, s8
sounds great.

p.s.thanks
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The axes hewed Forlong as he fought alone and unhorsed; and both Duilin of Morthond and his brother were trampled to death when they assailed the mumakil,leading their bowmen close to shoot at the eyes of the monsters. Neither Hirluin the fair would return to Pinnath Gelin, nor Grimbold to Grimslade, nor Halbarad to the northlands,dour-handed Ranger.

Those that would not return home, page830-831, The Battle of the Pelennor Fields, The Return of the King
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Old 04-19-2006, 12:50 PM   #5
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mine is three characters in the middle of their fortresses ruins reading the final passage from a tattered blood-stained book.
interesting i know
I can't wait for the book to come out.
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The axes hewed Forlong as he fought alone and unhorsed; and both Duilin of Morthond and his brother were trampled to death when they assailed the mumakil,leading their bowmen close to shoot at the eyes of the monsters. Neither Hirluin the fair would return to Pinnath Gelin, nor Grimbold to Grimslade, nor Halbarad to the northlands,dour-handed Ranger.

Those that would not return home, page830-831, The Battle of the Pelennor Fields, The Return of the King
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Old 04-19-2006, 01:28 PM   #6
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mine is three characters in the middle of their fortresses ruins reading the final passage from a tattered blood-stained book.
interesting i know
*sits on the edge of her seat waiting for the book to be published*
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Old 04-19-2006, 07:31 PM   #7
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One of my first chapters deals with a jaded halfling running into a wandering dwarf...another one is about an attack on a jungle village...still another opens as the heros flee a mob of angry corsairs!
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Sounds like atharon
Sounds cool though, curub
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Old 04-24-2006, 12:10 PM   #9
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I can't wait for the book to come out.
its coming ...slowly but surely
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Old 04-24-2006, 12:12 PM   #10
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*sits on the edge of her seat waiting for the book to be published*
enthusiastic much lol..its coming
dont you hate the 90 sec rule? ( in a sing-song voice) i do
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The discussion about using LoTR elements in your own writing has been moved to its own thread here.
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Old 05-16-2006, 01:10 PM   #12
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so who else are writing the first chapters? anyone got another book in progress? i've only got 3 on the go but im sure you guys have more
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